Mortal Promises!#T5!*CH54&Note@Pg130,140[THREAD 6 opened] - Page 59

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Posted: 7 years ago
Fabulous part. Loved reading Maan and Geet's moments together. Great that Dev and Vicky know about maaneet as they can offset anything Sam says about Dev and Geet. Was wondering why Sam didn't say anything till now, maybe she is waiting for right moment to spoil things. Thanks fro pm and waiting for next.
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Posted: 7 years ago
amazing update... maan told dev about his love for geet from a long time . both his younger brothers are in a teasing mode. geet is as usual unaware of all the happenings and pestering maan to pacify her from her false anger. maaneet are spending some romantic time... maan gave o surprise to her by announcing about their roka... maans parents also came for the function... what is sameera is going to do... eagerly waiting to know how maan is going to react to sameeras cheap side.. precap is little bit scary. who is that rajveer???
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb extra lengthy double bonanza
Super glad to read these stupendously awesome updates
Maan's surprise to Geet was so romantic and touching
He rememberes all her likings from childhood
Dev n Vicky enjoyed leg pulling at Maan's expensr, liked his tiniest younger brother ;)

N then the main surprise, Roka
Sameera is.planning something ???

Precap makes.me.curious to know what will happen next
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
oh so dev come to know about maans love GEET
both vicky and dev are eqially surprised and tease maan
roka is a big surprise for geet
sameera cheap character
what she plan know
thanx for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: anu5

@Chapter 48 part1

Articulate writing dear
Loved it!!❤️
The word Maan from Geet's mouth brought Sameera's covetous self for Maan and her her jaundiced self for Geet burning her down whilst Geet maintained her modest deportment. Maan was missing his wifey and sent a cute message with a video but Geet was contemplating over the waitress at background and was cribbing over it. Sameera as totally lost her soundness of her mind. She still had audacity and effrontery to text Maan inspite of knowing that Maan isn't interested in her. In accordance with Sameera's prespective she thinks and believe s that Maan was fond of her and gave her hopes to cherish her dreams with him but something happened that Maan shifted his affection from her to Geet. Something definitely happened that inspite of seeing Maan's likeliness and love for Geet, Sameera isn't able to let go off Maan and is still living her life amid mistaken impression; fool's paradise. Loved Maan's retailation to Sameera's text message pushing her into sphere of enviousness and indignant. So, Dadima and Rano are planning something for Maaneet guess their engagement surprise and Sameera overheard their plans. Hope she doesn't ruin the evening. Loved Maan and Geet's cute and sweet banter. Last time when Maan was drunk he confessed his feelings for Sameera thinking her to be as Geet and Sameera took his words seriously and started to build her dream castle's in air. Loved Maaneet lovely words for each other filled with love and warmth.
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Aww baby...Hope you are doing fine...Thank you so much for your wonderful comment...

Miss you...

I am glad that you loved the update!!😳

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: anu5

@Chapter 48 Part2

Awesome and chatty update
Loved it!! Eloquently penned 👍🏼
Geet was missing Maan and felt void in her heart and along with it she realised that she desired him. She couldn't fathom her own passionate self and her ardent love for Maan. She couldn't express her brazen self to Maan that she thought that Maan will miss her more and will be restless and distracted from his work. Loved their pure and sinless love for each other. Maaneet keep each other above thyself and prioritize their partners feelings and value their relationship than thyself. It's always US in their relationship rather than I or me, myself. Loved their adorable chatty banter message. Pinky's random talks regarding amorous shade of love made Geet to open up about her thoughts and quandary. Geet was clueless regarding her and Maan's intimacy and the way to approach things with Maan. Geet was feeling guilty aftermath hearing Pinky's words and was naive with her approach and thoughts that she feels she couldn't fulfill his wifey duty whilst she loves him with all her existence. Apropos to her age and naive self she couldn't understand the depth of intimacy husband and wife share. Maan loves Geet beyond and immensely that their relationship and love can't be bounded within the circles of intimacy. Their love for each other is beyond words and limits yet Geet felt thyself remorseful with new things coming into light.
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So happy to see your wonderful comments Anu...

Thanks a lot for this outstanding feedback..😳

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ANTER93

sorry i was late in reading the update but all were awesome and really looking forward to the next one after reading the precap...👏

Hi, Glad that you caught up..
The next chappy is up, waiting for your response! 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: anu5

@Chapter 49

Awesome update dear
Loved it!! Beautifully penned.
With time Geet is turning mature and responsible. She wants to understand her desirous feelings for Maan and Maan's passionate self for her. Geet was lost in reliving her memories Pinky's utterance broke Geet's reminiscing session. Pinky's words about modernized love story and theories between couple made Geet to put froth her thoughts and knowledge owing to her naive self and was all into commitment thoughts. Geet just shared her inhibitions with pinky quoting it as her friends issue whilst Pinky unknown to Geet's dilemma was all lost in sharing her prespective pushing Geet into sphere of guilt. Pinky and Geet has different prespective regarding this subject thus couldnt bring thyself to understand others prespective but yupe Geet was trying to grasp Pinky's words to an extent. Pinky's distracted Geet's mood with Maan's name and turned atmosphere light. Geet was back to her lively and chirpy self. Liked Pinky and Geet's frienshfri and lovely rapoora they share. Loved their deju Vu moment. Geet was so lost in seeing Maan in front of her that she couldn't differentiate between reality and dream. Geet melted thyself in Maan's live love and warmth. She found her Oasis in desert amid her yearning for Maan's presence, their lovey dovey moments, his love and warmth self for her. She found her thirst seeing Maan in front of her and being in his arms added to their togetherness.
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I am glad that you loved their DEja Vu moments...

The words you spoke beautifully about Maaneet's togetherness is so beautifully said and are true... Thanks baby!! ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: anu5

Fantastic gifs dear ❤️

Apt and sublime.👍🏼😊

Glad that you liked the GIFs..
Thanks baby!! 😃🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Niharika.Nair

Maan is in full on romantic mode, I hope Geet's insecurities will not cause any trouble because there is certain someone looking for an opportunity


Geet's insecurity would rather bring them close...

The certain someone - They have to work a lot more to get to Maan!!! 😆

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