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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for pm for part10. Nice update.
The condition of geet brings tears in eyes. Every moment of her life turned into tough examination n she has to do struggle lonely to pass it. As if the behaviour of maan was not enough, the immaturityn rudeness of annie put salt on the wounds given by maan. What we can say about vikram when her own family was not supporting her.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for pm f9r part 11. Lovely update.
May be past was bitter but gave lessons. Annie too learned alot from past specially to value the person who cared you. Prem is right as a family everyone is responsible for what geet had faced in one year. Now her heart is full of fears n insecurities about present n future.
The scene of geet room when maaneet are surrounded by youngsters is fantastic. I love their teasing n maaneet blushing. Waiting for next.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Risingsun626

Thanks for pm for part10. Nice update.

The condition of geet brings tears in eyes. Every moment of her life turned into tough examination n she has to do struggle lonely to pass it. As if the behaviour of maan was not enough, the immaturityn rudeness of annie put salt on the wounds given by maan. What we can say about vikram when her own family was not supporting her.



Hey How are you? Long time :)


Thank you for your long comments for last 2 updates. Love to get your inputs. 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushibloom

How are you akka

Waiting for update 😛



How are you Bacha?? 😃

Will be mostly updating today.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Part 11

Just Fabulous Chapter

Annie and Prem's conversation was awesome and its sad that even Prem feels
that not only their brother neglected Geet but both siblings too did not support her
with regard to Maan
Annie though feels guilty about the Vikram incident but she also is happy that at least Maan is at Geet's home and he is ready to accept Geet as his wife
Maan coming to Geet's room and on seeing her he is mesmerized with her beauty while she fears that he is angry at her for the function
when the group of girls tease him both Maan and Geet shies but then again she remembers its all just pretense as her husband is not truly hers though she admires him and probably already loves him but she is always hit by the harsh reality that he does not love her and she does not exist in his life
while Maan is annoyed with himself for losing the past year with the person he loves
but now he wants to tell her everything he wants to be around her admire her
thinking that Geet has returned the jewels he feels sadden by his own deeds



Ooh...thanks again for your lengthy comment dear.

I do remember you are going to take a short break. Shall miss on your comments. Take care. 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nefret19

O Re Piya (Chp 1-11)

Hi my dear. I have been wanting to read both O Re Piya & The Flower Basket for so long but couldn't get time. As I was on medical leave, I managed to read both of them & I absolutely loved them so much. I hope you don't mind me giving one comment for all of the 11 chapters of O Re Piya that I have read so far.

The moment I started reading the first chapter I got hooked. So much so that I read it all at one go. O Re Piya is such a fabulous story of Maaneet filled with the dynamics of their relationship. I loved the concept, the way the characters were conceived of, the way the story was developed told right from the start. I loved both of the families for the way they loved Maan & Geet respectively. Be it Daadi Ma, Shanti Ma, Maan's siblings or Geet's family, I like the way you have shaped and developed each & every character. I hate that aunt of Geet's who was always putting Geet & her family down so much. And it was as if the men were so helpless? I really felt like slapping her hard whenever she hurt Geet & her mumma. And that villain Vikram! Such a lecherous pervert with such filthy mind and deeds. And I can't believe that Annie was so blinded by that pervert that she accused Geet so terribly breaking her further...I so hate Annie for doing this to Geet. But I am so thankful to Arjun for being there for Geet and also for giving it straight to Annie on her accusations and showing her the ultimate truth. Annie should be so ashamed of herself. I do not want Geet to reply to Annie...because I want Maan & Prem to know every single thing & for them to set Annie straight & make her seek forgiveness from Geet. I want Maan to defend Geet in each & every circumstances that she could face. I want her fiercely protected by Maan with all of his love for her.

