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PART 1

Once upon a time far away in the land where there was music of the birds in the air, the snow mist diving through the moutains amidst the clouds and the green trees dancing happily, there stood a village full of prosperity and life.

In a far corner of the village, there lived a family of potters who worked their magic with clay. The father was the head potter who ran things, the mother was the provider who helped him make the finest clay for his work and they had a young, lovely, fiesty and beautiful daughter named Geet who was the most adorable and sweetest child that ever lived. Together they were happy and content like no other family.

"Geeet, honey where are you?', her mother went around the woods a few miles away from the house looking for her. She was getting worried sick when suddenly out of nowhere appeared Geet riding her white mare, both covered in dirt and looking all ragged up.

"Look mother, what I found near the swamp, it is black mud. Would you let me make black pots with it?", her eyes glowed with excitement as she dismounted the little horse and showed up her bag of dirt.

Her mother ruffled up her almond brown hair lovingly, "My Love... you can make anything you want in a few years. But first you should learn to work your hands with the clay. It would grow on you and you can make anything with whatever you find!"

Geet smiled happily, "For real mother? anything I want?"

"Yes", she kissed on her forehead "but you must never stray into the woods like that dear child!"

Little Geet nodded crossing her fingers in the back.

Geet was now a blossoming young teen of fifteen. She learned her hands with the pots and was on the pursuit of getting the black clay she found near the swamp.

Her mare was grown up too snorting and keeping her company in the dark. She was about to finish and pack her bags when a bright glow filled the entire region and Geet shrinked closing her eyes. When she opened her eyes again, the bright light dimmed back into the village to the direction of her home.

"Come on girl, something's up in the village", she called for her horse. She mounted her white mare and was on her way back when she saw a batallion of soldiers riding their black stallions riding towards the woods past her.

"I wonder what is wrong", she whispered and in the darkness she saw them jet black eyes for the first time in her life riding ferociously on his stallion charging towards the woods. He was the leader, the crown prince she realised. He didn't pay any attention to her, neither did he look at her but it was the first time Geet was witnessing the royalty and something fluttered inside her tender heart.

When Geet returned back, she saw her world turn upside down. Her home and everything in it was gone burned down to ashes. She dropped her bag and ran into the ruins calling for her loved ones, "Father...Mother...where are you?"

"Geet...child...is that you?", came the feeble voice of her mother from among the ruins.

Geet ran towards her and kneeled down to take her head in her lap, "Oh mother, you are hurt badly..I shall fetch the healer"

Her mother stopped her with an angelic smile. "You will do no such thing Geet."

Geet was broken and she asked in between her sobs, "But...what happened mother? How did this happen? Where is father"

She saw tears running down her mother's cheek which had drops of blood dried up at the chin.

"Your father...he is gone! The explosion... it took everything away!!"

"Explosion? Is that what the bright light was?", she inquired as she sniffed.

"ummhmm", her mother whimpered. "The royal batallion was riding. An oil barrel slipped by accident I guess..Next thing I knew was fire and destruction everywhere. Your father was closest to the barrel trying to move it away before it caused damage.."

"Oh...mother..how can I bear this?", cried Geet her heart out.

"Sushh...now...my Love. Listen to me and you listen carefully...I (whimpers in pain) have always stopped you from your adventures. But tonight I am glad you were away. Go on kid, go on with your adventure but always remember to look out for yourself and be kind to others. Never do anything that your heart refuses to." , with a sigh her mother breathed her last leaving her shattered, broken and scarred for life.

After resting them in their graves, Geet set out on the journey of her life to the woods, but she had one goal in her mind. She vowed to make the royalty pay for whatever they had done to her! The prince she remembered his eyes so vividly! She vowed to herself to make those eyes feel all the pain that she felt on that night. It was her mission, her goal.

PART 2

"I have told you before. The guards should never have let him out of sight! It is only two months to coronation. The prince cannot go on like this! He is not a boy anymore, he is a young man. He will be twenty eight come this fall!"

A worried Savitri Devi paced upon and down the palace balcony as the prince's confidante and chief minister Aditya stood like a sorry figure in front of her.

"I know Queen Regent! But you know the prince. No one can stop him if he made his decision!", remarked the nervous minister.

"Well, it's time he stopped making these reckless decisions of disappearance. Announce a royal ball and tell everyone that the prince is to choose his bride. Set out invitations to each and every house of the kingdom : royalty or otherwise alike. When the news reaches my beloved grandson Maan, he will come back to me himself! And this time I wont let him run away. It's time he chose his bride and accepted his responsibilities."

Soon the news of the royal ball reached every nook and corner of the kingdom including the lonely castle far and deep in the woods where the witch Sunahri lived. Her hair was gold, her eyes were green, her lips the pink of the lotus and heart as gentle as a dove. Sunahri made her way to the bedrooom of her beloved adopted daugther who grew to be a beautiful maiden of twnety five. It was by fate she found the tired girl and her horse exhausted by the journey after the loss of her birth parents. Sunhari raised the girl as her own. She had the most beautiful almond eyes which had a vigorous hunger in them, she realised soon.

Geet was skilled in anything she learned. She trained in weapons, combat, painting but her heart always lied in pottery. She made not just pottery but anything : beautiful sculptures of valiant soldiers, longing maidens as such.

Sunahri knew about Geet's goals. She understood where Geet was coming from but she always wished well for the child. Being the witch, Sunahri knew what Geet's fate would be. She had prepared for it all her life and now it was time. And so, she wished to sent Geet to her destiny to the royal ball of the prince.

"Geet, it is time. They have called for the royal ball", she waited at the door for her reaction.

Wearing a satin sky blue gown with a floral tiara and ear rings, Geet was the most beautiful maiden Sunahri ever saw.

"You mean it is time for my justice?", her eyes beamed at the thought.

"Geet, don't assume things before you get to know anyone child!", pleaded Sunahri.

"What is there to know? Look at them kings and queens living in their palaces. They ruthlessly demolished my whole world and look at you. They exiled you for they feared your powers might be bad omen to the people. These people only know to crush the lives of others. It is time someone gave them a taste of their own medicine."

Sunahri sighed. It wasn't the first time they were having this conversation. But Geet was young and fierce. She couldn't see whatever Sunahri was trying to imply. She decided to leave Geet to her fate and prepared her for the journey.

PART 3

In the woods one always need to be alert. Geet petted her mare as they stopped on the bank of the river for quick refreshments when she heard a rumble among the bushes. She took her bow and arrow and tip toed to the direction of the noise. She was about to release the noose when she heard a growl and a whimper.

"Is that a man?", she whispered to herself and moved closer to get a clear view.

The wild boar was trying to attack the man with blood dripping from its horns. It had soemhow managed to injure the young man on his knee and now had him at his mercy on the floor. The man wasn't giving up. Geet saw his strong muscular hands trying to hold off the boar. He wont be able to hold for long, no matter how strong he was, she realised. Geet aimed her arrow again, this time her eyes grew sharp and pointed it right to the head of the boar and struck it down.

The boar fell on the man who was stunned by the unexpected help.

In the background of the setting Sun he saw this beautiful maiden walking towards him like a savior, the balm to his wounds.

"Are you alright?" she asked hesitantly as she looked around how to move the boar.

Her eyes fell on his muscles as he lifted the weight of the boar off him. The twinkle in her eyes was natural and the blush out of sheer feminine shyness.

"Thank you, young maiden! You saved my life", the young man stood up and bowed in front of her.

Geet did her courtsey, "I am Geet"

His eyes seemed so familiar to her. Like she had met him before, but Geet could not remember where.

"Maan", he said with the most charming smile that she had ever seen.

