One shot : Ye Mera Deewanapan Hai (Second story -Pg2)

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

One sided love is always painful..
But love doesn't happen just like that..
It is the other person who consciously or unconsciously give encouragement to it..
Loved the way you described it..
It brought out the exact emotions..

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Taahir

@taahir004

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+ 10

Posted: 7 years ago

A Painful OS

Yes one sided Love always ends up in bitterness the pain is overwhelming

and I wonder if any person having a one sided love do they have any courage to go

on living and maybe fulfill their lives but with Geet she ended everything

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

heart wrenching painful OS! well written! her love was one sided! she gave on life!

Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago

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cutical

@cutical

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

Very oainful cant imaginr maan with some one else feeling bad fr feet
Plz can we get a another part of this os
May be maan lied he hqve some disese so geet can have a better life he actually nt married in real hope its happens n maan saves geet plz do some thing its painful i cant sleep plz

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latecomer

@latecomer

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Posted: 7 years ago

she killed herself...thats quite unfair. Okay he was married to somebody else agree but so what. loves most of time are not requited.[BR][BR] One should never commit such an impulsive act of self destruction.

Alas! she was love starved person... [BR][BR] and chose death.
Yeh mera deewanapan hain is beautiful song by mukesh ...one of my favourite[BR]...and deeply felt here

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979861

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: cutical
Very oainful cant imaginr maan with some one else feeling bad fr feet
Plz can we get a another part of this os
May be maan lied he hqve some disese so geet can have a better life he actually nt married in real hope its happens n maan saves geet plz do some thing its painful i cant sleep plz

I didn't mean to make you upset. Most of my stories are inspired by songs. When I heard the song I had to pen down something on it. But my mood was a bit morbid and the story took this form. I like it as it is so wouldn't change it or add things.

However, listening to Ali Sethi's version of the song I did get another idea. I will post it here. Perhaps, a better ending there.

Thank you for your thoughts.

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

geet ek deewana tha aur maan ek dewana hai
so beautiful

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

Beautiful story..
Age difference is a huge thing in our society..
If the guy is 10-12 years elder, people don't seem to mind it..
But same is not the case with girls..
People think it's a sin to love a guy younger to your age..
It is a taboo subject..
Loved how maan did not give up his love for the sake of society..
After all it's him who has to live with her & not the society..
This is an independent story from the other one..
I liked it this way coz, that story was perfect as it was..
changing anything would have ruined it's essence..
both the stories were beautifully penned..

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

realistic OS! age has always been an issue! Maan loves her despite her being a divorcee and elder than him! but Geet skeptical! he is willing to wait