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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

thanks for updating!


Part 11

outstanding update! well written!

Prem senses Annie is upset! She is happy Maan is at HP and will bring Geet back!

glad Annie realises what Geet went and is going through! she was wrong not to trust Geet!! Geet had nobody except Shantima!

Annie and Prem feel guilty! I agree with Prem that they are also at fault!

while Maan has accepted Geet, she has lost faith in everything! Maan has a tough task ahead of him!

despite Annie's anger, Geet still cares for her! can understand Geet's hesitation to message Annie!

Geet's thoughts well portrayed! I agree with her! Maan shld have respected her! Hated that Annie cursed Geet!

Geet admires Maan and then reality hits her! she has no right on him! Maan has hurt so much! how will he take this pain away?

Maan lost in his Pari...but unable to say a word! oh no Geet's friends and family interrupt! they tease Maaneet unaware of the harsh reality!

at least Maan gets to know she likes mehendi! but sad seeing Geet lost interest in everything! this one year has changed her so much!

Geet scared of being near Maan!

Maan wants to give Geet the kundan necklace...but will she accept it?

update soon





Once again Thanks a lot darl for your lovely comments dear.

Shall update it mostly today.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: vrinda22

Ani lost in her past

Prem que about her aloofness
She get to know about maans change
N was truly happy for geet
Prem still unaware of Vikram's deeds
Geet all lost in her thoughts
How she lived the past one year just by looking at maan
Now when maan is standing before her
She couldn't believe it
The teasings making both blush
Maan going to make geet wear the jewel given by dadi
Nice part



Oh...thanks a lot for your comments Valli... 😊

Difficult situation for Maan to win her trust and for Geet to believe him.

Love to read your comments. 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: fict

Liked the update. Annie is repenting saying those harsh words to Geet but she is unaware of the deep mark it has left on Geet. With Maan's hatred already making her feel inadequate, Annie's words just reinforced for Geet that she has no future in Khurana family. Prem was right in that they all are to blame for some extent for the miserable life Geet led in KM. Maan waiting for a chance to talk to Geet and I feel even if he explains everything , Geet will still not excuse his behaviour as he didn't even gave her respect as a human being in the past one year. Long way before she even dares to believe again. Looking forward to read next.



Oh..thanks a lot Dimpy. 😊

Annie's words had definelty moved her further.

You said it right...its a long way to go for Maan
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: nehaa9

Wonderful update
Like it
On one point I thought maan is so selfish when he gets to know that geet is his pari than he is after her otherwise he didn't care about his wife
Poor geet thinks that maan may be getting angry
Waiting for next

Update soon



Thank you for your lovely comments dear.

Well...A small correction...Maan had made up his mind to meet Geet and give her all rights of his wife as Geet had made a place for herself in his life. and at that time he didnt even know how she looks he kept this secret to himself till he got to meet her in HP and had a shock of his life to know GEET is none other than PARI. And when he came to know his Pari is his GEET...his guilt got even more intensified.

Geet doesnt know all this that's happened. She still remembers the Maan whom she knows till last week.

Will be posting the next part soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: maanyouarehot

Nice story...love to read...



Thank you and welcome to ORP . please do read from beggining and comment 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: uluvmg

wonderful update..loved it...nice convo between anni & prem where anni shocked & happy to hear maan wanted geet back in his life but she had guilt for her relation with geet on vikram's issue...in HP geet was thinking & worried for maan's anger about the function... very well described as geet had to leave her myka & sasural to live alone unknown to maan's changed behavior... maan suddenly entered in geet's room which made her happy but she was scared as she remembered fb in the mansion she had secret hideout to have a glimpse of her handsome hubby & became happy to see him in B/W attire... its true ideal wife (geet) is any woman who wants an ideal husband.. maan lost to see his pari in pink...all girls were teasing maaneet which both liked but geet was upset to know maan's rude behavior...wow maan had geet's jewel box with him & he wanted to give her a golden necklace instead of artificial which she had forgotten to wear...excited for next...



Thank you for your long and lovely comment dear 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167

Nice part

Annie is feeling guilty
Geet is in dilemma
Maan lost in geet
While geet fears him...
Will b waiting for next



Hey Sanju..how are you??

Thank you for your comments dear 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
How are you ?
Are you updating today 😃


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushibloom

How are you ?

Are you updating today 😃




Had been again a very busy day today. Just got time to on my laptop. trying my max possible to update today.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom



Had been again a very busy day today. Just got time to on my laptop. trying my max possible to update today.


Koi nahi

Update when u can.

Take care akka

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