"What brings such a beautiful maiden as you in these woods."

Geet shrugged and took a long breath, "Ohhh I am headed to the capital village. There is this festival.."

"ahaa, what a coincidence! I'm headed that way too. Going to visit my grandmother actually. We have some business to finish. Are you going for the royal ball?", Maan was rather eager about the last question.

Geet chuckled, "umm..well, lets just say I have some unfinished business there as well."

Maan rubbed his hands looking around, "My horse ran away. Poor guy, got startled by the wild boar"

Without thinking Geet replied, "You can ride with me if you want to. We are headed to the same place anyway"

Maan's face lit up with joy, "Yes, I..I would love that indeed"

They both shifted on their feet smiling and blushing at the awkward silence.

Geet frowned looking at his knee. "We need to clean you up and dress that wound."

Maan looked around, "It's going to be dark soon. We should camp somewhere safe and ride at the first light tomorrow I say"

Geet nodded in agreement. Once she dressed his wound on the knee they looked around and spotted the highest tree around the woods with as much girth as its length. It was indeed a home tree covered with soft moss.

Maan got up to the top of a branch and remarked, "This must make a soft bed if not warm"

Geet smiled from the branch right below it,"Well you can't get it all at once in the woods."

Around midnight Geet opened her eyes hearing a thud and a feeling of warmth on her.

She found him cuddling right behind her and sat upright, "What the hell do you think you are doing?"

"Ssshhh...hush now... I would rather share a bed with you than a snake"

Geet repeated confused, "A snake?"

Maan held her chin and made her look upwards. The snake rolled up itself comfortably on the branch right on top of them.

She snuggled closer to him as a reflex reaction.

He whispered in her ear softly as his firm hands encircled her waist, "Don't move. Just stay still and sleep. It wont even know we are here."

Together they slept warm and cozy in the soft moss bed of the tree as the leaves rustled softly in the night breeze. In the first light of dawn Maan and Geet resumed their journey and reached the stone bridge where they had to part their ways.

"So..I guess this is it.", he said awkwardly.

Geet sighed, "Yeah. We both have to be somewhere else doing the things we are supposed to do.."

Maan caressed her gentle locks, "I wish..."

"What?", she asked with that innocent glow in her eyes.

He smiled, "Tell me you mysterious maiden, if you are done with your business, will you come by this bridge and wait for me?"

Geet shook her head smiling, "I...I don't know if that would be possible. It could take longer...days..months...years may be...or I could finish it in a matter of hours. I have no idea"

Maan looked far away as he replied, "Even I don't know how long it would take...But I promise I will be here waiting for you to return. You can always find me here for you."

Geet leaned towards him and placed a gentle kiss on his cheek. She rode her mare and disappeared on the long pathway as small as a tiny dot just like the way she appeared into his life.

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PART 4

"Dadima, what is the meaning of all this?", argued Maan Singh Khurana at the office room of his grandmother, the Regent Queen.

"My dear grandson, you know I'm getting old. What is the harm if I expect you to take off the burden of responsibilities from my shoulder?"

"I'm not yet sure dadima". There was pain in his voice. One that she came to recognise very clearly ever since that night.

"Maan! What ever happened was not your fault. You need to stop blaming yourself for the things happening around you."

"It is nothing but the truth dadima! I could never trust or see myself as a responsibe king!" he hund his head down in guilt.

"You were only a boy of eighteen. You would not have know!", she tried to reason.

Maan shook his head in defeat.

"Maan, promise me you wont run away from this ball, for my sake. If you are not ready for coronation two months from now, our family would lose the right to throne! For centuries Khuranas have carried the royal throne with grace and honour. Do not let it fall into the wrong hands just because you doubt yourself."

Maan looked surprised, "What are you taking about?"

"My term as Regent will be expired in two months irrespective of whether you choose to be the king or not. The next in line will take the throne. Time is of essence Maan. You need to make a choice! I have faith that finding the right partner will bring you a step closer to your destiny."

"We can't possibly know what destiny has in store for us", Maan said distant and cold.

"But we can always have hope. I want you to have that hope and belief Maan!", dadima assured her.

Maan kept his hand on her shoulder reassuringly, "Don't worry dadima. I will go to this royal ball for your sake. I may not have my hopes but I can't let you down or take your hopes away."

Dadi smiled happily as he left, "I am sure Maan, this evening you are going to meet someone so amazing that she will change your whole life"

It was the evening of the royal ball and the entire capital village was buzzing with excitement. There were princesses from far away land, Duchesses, Baroness from many eminent families and then there were commoners too from various part of the kingdom. The village was filled with beautiful maidens who came to seek their Prince Charming. The maiden who wins his heart will be next queen when the prince completes his coronation at last.

Geet looked at the enormous and magnificent palace before ascending the stairs. Dressed in a satin majenta princess ball gown with tiny golden stones at the sequins, she was the perfect picture of beauty, elegance and grace just like any fairy tale princess. Only hidden behind her gown was a pointy ice dagger resting in its hilt which she herself carved out from the Ice fountain in Sunahri's garden. Determined to demand her justice by stabbing the crown prince by her ice dagger, Geet ascended the steps strongly with vigour and agility.

Once inside the palace, she walked around looking at the grandeur of the place. The people there looked so happy and cheerful that it suffocated Geet. Well, not for long she thought to herself.

Maan was dancing with a sweet princess of a friendly neighbourly kingdom who kept singing his praises in an attempt to please him. He was starting to get bored and was thinking of polite ways to make an excuse when his eyes fell on a maiden so fair and graceful that his heart immediately yearned for her. She felt so familiar even though he couldn't see her face as she was standing with her back facing him. He prayed for it to be her and when she turned, it was as if a dream come true for Maan. He didn't realise when he peeled off the young princess and walked towards her like the gallant prince he was.

When he tapped on her shoulder and she turned back Geet was filled with joy to see him again.

"What a pleasure to find you here?", she exclaimed as he kissed her land and led to the dance floor where other noble men and women were dancing.

"Pleasure is indeed mine!", he said with that charming smile of his.

She started dancing with him as the merry tune played along. They joined the row of young men and women and tapped their feet along with the group. Geet kept looking here and there to spot the prince. She wasn't sure which one of these gentlemen was him and with Maan around her, she couldn't focus on her task.

As he made her spin with his finger holding her Maan noticed her attention wavering elsewhere.

"I'm sorry, are you expecting someone else?", he inquired.

"Oh noo no...I was just looking. This is the first time I have been around here."

Maan smiled at her naive reply. "Fear not maiden. You saved my life. I think I owe you one."

She kept her hand on his shoulder and swayed as his hands went around her slim waist.

"Is that why you are dancing with me, because you owe me?"

Geet noticed a few women among the crowd of the audience watching them and pointing fingers at her.

"Of course not. I'm dancing with you because I..", he paused thinking about what he was about to say.

"What?", she asked looking at his eyes questioningly.

"Because didn't I promise you that I will always find you", his playfulness was back and Geet noticed more people looking at them.

The music shifted into a soft romantic melody with celtic undertones. The lighting was dimmed with the spotlight on them. Everyone moved away as they watched them dance in tune with each other as one soul and two bodies.

"Maan", she called out softly.

"hmmm?"

"People are looking at us"

"Do you want to get away?", he whispered in a husky voice which made her feel enchanted.

The musical was now reaching a crescendo and it came to an end with a high note gliding on to the base as if marking the end of a concert.

The crowd clapped at the romantic dance and by the time the lights were back on Maan was running away from the crowd with Geet beside him.

On her way Geet heard a little girl shout, "Mamma look, the prince found his princess!!"

