Mortal Promises!#T5!*CH54&Note@Pg130,140[THREAD 6 opened]

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#601

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

yaar it's so easy ...yup I can do it
main bhi na easy chese ko complicated banati hoon
thnx

Glad that it has worked Sabina,,, 😃 Now happy indexing!!

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

#602

Originally posted by: WaveTeal

<font color="#009999">Glad that it has worked Sabina,,,😃Now happy indexing!!</font>

yup done with one story ...such irritating work 🥱

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Khushibloom

@Khushibloom

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#603

Wow beautiful update baby

Very well written , enjoyed reading it

Loooved Vicky , dev and maan's scene a lot ❤️

Mauke pe chauka maar rahe the dono

Finally maan had to summon her with her cute name 🤣

Really like geet and her child like antics

Can't get enough off them

Aur uske dialogues uff me toh fida Hoon unpe

All credit to our ipti 🤗

Liked maan's surprise

Toh finally mishty aur maan ka roka hai

Let's see Sam Kya karti hai

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Khushibloom

@Khushibloom

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#604

Amazing precap

So Naya twist ha

Maan ke hote kuch nahi hone Wala 😉

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Khushibloom

@Khushibloom

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#605

Thanks for the pm baby

Next update ka intezaar rahega 😃

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Khushibloom

@Khushibloom

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#606

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

yup done with one story ...such irritating work 🥱

Aww

All the best yaar 👍🏼

Sabse bada sar dard

U have to check each and every part now 😕

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gill123

@gill123

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#607

Wow finally Jasmeet going to get engaged nice update now waiting for samera reaction thanks for pm waiting for next part

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#608

Awesome update
Loved the bonding of three brothers
Loved their teasing
Geet's tantrums are amazing
Finely Maaneet ka roka ho raha hai
Poor Sameera she is soo sad

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#609

Sorry for late likes and comments!

Chap 51

Part 1

amazing pic ❤️

fabulous update! wonderfully written! Loved that Maan knew that Dev wanted to question him!

never expected Dev to directly confront Maan abt his status.

Liked how Maan handled Dev's questions! Omg Vicky is a foodie😆

Glad Maan was honest with Dev and reaveled that he is getting married to Geet! Maan proudly says he loves Geet!

Maan wanted to tell Dev something abt NT but disturbed! hope he gets an opportunity soon!

Dev happy seeing this teasing Maan!

Maan went to see Geet but his two bros follow! wow amazed that Maan knew that Dev was there! Vicky is hilarious! 🤣

omg love the part that he is also a jasoos like his dadi!

Geet wants Maan to talk lovingly but he can't as his bros are there! Maan tries 2 hint but Geet fails 2 read in between the lines!

Maan calls her jaan and they tease him! Geet embarrassed as she realises that Dev and Maan were there!

Adore the love and bond between the Khuranas brothers!

wonder what surprise has planned for Geet! 😃

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Tris

@astrisa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#610

Chapter 51 part 1@

Astounding image. So cute. Adorable.

Thank you so much for updating my favorite story. I wait for mp to be updated so much.

Astounding update, funny, entertaining part with brotherhood and geet's cuteness overloaded

Finally maan told everything to dev. He thought vicky is sleeping but the jasus little khurana was awake nd had been listening all.

I love this maan 2 d core. He is a man with decency, loyalty nd chivalry. The way he confessed to dev about his love for his little bird was so cute n heart melting.

The veg biryani scene is so funny he he

😆

Maan called his impish brothers as bandar nd his tantrum queen thought he called her monkey. Oh how much i love this maaneet nd their cute nok jhok. So much light hearted yet deep bonding they have.

Loved how she send biryani 2 maan. Nd more importantly how maan understands her care. That is so cute.

So they used to pass things amongst them like this? Childhood love is so beautifully shown. So pure.❤️