Enchantress [Completed!] - Page 5

Originally posted by: ASYAKASHLOVER

Such an awesome update

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

I'll try and be a bit subtle this time?

kam daravna kind off??😕

ghost story aur kam daravna aasa kaise ho sakta hai 😉
write the way you planned ... aur darao aur darao 😳

lovely update mate tere previous works bhi complete kar dear so maan can see dead ppl he just had a vision or he saw his past but something that has already happened or is about to happen dont know for sure but its killing maan has its effecting him his gf is for sure geet as no one can be achtter box and demanding as geet hope its geet tujhe goli se uda dungi if its sam but maan heard his gf scream making him scared what happened cockraoch ya chipkali dekh li kya jo she scream bloody mary

Originally posted by: nakh5683

lovely update mate tere previous works bhi complete kar dear so maan can see dead ppl he just had a vision or he saw his past but something that has already happened or is about to happen dont know for sure but its killing maan has its effecting him his gf is for sure geet as no one can be achtter box and demanding as geet hope its geet tujhe goli se uda dungi if its sam but maan heard his gf scream making him scared what happened cockraoch ya chipkali dekh li kya jo she scream bloody mary

sab ladkiya ayse hi hoti hai
geet was no exception😆

and gf ka naam jo ho kya farak padta hai
this clearly is not a love story


baki stories abhi line me hai ek k baad ek😉
i dont want to start everything and phirse go gayab because of stress

And Cockroach kuch bada soch

thanks for reading

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

what should i say

umm don't be scared it's just a story?😕

but glad you liked it

thanks for reading!😃

Originally posted by: taahir004

Maan for some reason seems very distant though he has friends

so he has a girlfriend too

but what has just happened

Originally posted by: Khushibloom

I read this part while waiting for my cab 😛

Wo Bhi subah 5 se pehle 😆

So surroundings added a lot more effect to it 😆