When Geet turned she found the little girl pointing at her. Geet stared at Maan in shock and awe, fear and wonder at the same time. The black eyes! It was him! It was him all that time!!

PART 5

Maan led her into the beautiful royal garden. It was a pleasant sight to the sore eyes. The one with beautiful colourful flowers and fruits of various kinds that was enough to captivate your eyes, the soft grass which tickled your feet like a fluffly cushion. But even those comforting pleasures could not sooth Geet who was now in a dilemma. It was easier when you believed the enemy was a soul-less ruthless beast. But when you get to know them, when you succumb to their charms, it was never easy.

"Geet, here, come and sit here", he pointed her to sit beneath a tree next to him which was much alike to the one where they took shelter on their way.

She sat next to him and said it out loud as if for herself to hear, "YOU, are the prince!"

Her hand went to the hidden pocket where the dagger was, her fingers almost brushing the hilt.

When she saw him smile, it was angelic, "aaah now you know!"

She could sense the gloom in his voice.

"You don't seem to be happy with that idea?", she asked.

"I don't know..I..I'm not sure if I would ever make a good king", he told her, his eyes distant now.

"Why would you say that?", wondered Geet her hand toying with the hilt still not pulling it out. She came here with a single goal. Now was not the time to falter.

Maan looked at the moon in the sky and then his eyes wandered far beyond the bushes and trees, far beyond the palace.

"I was provided with an opportunity to prove how valiant I was, years ago when I was but a boy!"

"Did you fail?", she asked her hold on the hilt gripping.

"No no...I won.", his tone was melancholic.

"You are not happy about the victory prince?", her hands caressed his tensed shoulders.

"I made an error of judgement! It cost me heavily..."

"What happened?", Geet was curious to know.

"The dacoits were looting the grains and livestock. Father wanted me to stay back. But he didn't return even after a long time. So I went in search of him. My men and I we rode fast and high passing village after village to the woods. We were nearing the woods when the look outs of the dacoits spotted us and sent a fire arrow towards our oil barrel. It all happened so quick! I didn't have time to think. If the barrel was left on the cart, the explosion would have been bigger and the whole village would have burned. I was trying to rescue everyone. I ordered the soldier to throw the one barrel that was lit away..I..I didn't saw him..."

Geet knew what he was talking about. It was the night of the explosion. How could she forget?

"Who?", she asked tears welling up her eyes.

""The man. He was coming with a pot of water I guess to put down the fire but it was too late. The barrel was thrown and it blasted right at the man's hand. His home, the woman everything was destroyed. I couldn't stop and help him! The dacoits had already had their trails! If I stayed they would have killed my father!"

Geet raised the next question gritting her teeth, "So you chose to rescue your father instead of that man or his family?"

"Like I said, it all happened quickly. I thought the damage was already done there. At least my father had a better chance! I didn't know better. But none of those excuses would make up for it. I know that now. I should have stayed back and helped."

Geet taunted the tone of which was oblivious to Maan, "At least you saved your father!"

He shook his head in pain, "I didn't! He was hurt badly. We lost him..on our way back! "

He shut his eyes tightly and Geet could see the drop of tear trickling down his cheek. "I wish every day of my life to go back to that night and do things differently. Had I helped that man, father would have been alive. I would have been a better person, a worthy prince! But I am nothing! I am reckless and careless. I live in the fear that shall I be a king ever, how many people would lose their lives because of my hasty actions!"

Geet was hyperventillating looking at this broken man. She believed all her life that he crushed her life and was not even aware of it. But tonight, she realised that he was living in far more pain and hurt than she had ever been, carrying all that guilt, pain and shame piled up inside his heart.

How could she kill a man who was already torturing himself with such regret and grief?

Maan got up and walked towards the flowering red rose. Geet followed suit fighting her own dilemma.

"You, Geet. You stopped and saved me!"

"That's different", she found herself say.

"No, it isn't. You are worthy of a title to rule. I am trapped here because I can't let my dadima's hopes shatter by not accepting the crown. But with you beside, I believe I can rule with reason and wisdom. I want you to be my queen and guide me always! Will you marry me and be my princess Geet?"

It was all too much for Geet. Here she was battling the decision whether or not to kill him and he was asking her to be his queen! To show him the right path!

Her mother's voice rung in her ears, "Never do anything that your heart refuses to."

But her heart was being a traitor here. It was falling for this man whom she was supposed to kill. Her heart was telling her to be with him, to guide him so that no one else would feel the pain that she did. To be his reason and judgement. It conflicted her mind. She was here to kill him! That was supposed to be her justice!!

She never expected to hear his side of the story.

"I'm sorry..I can't", she mumbled.

"You can't?', he asked confused.

She picked the dagger and threw it at his feet. "I...I can't kill you..How could I? I wanted to punish you for my parents' death but you have been punishing yourself all these years!"

Maan looked at her dumbstruck. Realisation dawned on him. She was the potter's daughter!

She wiped her tears and said in a strong voice, "I forgive you! But I think you should be able to forgive yourself and believe in yourself"

With that Geet ran away leaving behind the prince Maan who was chasing after her.

Maan searched for her everywhere all night raiding every house in the village but Geet was no where to be found.

When he returned defeated back to his palace dadima who now felt sorry for him caressed his cheeks lovingly, "I think you should make peace with the fact that you are not going to find her"

Maan looked at his dadi his eyes beaming up.

"At least you tried son", she reassured.

"No, guess I didn't try hard enough yet!"

He ran to the stables and took his stallion and rode hard to the end of the village where the stone bridge was. There in the backdrop of the rising sun and falling mist sat her, Geet, the maiden who was the most beautiful of all, her eys red tired of crying and deprived of sleep. Yet she looked just as pretty to him as he first met her.

"I told you, I will always find you!"

Startled she turned around to find him, her Prince Charming.

"You found me!", she ran towards him.

"Now and always", said Maan lovingly.

"I want you by my side Geet. Will you do me the honours?"

"But I tried to kill you!", she looked surprised

"You didn't though. Doesn't really count now.. About my question...what is your decision Geet?"

She nodded her head in agreement smiling all the time.

He lifted her in the air with joy and then they shared their first ever true love's kiss.

In a month, Geet married Maan and became his wife. The next month he was coronated as the King and together they ruled with wise judgement and reason for the welfare of the people and lived happily ever after.

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Edited by priya_21 - 7 years ago
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She was born for him but he never acknowledged...and when he finally realised it's too late...every journey doesn't get a happy ending, every Happy ending doesn't get a happily ever after...still we have to go through this journey as it's destiny who fixed it for us...this is not story about geet who from her birth only know one person as her life partner Maan.When girls at her age dream for her prince charming...she used to dream about maan...this is story of maan who from childhood ignored geet and her love and when he finally understand it's worth...her worth it's too late...

From childhood they had grown up together till one day maan had to leave abroad for further study...few years later geet too went pune for further study and also to forget maan and move on...

geet was 4 yr junior than maan...after 10 yr of separation finally it was the day when the Prince of khurana is going to come back in his palace...both Khurana and Handa's are nabour and family friends...for maan Handa house is his second home and from childhood he have spent most of the time here with geet only...so for both Handa and khuranas it was a big day...the day they will welcome their prince back...

it was near 6 in the evening...all the handas and khuranas gathered in airport to give Maan a grand welcome...after few minutes of impatient wait finally they saw their prince running out towards them...




Maan's dad hugged him happily "how are you son?"

