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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 7 years ago

#161

Maan dancing with Sameera but all his attention is either on Geet watching making sure

he knows everything that is happening all around

when he spots her with Adi he is awed and wants to know what is actually happening between them

he watches all Adi's eye movements and also ensure that nothing nasty happens to Geet

at night he sneaks into her bedroom and he is confirmed that she loves Adi but the very next day

he is all confused as when Geet gets up and walks out the cafe Pinky walks in and Adi proposes her he sees tears in Geet's eyes and feels bad for her but now he wants to know what she really feels and that when he realizes its not Adi that Geet loves but instead its him

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mitaasen

@mitaasen

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Posted: 7 years ago

#162

intersting update .

nd i really enjoyed maan's james bond skills.

i really like ur story .it s refreshing .

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

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Posted: 7 years ago

#163

OMG!! that was so hilarious..
Maan & his misconception about self😆
"spying skills were only next to James Bond himself and his deduction skills comparable to Sherlock."🤣
God!! he seriously thought adi & geet..
Wish I could see his face when he realized the meaning of her writing..😳
But geet is one weird creature, who write such a love confession for coffee??😕
Though I did not think of Adi, i too felt she was in love with SOMEONE, maybe even maan..
Seriously woman, you have one heck of an interesting way of writing, very entertaining..
& the names of chapter are too good..
THe chapters turn out even better when written in the style you do..👏

Edited by LovelyUmang5 - 7 years ago

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Sudha

@babelicious

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Posted: 7 years ago

#164

Hahaha Maan's been spying on her only to realize all his assumptions were totally wrong! But why is he so interested in her now anyway? Wonderful update. Very well written..

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 7 years ago

#165

thanks 4 da pm, read Part 5 and commented already! 😃 could not wait 😊

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#166

Part 6

astounding update! superbly written!

Why is Maan so interested in what Geet is doing? he is watching Geet and Adi and even left Sameera and followed Geet!

Omg he even read Geet;s diary!! 😲 Maan assumes Geet like Adi! but his detective skills are pathetic when he sees Adi propose to Pinky!

he again reads her diary and realises she was talking about coffee...😆

eager to know if Geet likes Maan? Are Maan and Sameera more than friends?

Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago

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maneetarsh

@maneetarsh

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Posted: 7 years ago

#167

Ha ha lovely writing about coffee, such a nice thought, I loved the curious George (maan(

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@Endgame

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Posted: 7 years ago

#168

lol maan thinks too high of himself
down with just one blow good
all preparation love just for coffee
so good
loved it
awesome part

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swapna.p

@swapna.p

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Posted: 7 years ago

#169

Nice update..

Waiting for next update..

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ExpectoPatronum

@ExpectoPatronum

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Posted: 7 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5
OMG!! that was so hilarious..
Maan & his misconception about self😆
"spying skills were only next to James Bond himself and his deduction skills comparable to Sherlock."🤣
God!! he seriously thought adi & geet..
Wish I could see his face when he realized the meaning of her writing..😳
But geet is one weird creature, who write such a love confession for coffee??😕
Though I did not think of Adi, i too felt she was in love with SOMEONE, maybe even maan..
The rant about coffee was written by a friend/colleague of mine, we South Indians love our coffee a bit too much i guess🤣
Seriously woman, you have one heck of an interesting way of writing, very entertaining..
& the names of chapter are too good..
THe chapters turn out even better when written in the style you do..👏
Thanks! it means a LOT to me!!!😊