One shot : Ye Mera Deewanapan Hai (Second story -Pg2)

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hermosoanu123

@hermosoanu123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Bow down to Ur creative skills .. amazing ones

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@Endgame

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

really loved this concept and his dewaanapan
such real feeling
hats off to you

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maancrazy

@maancrazy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Beautiful ! It's amazing how you wrote 2 polar opposite stories inspired by the same song ! The first one is full of pain and melancholy and the second one is full of hope for a better future! Hats off to your creativity and beautiful writing 👏

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

same song, but different shades of deewanapan and the passion of love.
you have written it beautifully, Nivi..

suicide is something not to be encouraged. I would not call it is an act of cowardice nor will call it as bravery. It is a reflection of an emotional state of the mind and heart.
a sad ending, but leaves the imprint of the intensity with which she loved him, to the extent to feel life as meaningless without him.

and the other one creates a hopeful mind..
it was a striking contrast between the two stories still bearing the same underlying theme.
she added a meaning to his otherwise depressing world.
he expressed his feeling and there is no go back now even if it takes a lifetime to wait for her.

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latecomer

@latecomer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Na umr ki seema ho na janm ka ho bandhan... Jab pyar kare koi toh dekhe keval mann...

But the irony is that we are all shackled in the do's and don't of society and with this comes many self imposed restrictions.

Loved this beautiful portrayal of deewanapan.