Maan "perfect dad...hi mom kaise ho ap...Rano mom how are you?mohi pa you are looking more handsome than ever...and hugged them one by one"

when maan left for further study he was 16 now when he is back he look more handsome than ever...

one by one he meet with anni his little sis...Dev his big bro...Naintara his beloved sweet bhabhi and brij his best friend... after meeting everyone when it comes to brij he didn't get the same warmth like every time they used to meet...maan choose to ignore that cold vibes between them as somewhere he knows the reason too...after meeting with everyone his eye's start searching for her...

Brij "kise dhund rahe ho maan?"

Maan looking at brij "geet nehi dikh rahi brij?"

Brij "wo pune me Hain do din baad ayegi"

Maan confused "lekin anni ne to mujhe btaya uski college 2 din pahle hi khatam ho gaya hain"

Mr.khurana "uski dost ki behen ki shaadi thi maan to wo attain krne k 2 din baad ayegi"

Maan again asked "usko pata hain na aj main wapas ane wala hu?"

Brij rudely replied this time "haan pata hain...to Kya hua tu koi PM Hain jo tujhe welcome kr ne usko ana parega...chal ghar chalte hain sham ko party hain tere welcome ki"

Maan monologue " geet ko pata tha main wapas a raha hu fir bhi wo nehi ayi?"

Flashback

Maan was out in a school tour with his friends for 4 days...geet was very upset the day he left and tried to call him too but maan being maan never try to recive those calls or even call back her...he was too busy with his own life to think about anyone else ...the day he cameback geet had her best friend birthday to attain but in excitement to welcome back maam she skipped her best friend birthday too and arrange a party for him with the help of his and her siblings...she wanted to surprise maam but the response she got was not the one she expected

Maan irritated " geet main char din k liye bahar gaya tha and uske laut ne ki party?ab tum bari ho rahi ho pls stop this stupity of yours...samajh nehi ata tumhe sb log itna saar pr ku chara k rakhe Hain... pls now I need sleep...bht tired hu main sone ja raha hu...tum ne party arrange kiya hain na ab tum hi enjoy kro..." geet was disappointed but maan does not care about her emotions and went to his room too catch sleep

Flashback end

Brij "maan chalega ya wohi pe khara rahna hain"

that night maan attain party arrenged by their family but without geet he not able to enjoy it much still he was there not to upset his family members...

It was near mid night when the party got over he went to his room sitting beside his open balcony he start too think what went wrong...geet was never like this for her he is her first priority...yeah it's true he never acknowledged her presence bcs he was too busy with his own life...yeah it's true that he was not bother to call her or used to ignore her constant calls too but that doesn't mean she will stop calling him...but that's exactly what she did...after his constant ignorance one fine day she stopped calling him and out of his arrogance he doesn't bother to call her too...and from then there was no contact between them...

Next morning at dining table

all khurana and Handa's having breakfast together when maan's dad words caught his attention...

Mr.khurana "Mohindar aj subah mere dost Kulbhushan Mehra ka phone aya tha...kal uske bete veer aur uski wife geet se mile shaadi k function me...unhe to ek hi br me geet pasand a gayi...geet ko apne ghar ki bahu banana chahtey Hain...bht hi accha family Hain unka aur humere contraction k sare supply wohi se to mostly atey hain...acha family kya bolta hain baat chalayu?"

Vidhya "wow...waise to mujhe bht mann tha k geet meri bahu bane par ab wo dono bare ho chuke hai aur hume apna decision baccho pe thopne nehi chahiye..." said little sad

Maan suddenly said "geet se pucha apne usko apka so called veer pasand Hain ya nehi dad?"

Mr.khurana "to hum kaha Abhi haan bol rahe hain maan...geet ko ane de usko puch k tabhi haan krengey...agr hume apne bacho ki marzi ki parva nehi hoti to jb Samira ko tumne pasand kiya tha isiliye geet se shaadi nehi krna chahte the ye baat hume btaya humne tum se jabardasti nehi ki...warna ab tk tum dono ki engagement ho gayi hoti"

Rano "maan beta bura mat manna but tumre ya fir sayad humere ek galat faishla k wajase geet pe pahle hi bht kuch beet chuka Hain ab uske bina permission se hum kuch nehi krengey"

Brij "waise bhi maan humere geetu k liye sahi bhi nehi tha...dekhte Hain ye veer kaisa nikalta hai...lekin jitna sunna hain larka accha hain lagta hain"

Maan stand up to leave the table

Mohindar "arey maan khana to thik se kha le"

Maan "mera ho gaya Hain dad"

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It was the day geet finally coming back to Mumbai...all are getting ready to leave for airport when a black car stopped near Handa mansion...

all went outside to see who is the guest including Maan when a handsome boy came out from the car and opened the other side of the car door and there she is the princess of Handa's and khuranas are here...wearing a lovely pink kurti geet came out and hugged her mother...

Rano "arey geetu tu to a gayi...hum tujhe hi lene airport ja rahe the"

geet "maa wo veer bhi ap sb se milna chahta tha to hum pahle wale flight se hi a gaye the ap sbko surprise dene...accha kiya na?"

vidya "bht accha kiya geet" and vidhya give her a warm hug

geet meet with everyone one by one and introduced veer with everyone too...maan was standing last little far from everyone observing geet and veer silently...geet finally noticed him and stopped for a second and went towards him...bringing her hand forward she wished

geet "hi maan...kaise ho?"

Maan was again surprised by geet's action ...the geet he know would have hugged him highly by now seeing him after long and he would have scold her for her this irritating childish nature but here she is meeting him after 10 long yrs but their is no excitement in her face seeing him...she is meeting with him just like doing some formality...maan trying to smile wished her back

Maan "main thik hu geet but tum bht badal gayi ho"

geet with a small smile " geet Abhi bhi wohi geet hain jo pahle thi maan bus usne kuch bato ko achi tarah se samajh liya hain...geet to main ab bhi wohi hu bus wo tumhari irritating si pagal larki ab nehi rahi...jisse tumhe chirr tha...to ye badlao acche k liye hi hua na maan?"

Maan was about to reply when they heard another voice

veer "hi and you are Maan right?...khurana uncle k bete"

Maan "hi veer...tum mujhe kaise jante ho?"

veer "waise to geet ne ap k bare me jada kuch btaya nehi lekin fir bhi I know about you...wo actually tumhare papa and mere papa friends hain.. ..to ye accha waqt Hain hum bhi ab friends ban jaye...(looking at geet) what say geet?"(and he wink at her)

Geet "bilkul...ap ander bhi Jana Hain ya yaha pe hi sare baat krna hain?"

veer "haan ofcourse after you madam"

Geet went inside followed by veer...a clear irritation can be seen on maan's face although he himself doesn't know the reason

Rano to Vidhya "geet aur veer kafi ghul mil gaye Hain ek dusre se...lagta hain geet shaadi k liye maan jayegi"

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Geet in her room

taking a pic of young maan in hand

Geet "to maan Singh khurana pahle se jada smart and good-looking ho gaye Hain...(then with a sad face) I know maan tum apne jhali geet ko miss kr rahe ho...lekin kahi na kahi tumhe hi us jhali geet se sbse jada problem tha...lo maan geet ne tumhe azad kiya...main tumhse chahe kitna bhi pyar kru...apne pyar ko tumhare zindegi par kabhi bojh nehi banne dungi...to Kya Hua agr humere parents ko lagta tha hum dono ek dusre k liye bane hain...to Kya Hua agr bachpan se Maine sirf ek hi insan se pyar kiya hai aur sayad sare zindegi krungi...mera pyar meri takat hain maan aur wo aise hi humesha mere dil me rahega...usko main kabhi tumhare zindegi ka bojh banne nehi dungi"

Rano entered into the room saying "geet puttar busy Hain Kya?"

