(MG-FF) HURTFUL HEARTS (RE-POST) THREAD 1

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sairam175

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Posted: 7 years ago

#51

Part1

Wow superb

Maaneet marriage is a great start

Avi is Manns son

Maan is so rude

Thanks to avi and dev she forgot it

Maan dislikes avi why ?

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sairam175

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Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Part 2

Awesome part

Maan already say her to deny this marriage

Like geet spirit

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sairam175

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Posted: 7 years ago

#53

Part 3

Superb update

Dadi is so caring

Avi is so cute

He solved geet problem

Con soon

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Sowmiya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Thanks for reposting it !!

Interesting prologue with Maan and Geet's prespective and monologue.

@Part 1

Captivating start dear

Liked it!!

Geet was lost and was quandary for the reason she agreed to get married to Maan and was contemplating over things. Maan was curt with his deportment and didn't encourage further rituals and traditions. Loved Avi's cute words for Geet. Dadima was about to explain Geet about Maan's demeanor but Geet didn't let her explain things and made dadima feel relaxed and calm with her words and gestures. Geet was yet again in quandary and shocked apropos to Maan's deportment and relationship towards Avi.

@Part 2

Nice update dear

Liked it!! Well penned.

Geet was reminiscing about the happenings took place before her marriage. Dadima emotionally blackmailed Maan and pulled stunt on her as a result Maan agreed to marry Geet. He even confessed it to her but alas she couldn't say NO apropos to situation and time thus, ended up getting hitched to Maan. Maan in his rude demeanor asked Geet to stay out of his personal space and Geet obliged to do the same as he asked for it.

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Sowmiya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#55

@Chapter 3

Nice update dear

Liked it!!

Geet was all set to make Maan taste medicine of ignorance apropos to his rude and uncaring deportment. Maan didnt even bother to help her out whilst she fell on floor which made Geet feel irked. Liked Dadima's concern and care for Geet and her worry of Maaneet's relationship. Geet told dadima that she is aware about Maan's prespective regarding their marriage and him bring forced to do so and her reason to accept this marriage. Geet was curious to know about Maan's ex wife but alas dadima choose to keep mum and thought it will better if Maan states truth to Geet and rightfully it's Maan's right to share about his past to Geet. Unknowingly Avi solved Geet's problem with his innocent words. Liked Geet and Avi's budding relationship.

Interesting precap!!

Looking forward to the next update

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dhrastimaan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#56

Waiting for part 4 and 5

Will you be updating it today

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Alicia2012

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Posted: 7 years ago

#57

Wow great story please update soon

I'm really excited looking forward to the next part of your story

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drrose31

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Posted: 7 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: metromasti
awesome update . maan behave rudely with geet & geet was angry but she knew no use . dadima was worried for geet cos she knew about maan & his thinking plus during breakfast he clearly told her about his views regarding this marriage .
waiting for next

Thanks dear

yes

Right...

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drrose31

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Posted: 7 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: taahir004
Maan sees Geet on the floor but for him it means nothing
Daadima feels guilty that her grandson has to ruin an innocent girl's life
but Geet told Daadima she knew before marriage he was not interested and she could only
hold her parents pride so she couldn't even deny the marriage
Geet got a great solution now as she will be sleeping with Avi from now onwards

Hmm

True

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drrose31

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Posted: 7 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: supernasahu
Fabulous update...👏 👏 👏
Dadi blackmailed maan for marriage...
Maan behaved rudely with geet...
Dadi was worried for geet...
Geet decided to sleep in avi's room...
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yeah

Correct...

Thanks sweets...

my pleasure