What I loved most was the way you portrayed Geet, her innocence, her angelic heart and her deepest emotions. My heart just broke with Geet's...I kept crying through her ordeal & emotional turmoil...her spirit giving way...her emptiness...from the way Maan treated her, broke her heart and eventually her spirit to shreds...The way you expressed Geet's emotions truly transported me into her shoes...The way she was yearning for Maan, his glance, for him to say a single word to her...for him to see her...to talk to her...to at feel at least something for her...And the way her broke her truly made me cry buckets & buckets full... I was like arrrggghhh how could you be so heartless Maan!!! I literally felt like shaking, strangling and beating up the stubborn & duffer Maan...The way he turned so heartless and blind to Geet's existence without even giving her a look...If only he had he would have known that she was his Pari...How could he...how could he be so heartless was all that I was thinking and scolding Maan non-stop. But the moment he knew that Geet was his Pari I fell for him...The way he openly admitted his wrongdoings to his family and told them the whole truth how he had misunderstood and that it's was indeed Geet that he has been in love with all the while...I fell for the way he regretted every single thing he said and did...the way he was so remorseful...and how determined he was to make it all up to his Geet and shower all of his love on her and wanting to give the all the happiness in life...This is the Maan I fell for...The Maan who is crazily in love with his Pari a.k.a Geet...I so love the cute lovestruck Maan who followed Geet all the way back...the way his eyes never leaves her...the way he wants her with him every second...the way he yearns for her...the way he cares for her so daringly in front of her family members...the way he is so sensitive of her dilemma in answering to her family...And how he tackles the situations for her...I absolutely loved the way he answered back that rude arrogant aunt of hers and stood up for his Geet & her family. The way he strictly told them that there was no way anyone can say a single word on his Geet nor even think of coming in between them. I so loved that coming from Maan. That was when I felt like hugging Maan. And even more so when he went to the temple where they had gotten married...and realised how Geet & her family must have felt when that monster aunt of hers taunted Geet like as though she was a nobody getting married in such a rundown temple...And he decided to do good deeds by rebuilding the temple. All this is due to Geet and what she means to Maan. Now I hope that aunt of hers gets so tongue tied that she hides her face in a pile of hay...LOLOLOL:):):) I hate her for being so mean to Geet and her family. And I love Maan for standing up for his Geet and her family showing everyone how proud he is of his angel of a wife:):):)

I admired the way he manoeuvred the whole situation so that Geet can go to college as she wished and then picking her up so super-fast...and how he cared for her when she was coughing...He can't bear to be away from her even a single moment...So dreamy. So happy that Geet's family are doing the rituals now and in this way they can come together closer...I want Maan to make Geet comfortable because she is wondering about his behaviour so much in her mind. I hope that at the end of the rituals and they are finally together in their room Maan would apologise to Geet and explain everything to her so that she knows what he did wrong and why...and also that she was the one he loved and still loves...I want this to be a fresh new beginning for them...I am so excited or the upcoming updates dearie:):):)




Hey Indira...A very very warm welcome to ORP 🤗

For me, being late doesnt matter. Being in line with my FF does matter a lot...you have really made my day with your long long comments my dear. I cant tell you how happy and proud I feel. You are so in line with my story and you have read it detailedly ...understanding the circumstances Maaneet are covered into and Geet's pain, Maan's Guilt...yes..they have some more path to cross to have a complete patchup.

Thank you and please continue to pour your comments for the future updates.🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: preyasekar

Super update

Maan is very much in love with geet .but geet is very much disturb
Hope soon maan and geet will be confessed their feelings



How are you? Thanks for your sweet comments dear.😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: richa_kapoor

Update 11:

Lovely update. Annie final got to know about all the happenings through Prem ans both were excited about this too. It's a good sign and opportunity for Annie to talk with Geet regarding this and clear their all misunderstanding. But Geet was skeptical and it's natural. Basically she went through so much emotional trauma which made her blank and stopped thinking anything positive. No doubt she reached this way as in desert we assume real water to a mirage. Same with Geet. She had been living her past year in a desert with no hope. How come she suddenly believe that she got whole sea.
Her life becomes a drama where she has to pretend all the time. It must be tough and breaking her more.
Maan wants to approach but now time playing with him. At least he observing and marking her likes in his mind but when? When she lost interest in everything😕
I really hope they got time where he talk to her..

I know it make no sense but still one que is bothering me every time. Its okay he fall for Geet actually. But what if he calls for someone else? Then he will never regret his tortures on Geet... That is not acceptable. Though I want to see Maaneet together but still this question always eating me😕



Once again thank you for your comments dear 🤗

Yes...the right time is yet to come for them to talk it out and as you know you cannot expect the talk to be sweet one 😕...

I know it make no sense but still one que is bothering me every time. Its okay he fall for Geet actually. But what if he calls for someone else? Then he will never regret his tortures on Geet... That is not acceptable. Though I want to see Maaneet together but still this question always eating me😕
You will hopefully get an answer for this at a little later stage. Definetly, Maan is answerable for hurting GEET for his PARI. And that will happen soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushibloom

Part 11

So now Annie is aware of how her bro changed and want to get back geet , but she is not aware of how far geet has come in this one year 😕

Whereas geet is completely lost in her miseries to even notice the changes in maan .
Even though if get to see any she would think it to be her illusion
She has blocked herself from all these , it is so painful for her
She has this mindset that nothing is gonna change ever , Everytime she hopes it is broken so brutally that she stopped herself from expecting anything

Unaware of the fact that maan was in love with her from the very beginning and he has destroyed everything with his own ignorance

Waiting for this function
Let's see if he gets to talk to her



Thank you for your long comments dear 😃...yes...its not at all easy for Geet to give in so easily. Maan's advances will only put her into fear and confusion.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: PaintedSky

Annie part is not so interesting ... minus annie update and story is fabulous.



Annie part was required for its own reasons...i was about to put this at the later stage but decided to bring in this part earlier. 😊

Thanks for liking the rest 😊

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