Geet "nehi maa ap andar ao na"

Rano "aur geet dost k behen k shaadi ka function kaisa gaya?wohi Mili na tu veer k sath...veer tujhe kaisa laga beta?"

geet "accha Hain ma bht funny hain par dil ka bht saaf hain"

Rano "kal uske dad ka phone aya tha unlogo tu pasand Hain geet...Kya tujhe bhi wo pasand Hain?"

geet confused "Kya matlb maa"

Rano "tere liye yash ka rishta aya hain geet"

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Next morning at Breakfast table

all are having breakfast together when suddenly veer entered and took a vacant seat..hello uncle's..hello aunties...hi maan...brij...dev...hello NT bhabhi

all " hi veer...how are you?"

veer "I m absolutely fine...waise maan main aj ek exhibition jane ka plan kr raha tha sath me chalogey agr free ho to?"

Maan who was already irritated with him said "mujhe kuch kaam Hain veer...tum brij k sath ku nehi chale jatey?"

Brij "mujhe bhi office ka kaam hain"

geet came and take seat for breakfast

veer "tum sb choro geet Hain na...geet chalegi mere sath"

Geet shocked "kaha jane ka plan hain?"

veer "mere friend ka kuch art exhibition Hain mujhe jana parega tum chalogi na sath me"

before geet reply anything maan said "veer tumhare friend k exhibition hain na..why forcing us to go...geet kahi nehi jayegi"

Mr.khurana "geet jayegi ya nehi jayegi uska faishla usko lene do na beta...geet puttar ko art me waise big interest hain...geet tu jayegi na?"

geet looking at Mr khurana agreed "ji dad"

soon after breakfast geet and veer left from there...one by one all left the dining table...Mr.khurana was all ready to leave the table when maan suddenly said

Maan "ap geet ko aise hi kisi anjan larke sath kaise bhej sakte ho dad?"

Mr.khurana "wo koi anjan nehi Hain maan mere dost ka beta hain...geet ka hone wala pati"

Maan was shocked hearing that " geet se puche bina ap uska rishta kaise tay kr sakte ho dad?"

Mr.khurana "mana humse ek br galti ho gayi maan...humne tumhari aur geet ki shaadi tum dono se bina puche tay kiya tha lekin wo galti hum dobara nehi daurahengey maan...kal rano ne geet se pucha tha...usko ye rishta manzor hain...yaha tk ki Mr.Kapoor aur mohindar to chahte Hain kal ka din me hi ek accha muhrat Hain fir 2 saal me koi muhrat nehi to geet aur veer ka Registration marriage krba dengey...fir ek subh din dekh k unka engagement...fir 2 saal baad shaadi"

Maan "aur ap sb maan gaye?"

Mr.khurana "agr rano mohindar aur geet ko koi problem nehi Hain to mujhe bhi nehi Hain...chalo mujhe bht taiyari krni hain baad me baat krte Hain"

Maan was sitting there shocked, broken, clueless what is happening around him

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It was evening time...geet just came back and went inside her room...it was dark room so she went to switch on the light but one voice make her stop in her tracks...

"Exhibition enjoy kiya?"

Geet turn and saw maan sitting there in dark "Maan main darr gayi thi.
. tum yaha kya kr rahe ho aur andhere me ku baithey ho?"

Maan "pahle to kabhi aisa nehi pucha tumne geet...pahle to kabhi nehi janna chaha k main tumhare room me Kya kr raha hu... pahle to tum jb chahe mere room me ati thi aur main tumhare...to ab kya badal gaya?"

Geet "tumhe nehi pata ab kya badal gaya maan?us din us raat jb tumh ne mujhe apni jagah dikhayi thi tumhari life me tabhi sb badal gaya tha maan...sb kuch"

Maan standing up went close to her and held geet tight "yeah fir tumhara shaadi ka faishla geet(geet shocked confused looked at him but anger over powers her confusion) ...ek faishla aur humere bich sb kuch badal gaya geet"

Geet "maan kuch badal ne k liye kuch hona jaruri hota hain...aur tumnehi kaha tha na humere bich kuch nehi tha...aur na hi kabhi ho sakta hain maan...
Yaad hain?"

Maan ignoring her answer said "ye shaadi mat kro geet..tor do ye shaadi"

Geet hold maan with equal pressure and asked "ku maan ?tum ku chahte ho main ye shaadi tor du...bolo maan?"

Maan was standing there silent...he have no answer to speak

Geet removing tears which make way from her eyes unknown to her said in a rude tone "agr tumhare pass koi reason nehi hain to mere pass bhi koi wajah nehi hain maan...bht raat ho gayi hain...kal ka din mere liye bht bara hone wala hain...good night"

Maan understand her unsaid words and left the room after looking at geet's face for brief min...

Closing the door on maans face geet throw herself on bed and start weeping...maan too went into his room and sat there like a statue...

Mr.khurana who witnessed the full drama follows maan and sit beside him...

Mr.khurana "maan kya problem hain?kya tum geet se pyar krte ho?"

Maan looked at mr.khurana confused...he doesn't really know...the feeling he have for geet... is it love?...he was not sure...he only knows never he had felt something so strong for anyone in his life...

Mr.khurana "maan waqt bht kam bacha hain...agr abhi bhi tum decide nehi kr paye you love her or not to sayad bht late ho jaye...kal subah 10 bje registry hain dono ki Mehra farmhouse pe aur uske baad party...take care beta..
Good night" and he left from there

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It was morning 9 A.M.

Maan don't even know it was morning till one servant knocked the door and ask him for morning coffee...he was so much into his own world of confusion that he forget the world around him...

Maan "baki sb kaha hain?"

Servant "sb subah subah hi mehra saab k farmhouse k liye nikal gaye hai ...bari maa apko bhi ready hoke jane k liye bol k gayi hain..."

Maan didn't listen anything else take his car and left for Mehra mansion in that condition only..
.but every time destiny isn't with you...he neglected geet till now but when he finally understand her worth he was too late...when he reached there..
Veer already signed the paper and till the time he entered in the house geet happily signed too...

Their parents congratulating each other...feeding sweets to each other...wow they are happy why bcs...his geet isn't his anymore...she is someone else now...the truth is too bitter too accept...the day he realised his love...yes he finally realised he only loved geet and it was always her but he was dumb enough not to realised it and when he finally understand her worth...she can't be his anymore...he lost the girl who born for him...he lost his childhood and only love forever...

It was too much pain to bear he did not have the courage to go inside and congratulate them...he was still standing there looking at geet who looked clearly happy and enjoying with her family..finally Mr.khurana noticed him standing near gate and went towards him

Mr.Khurana "arey maan tum agaey...waise tum late ho gaye...dono signature kr chuke hain papers pe...hum chahte the tum witness pe signature kro par tum late ho gaye to wo bhi hum ne ke diya"

Maan sadly add "haan dad Maine bht late kr diya"

Mr.khurana "chalo chal kr Geet aur veer ko wish kr do"

Maan looking at his dad "paa I love her and you want me to go and congratulate them for their marriage...wow"

Mr.khurana shocked "you love whom?geet?lekin tum to kya naam tha us larki ki ena ya meena haa samira usse pyar krte the na isiliye tumne geet se engagement se bhi mana kr diya tha yaad hain?ab kaha hain wo uske baad tumhare sath kabhi dekhi nehi ...aur ab tum kah rahe ho you love geet...mazak chal raha hain maan?"

Maan got irritated he was already sad and upset from last two days and his dad's blame just make his all worse for him...finally his frustration come out like a volcano "haan haan haan pyar krta hu geet se...samira mere dost thi bus geet k sath engagement torne k liye le aya usse...but ab mujhe pata Hain main sirf geet se pyar krta hu ...bht jada pyar krta hu...sirf geet se hi pyar krta tha aur usse hi pyar krta rahunga chahe uski shaadi ku na ho jaye...samjhe ap"

The music and celebration all stopped hearing maan's scream...

