Enchantress [Completed!] - Page 4

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

were you scared?

even a little bit?

well for now picking up the curiosity was my only aim

if i have yours then i feel I'm on the right track😆

Thanks for reading!😃

Originally posted by: aparna3011

very nice update

Originally posted by: diadecember

Naah I am not scared...but not sure let me read few more parts and hope for daily updates

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5

WOW!!
This was really a nice one..
usually as the time passes mysteries start to unfold, but in this story I felt with each line the chapter was turning more & more mysterious..
Maan seeing those dead people with such fashion disaster would be a horrible experience I guess..
What he saw outside the building was a figment of his imagination due to reminiscing about the past incident or was it real??
His girlfriend is another mystery..
Why did she scream?? did she get attacked by any ghost??
Going by the name of the story, the upcoming ghosty in their life should be a female..
So why do I feel this enchantress is Geet??
Really wanna know if my guess is correct..
Waiting eagerly for the mysteries to be revealed & also the mysterious girlfriend of his..

Originally posted by: Nav2010

Very well written and little scary too.

Originally posted by: Khushibloom

I don't know what to say 😲

It was really so good

To be frank I am a bit scared after this one

Hat's off to maan for being sane even after seeing such horrible sight

Now I also wonder who is his girlfriend

And the last scene it gave Goosebumps

Originally posted by: Khushibloom

Continue soon dear

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

little bit at last
but his vision is very scary

Originally posted by: Geetdrashti

lovely update