Thread 1 Maaneet FF : 'GULLAM' (thread 2 pg 1)

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REDWINE

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Posted: 7 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh
superb start
maan is ghulam ??
why in this educated world he is abided by this ...
continue soon

This is a fictional story

Please read it with open mind

Don't compare this with real world

If you are uncomfortable with this concept please don't read further updates ...as this story is going to be more dark more uncomfortable for some people ...this was just a start

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REDWINE

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Posted: 7 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Mg13

Story is interesting ..
I really love the concept😳

Thank you

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Roopa_1

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Posted: 7 years ago

#63

Awesome...

Really great concept.. Maan is gulaam of mohinder Seems like geet is just like her dad...

Congrats for new story 👏

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REDWINE

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Posted: 7 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Roopa_1
Awesome...
Really great concept.. Maan is gulaam of mohinder Seems like geet is just like her dad...
Congrats for new story 👏

Thank you dear

Please check the first part too it's on page 4

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MsChanadlerBong

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Posted: 7 years ago

#65

This seems interesting. Never watched the show but looking forward to your story.

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Roopa_1

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Posted: 7 years ago

#66

Interesting .. Poor maan lost his parents at very small age.. Omg sanjay ... I think he is the one who killed maans parents and made it look like accident Wicked person ... Glad that dadi escaped with maan ... Feeling sad for maan ... He is working like a machine ... And what does it mean when dadi said ki khana miltha bhi nahin ??? Omg .. I think mohinder always make maan to do all his work without giving food.. Dadi is right ... Maan is educated ...he should escape ...

Cant wait for next part ...

Pls continue

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REDWINE

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Posted: 7 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Roopa_1
Interesting .. Poor maan lost his parents at very small age.. Omg sanjay ... I think he is the one who killed maans parents and made it look like accident Wicked person ... Glad that dadi escaped with maan ... Feeling sad for maan ... He is working like a machine ... And what does it mean when dadi said ki khana miltha bhi nahin ??? Omg .. I think mohinder always make maan to do all his work without giving food.. Dadi is right ... Maan is educated ...he should escape ...

Cant wait for next part ...

Pls continue

Thank you for your comment dear

How maan parents were killed that will going to be revealed in future update

Dadi just said ' waha khana bhi milta hai ya nhi' that was just her motherly instincts talking