Noticing the unusual silent maan turn and saw all people in the hall including geet and veer looking at him...geet had little tears in her eyes...

Maan went and hold her shoulder tight and aggresively "tumhne kaha tha you love me to itni jaldi kaise agey br gayi geet?ek br bhi murke nehi dekha...ab bolo mera kya hoga?bolo geet...bolo"
Geet still looking at him confused

Rano "maan beta ye kya kah rahe ho tum"

Maan "yehi such hain rano maa...I love geet i love her very much...par geet to ab meri geet rahi hi nehi wo to ab geet veer Meh..." and before he complete his world...geet slapped him hard in his face"

Maan was shockingly looking at geet "Geet"

Geet "chup tb se kuch bhi bole ja rahe ho pyar ka izhar bhi kr rahe ho to aise ?sbko dhamka ke?aur kya kal se shaadi shaadi laga rakha hain kiski shaadi kaisi shaadi...haan rishta aya tha veer ka mere liye lekin veer ko bhi pata hain aur baki sb ko bhi ye nehi ho sakta"

Maan "lekin ye sb kya tha?"

Veer answered smiling "handa and mehra's ki first join venture by geet aur me but chalo such to bahar a gaya is bahane hi sahi"

Maan "lekin dad ne to" and he look at his dad

Mr.khurana "ab beta itna nalayak ho to usko uski pyar k ehsaas dilane k liye uske baap ko hi kuch krna parega na..."

Maan "dad..."

Mr.Khurana "kya dad...thank you dad bol mujhe"

Maan "I love you dad"(hugged him tight)

Mr.khurana "mujhe nehi ideat...ab to i love u usko bol de jisko bolna chahiye...warna main khud uski shaadi veer se krwa dunga"

Maan went towards geet and said "I love..."

Mr.khurana "aise nehi apne knee pe baitho aur meri beti ko dhang se propose kro...bht taklif diya hain tumhne meri geetu ko"and give a ring which he already bought while coming here

Maan bend in his knees take geets hand into his and proposed "aj tk Maine tumhare sath jo bhi kiya hain main uske liye bht sarminda hu geet...meri wo sare baittamiziyo ko bhul k kya tum mujhe maaf kr sakogi geet?...ye such hain i realised it later but now I know I love you very much geet ...will you marry me pls?"

Geet with teary eyes said yes and making him stand hugged him tight "I love you too maan" maan happily make her wear the ring and once again hugged her tight

Every story doesn't get a happy ending every maan doesn't get a second chance...it take just a min to lose everything...maan was lucky he got a lovely family but now it's up to him if his happy ending will get a happily ever after or not...

The end...

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The Rathore Mansion is decorated like a castle, lighting, flowers, curtains decoration and many more things. Toda their Princess aka Geet Singh Rathore is going to engaged with Rahul Singhania, he is one the business tycoon and he loves her so much.

Everyone is so happy Madan her father, Rano her mother, Arjun her brother...they all are happy. They all thing they lost her 2 years back in accident, no one wants to recalls that dreadful memories where they lost her. She was getting married to Maan Singh Khurana, they love each other through Its love from Maan's side first from very beginning or one can say that when she was born, Geet also loves him so much only scared with his Obsession or Passion which she never ever handle, Maan's loves has no limit. He wants her and always made her stay with him but 2 years back they both met in accident where they lost Maan but as everyone knows he loves her so much, he saved her in cost of his own life.

She is still in love with Maan but everyone makes her understand if she doesn't move on then Maan's sacrifice is totally waste. He gives you life so use this life, she honestly tell everything to Rahul about her love and she tries to be a good wife to him, he said he doesn't need her love but his love is more than enough.

She at least try to moved on with him, he understands her after knowing about her and her first love.

Scene Shift

Geet is in parlor to get ready for engagement, she is wearing a golden color Lehenga and Dupatta with Pink choli, her make-up artist turns her so beautiful.

Later In The Evening

Groom family come and they all greeted by bride family in best way, Khurana are also present with them, they all are happy for her except Maan's mother as she doesn't want her to get married with anyone, she should lived with them as Maan always treat her like his wife, though they don't make any relationship as they were not married in eyes of law, he said he could wait the time she is ready for him but when time come, he was not with them.

Geet's mother walked with Geet and her cousins and gives her hand in Rahul's hand. Geet gives her genuine smile and sit beside him. Rahul makes conversation with her and she is just giving answer in yes or no. She is not very talkative person, she used to talks with Maan as he understands her hidden meaning behind her real words and she knows no one understands her like Maan.

They are about to exchange rings when Rahul's friend come and said they wants to perform for them and then they will start the rituals.

Pyar mein aksar, aisa hota hai

Koi hasta hai, koi rota hai

Geet smile faded and she is turning pale, seems like he is singing on her.

Pyar mein aksar, aisa hota hai

Koi hasta hai, koi rota hai

He sings the lines and pointing out someone is smiling and someone is feeling empty.

Koi pata hai koi khota hai

Koi pata hai koi khota hai

Its feels like someone close to Maan tell that she is making sin to leave him just like that when he never e er leaves her.

Tu jaan hai kisi aur ki

Tujhe janta koi aur hai

Groom side faces also fell when they heard that song, why Rahul's friend sing that song. If he wants to annoy them that he is successful.

Tu jaan hai kisi aur ki

Tujhe janta koi aur hai

Geet mood is also feeling sad, she couldn't forget him and everyone is here to remembering about him.

Tu pasand hai kisi aur ki

Tujhe mangta koi aur hai

Rahul wants to stop him but he knows he can't do any stupidity, he has to bear him but he is going to make him pay. What he wants to proof

Tu pyaar hai kisi aur ka

Tujhe chahta koi aur hai

"Are you alright Geet"

"Yeah, he is nice singer"

"He is singing from his new Album"

"Yeah, it good" she replied with fake smile

Tu pyar hai kisi aur ka

Tujhe chahta koi aur hai

Geet heard this song somewhere else but where she doesn't know. She remembers everything but she didn't recalls how she met with accident as brain never have the memory that is harmful for it.

Tu pyar hai kisi aur ka

Tujhe chahta koi aur hai

But that song bother her so much, she feels everyone is mocking on her. She is Maan's love but she is getting married to someone else.

Tu pasand hai kisi aur ki

Tujhe mangta koi aur hai

She feels suffocation around her and she couldn't take breath properly.

"Maan" she said in breathless tone but no one hears her

"Shhh Jaan, I am here" she heard him saying that, she saw a black shadow sitting with her.

Tu pyar hai kisi aur ka

Tujhe chahta koi aur hai

"You are okay Geet"

"Yeah" she said

"I am thinking to take you somewhere tomorrow"

"Hmmm"

"I'll talk to uncle"

Kaun apna hai, kya begana hai

Kya haqeeqat hai, kya fasana hai

She is recalling past where they both get engaged, they both are actually happy with each other but their happiness is short life, they get separated.

"Where are you"

"Nowhere" Geet replied

Kaun apna hai, kya begana hai

Kya haqeeqat hai, kya fasana hai

"Geet did Uncle knows who was chasing you that day"

"I think I get scared unnecessary, there was no one" she replied

"You should be careful"

Ye zamane mein kisne jana hai

Ye zamane mein kisne jana hai

Two days ago she went for shopping when she feels someone is chasing her and she gets scared, she called her Dad and informed him about whereabouts but everyone said no one was there, she was all alone but she felt someone is chasing her.

Tu nazar mein hai kisi aur ki

Tujhe dekhta koi aur hai

Maan's mother is happy to saw their hang faces, they all want seperate her from Her Maan, he never wants Geet seperated with him.

Tu nazar mein hai kisi aur ki

Tujhe dekhta koi aur hai

Geet is sitting but her mind is long lost, she is feeling guilty, does she is doing something that she wouldn't do.

"I want to go to my room"

"Why"

"I...Ummm... I lost my ring"

"Geet everyone talks about us"

"Please" she plead

"Do you want me to come with you"

"No" she immediately respond

Tu pasand hai kisi aur ki

Tujhe mangta koi aur hai

She left the place without saying anything to anyone only informed Rahul, her mother asked her, she signals her she wants to restroom.

She can't stay there any longer, she need time alone.

Tu pyar hai kisi aur ka

Tujhe chahta koi aur hai

When she left the song was also end, she went to her room and feeling a little better, she can't understand why she feels something when the song start, what is in the song or the person sang the song.

All she needs fresh air or a little bit time to hold herself. Rahul must be waiting for her, she will go in couples of minutes.

She was in restroom when she heard her room door was open, "Mumma please gimme some time"

"Why you need time"

Geet turn totally pale, she heard that voice but where she don't remember.

"Geet come outside or I'll come inside." He warns

"Who are you"

"How could you forget me so easily"

Geet scream with all the energy but all are in the hall area and her voice won't heard by them.

She heard his foot step near the restroom and she made a plan, she pushed the door and the person fell on floor, she tries to run but he hold her legs and she also fell.

"Maan" she scream

"He was dead Geet"

"I am here Jaan" She again heard a voice and a black shadow

"Your Maan broke my sister's heard, I killed him and my revenge complete when I makes you mine and he will suffered" he said

"Jaan get up" she again heard

Geet pushed him again and run towards door balcony, she wants to locked it but he chased her and comes there too.

"You are Rahul's Friend" Geet saw his face

"You forget me Geet, I am Vikram" he said

"Jaan pushed him or he will harm you" she heard the black shadow said to her

"Why are you doing that"

"I want you so simple"

"Jaan pushed him" the black shadow said

Geet gets scared when he is reducing the distance, "You still don't remember me, don't worry I'll make you remember me but after I makes you mine" he said

"Geet pushed him" he said in angry voice and she did what the black shadow said to her.

He didn't expect from her and his balance lost and he stripped a little bit and he fell from balcony and hits the ground.

"What I did"

"Jaan you didn't did anything wrong" the black shadow said

"Who are you"

"You know me"

"No I don't" she replied

She immediately went from there to tell everyone what she did.

"You know me" he said

Geet turn back but the black shadow was not there, where the black shadow goes, when she try to take step she is in front of her dressing table and she saw a image of a person.

"Maan" she said

"I Am Alive"

Scene Shift To Unknown Place

A person was laying on bed but unconscious state but people who knows the person was laying wants to live or else any person in his condition was not survive.

Scene Shift

Geet fell while seeing him, she is not shocked but he was dead that was everyone told her. Her mother came to check her when she didn't show from last 15 minutes.

"Geet" she scream and called everyone

"What happened to her" her father said

"Dad first we should take her hospital" Arjun said

"I am coming with you" Rahul said

"Okay"

They all reached hospital Rathore and Khurana get worried to saw her in that state. Doctor gives her treatment and she comes in conscious, "Maan Is Alive" she said when she open her eyes first.

"What" everyone said

She wants to say so many things but her mind said about Maan first, "Geet I think you need rest"

"Dad I am telling you truth, Maan said to me, he never lie... Dad I killed Vikram"

"Who...He is" She is giving shocked to everyone, Geet you are not alright, have rest we talk later.

"Believe me Dad, he fell from balcony"

Arjun called his gaurds and asked him to check everywhere specially Geet's balcony side. He called him after checking everywhere but no one was there.

"Dad I think Geet fell on floor so hard that why she is making stories"

"I think we should call off this marriage, I can't let my son married with a mad girl"

"Don't say anything to my sister" Arjun said, "She is going on bad phase"

"I am Arjun Bhai" Rahul said

"I think Rahul's mother is right"

"Dad what are you saying"

"Geet need time and I don't think so she wants to marry Rahul."

Everyone is sad except Rahul's family and Maan's mother. The engagement calls off.



to be continued...
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next award category is


ek asi kahani jisne aap logo ko khub hasaya 😆

Winner is


&

1st runner up is




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(reader )

1.HER SHY HUSBAND_Natalya_bedi & Simple love_.Ashleydevlin.both are leading the poll.. do you read this story or like the concept

i really like simple love Concept and characters very funny especially Geet .

2. which story you like most from nominated and why

Geet is totally one piece . Her action and talks so unpredictable. Her madness for food or say sweets is very funny . Very much hooked to this story

3. do you want to share something about your fav story

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(reader)

1.HER SHY HUSBAND_Natalya_bedi & Simple love_.Ashleydevlin.both are leading the poll.. do you read this story or like the concept

i did not read her shy husband still and simple live i read half only when i will fully read this i will share my thought about it

2. which story you like most from nominated and why

i the love all stories bec all writers r superb they do wonderfull job ,they take out time to write to story so that they can give updates regullarly for reader

3. do you want to share something about your fav story

my fav is all stories
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one more award in the Row😉



Winner is

& 1st runner up is

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(reader)

1. A u have seen lust for revenge won in GREY story of the year poll.. what do want to say about this

I'm really Happy that this story has won and I have voted for this story too and wanted to see this as winner story. Despite of being a dark shade story at starting it has changed my point of you with time and make me like this story so much... this one is One of the best... And it deserved to be the winner...

2. have you read this story and what u like most in this story

Yes. I have been reading this story now more than a year and I liked many thing about this story. Pointing One thing is not easy. Richa di has formed this story so perfectly I can't help but love everything about it. THOUGH I have hated things at Starting but with times when things started to get clear and I got know past behind those characters it didn't feel same. I think I have liked their chemistry most... Two Broken soul together it has Hurt them a lot to be with each other still they have covered such long way for sake of their daughter and their love overpowering insecurities, fear, guilt and hatred. And at last leaving everything behind Their love is winning... Though this thread of Their relationship was really tender from past but with time it's just growing more and more stronger... 80+ parts is going and I'm still excited to read this story always...

3. do you want to suggest something to writer

Neverrr... How can I suggest her anything? She's Best at what she's doing and plus she's full of surprising thing when it comes to story Specially this One... Twist after Twist keep coming and every single one is unexpected shocking but I like this thing about her a lot too... So I don't have anything to suggest... I'm happy with whatever she thinks to surprise us...

4. what you want to see in next updates of this story & which is your fav character from story apart from our maaneet

I would like to see more light and happy moments in future which we were getting by the way... Don't know about right now missed reading last two updates but yesss to happy moments always... Mannat she's my favorite character apart from Maaneet... From when she has been part of this story Everything just changed... A New ray of hope she is in Maaneet life... And we have got to see a totally changed Maan with her from starting... She was only source of happiness in their barren life... It's only cause of her I think things are looking easy unless I don't know how it would have been... So yeah I love her a lot she's my cutipie...

And can't thank Richa di enough for bringing her in this story...

Congratulations for This Story being the winner... Lot's of love and blessings to you always...

(reader)

1. A u have seen lust for revenge won in GREY story of the year poll.. what do want to say about this

well deserved win... this story and many twists and turns...

2. have you read this story and what u like most in this story

Yes I have... Maan and Mannat's love and bond

3. do you want to suggest something to writer

to keep entertaining us with her terrific stories

4. what you want to see in next updates of this story & which is your fav character from story apart from our maaneet

Maaneet getting to know each other - (already shown) : Mannat


Edited by preetymaaneet - 7 years ago
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ase writer jinki kahani me twist pe twist aate ho
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aur bechare reader - pareshan rhte hai 😆

Winner is


&

1st runner up is

Edited by priya_21 - 7 years ago
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( reader)

1.richa_kapoor & drrose31 are leading in poll do you read their story or like concept of their story

Yup, I voted for richa too..I really love all her stories especially how she twist the story with unexpected turn.

2.do you read all stories from poll which is your fav story ans why

not all bt a few of them.my fav is lust for revenge 3 coz I just love ita concept so much .Then how the story proceeds especially after maan's past revealltion n mg sweet angel acts make me to stuck to this story..

3. do you want to suggest something to writer / like some new twist for her story

well ,I m bad in this coz I just love to read how the writer unfolds the story bt also sometimes likes that we can guess what's coming up nxt...So I don't know what to suggest right now.


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What would a person do if what you thought was unreal was a reality and the world built around you a lie .

"Are you my friend, A six year old girl asked a boy looking at her . "Yes I am. "Will you leave me like others did, She sobbed . "No matter what happens you will always find me by your side, He smiled gently . "Really, The little one asked unsure . "Yes. "So what should I call you, she queried . "M, he said . "Hi M I am Geet. The little one was overjoyed to have a friend for herself .

18 years later

A young girl rushed for a job interview . "I really hope I get this job. "You will , don't worry , came that voice . "You came , I can't believe you came after so many years , you said you will never leave me, she complained . "I'm always here Geet and didn't you say something about an interview,He distracted her. "Oh yeah I forgot, bye see you later, saying this she rushed, making him only watch her retreating figure. "Geet when ..., He thought. Geet was overjoyed to look at the building ahead of her . "It looks great , I hope I get this one, She prayed . She entered the building but something is off she noticed but still she proceeded to the place where the interviews were held .Geet was selected for the post . She returned home happily , "So did you get the job. She turned hearing his voice, "You came again , I'm so happy . Yes I did. "I'm always with you Geet , He said . "You did not come to see me for years. She pouted. "I will never leave you now, He said. "Well I will see to that, She grinned. "So how was your interview, He asked. "It was great, I'm confident I will get it, She said. "Sure you will, He smiled.

As the fate would have it Geet was selected in her interview and wanted to share it with him. Over the years she understood that M was no imagination of her but a real person but how he used to get to her she could not still get that. "So now happy, He asked. "Very, She grinned. "So when are you joining, He asked. "Tomorrow, She said. "Great, then all the best for your first day, He said. "I'm a bit nervous, I heard the boss is very strict, She shared her fears. "I'm sure you will do just fine, He said.

Geet took a deep breath and entered the huge building once again but this time as the Interior Designer in this prestigious company. The receptionist called the peon who guided her to the floor where only three cabins were present. He guided her to her cabin and told her never to enter the cabin beside her as it was the boss' cabin. After an hour she was called by the boss. She entered nervously and found a man looking out of the window with his back towards her.

"Miss Handa, Am I right, She heard his deep voice. "Y..Yes Sir, She stammered. "There are some blue prints on my desk, you have to complete them by three days...am I clear on that, The young man said. Geet went towards the huge desk where she found them. "I will try my best to complete them Sir, She said. "Not try, Miss Handa I want them completed in that time...Maan Singh Khurana does not like slackness and will never tolerate it, do you understand, He thundered. "A..Alright Sir, She said scared with his loud voice. "Good, now back to your work, Maan ordered. Geet quickly ran out of the door. "You should have told her the truth Maan, how long will you keep hiding, He turned to see his friend and confidante Saahil there. "And tell her that all this world around her is a lie, Maan said. "One day, she might understand, Saahil said. "I know Saahil but you know this is our only chance to bring her to consciousness, this world her invention created...I want my Geet back Saahil, He said helplessly. "I understand, my friend. She has been like that for 28 days now...and here she is living a different life...may be a life she wanted, Saahil said. "Will she be fine Saahil, Maan again wanted a confirmation. "Yes, my friend, I assure you that, He consoled his friend for the umpteenth time.

Geet cursed her new boss for the umpteenth time who has loaded her with work right on her very first day. "What happened, She heard his voice. "I'm stuck with this pile of files as Mr Maan Singh Khurana does not like slackness, She spoke sarcastically. "So not liking the new boss are we, M smiled. "This man is an alternative form of a raging demon, how the hell can I do it in three days, She said frustrated. "Want some help, M offered. "Ah no, we are friends but if I take your help that would be cheating and I don't like to cheat, Geet said. "Now that's the spirit my friend...give it all you can, He smiled. "Thank you, I feel much better talking to you, Geet smiled. "I wish you were my boss instead, She said in a flow catching him off guard. "Hmm...really but who knows I turn out to be more strict than your demonic boss, He jested. "Nope, no one can be that bad, She cursed him again. He smiled looking at her dedication. "You were always this dedicated Geet..., He thought.

Geet was back to the office the next day completing her work. She submitted it to Saahil. Saahil smiled to see her but was saddened as they were still working on ways to get her out...it seemed like something was keeping her there but what they were trying hard to find before that day came. "Miss Handa, your work was really good, so for the upcoming project, I will have you assist me, He said. "Thank you Sir, She was happy that her hard work paid off but still unhappy as that boss of hers always faced his back towards her.

She complained about the same to M, "Can you imagine that demon applauded me for my work but really he should have some manners, he applauded me with his back towards me...may be he is ugly. "If he hasn't faced you how can you say he is ugly, M chuckled. "Well it is because he is hiding ...if you are ugly you don't want people to see you right, She gave her logic. "Geet...I wanted to ask you something..., M said. "Alright, what is it..., She said looking up to him. He so much wanted to ask her but the doctors have warned him against it , so he let it go. "Nothing..., He said. "Where do you come from M, She asked him startling him with the question he always feared she would ask. "What..., He asked looking up to her. "I mean ...you are not my imagination ...but a real person ...I was curious as to know your whereabouts, She finished. "I..I am from ...let's say...forget it ...I will tell you everything ...do you trust me, He asked. "I do ...more than anyone here I do trust you...you are all I have...a friend and a family, She said. "Your trust is all I need Geet, never stop that, He said.

A week later, Geet went to her boss' cabin. "Sir, I'm here to submit my work you gave me three days back, She said. "Keep it on the desk, He said in the same bossy tone. She nodded and left to her cabin. She found one of the pages of her project still on her table which she forgot by mistake and just made a dash towards his cabin again almost barging in but what she saw made her rooted on her spot...the man in front of her ...her boss was the man she trusted the most and in a state of shock she could only utter... "M. Maan looked up shocked to see her there, "Geet wait...I can explain. "Explain...really...so this must have been fun for you right...to make fool out of me and here I thought you are the only person I could trust, She cried. "Maan she is becoming unstable..., He heard a voice. "Geet, please dear calm down...please I can't lose you again, He said helplessly. "Lose me ...really you should have thought of that before you pulled this prank on me, She said. "I'm ready for anything if it means to save you get it, He said losing his cool. "Save me ...from what, She asked. "From your impending death Geet...you are not in a real world Geet, this is world created by you...by your invention Eutopia..., He said. "What do you mean...who are you, She said. "I'm your husband Maan Singh Khurana and you are my wife and the greatest inventor of the future Dr Geet Khurana, He said shocking her.

to be continued

Edited by priya_21 - 7 years ago

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