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maaneetcraze

@maaneetcraze

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#51

Read in the farewell thread
A different concept
Liked it bt it was incompleted hope this time u will fill the blanks

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custodian75

@custodian75

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Wow! An artificial life form. That's something I have not read about maneet. I imagined many things about Geet but not this. No wonder she asked him to drop her away from her home. Even after this Maan promises to stay with Geet forever.

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#53

awesome update maan has been noticing geet for many days he is curious of how much silent and empty her eyes her he feels she is in pain dev appoints geet as maan secretary maan lost in her Geet doing her work well and maan feel happiness just having her around him taking care of her protecting her he likes to do geet was in archives when she didn't return maan went to see her was shocked seeing her faint he was even more shocked to know she was a robot from another time but he didn't care his love for her is far more strong to care whether she is human or not I am wondering usse bacche kase honge buddy care to explain STRICTLY ON FACEBOOK

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swapna.p

@swapna.p

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Nice update...

Thank you for pm..

Continue soon..

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Karamjeet Kaur

@karamjeet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#55

Unique start...Interesting concept...
Maan in love with her...
She is a Robert...
its shocking for me...
OK...
but loved it...
Maaneet moments r Superbbb...
looking forward for next part...
can't wait to know what gonna happened next???

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CRAZYCUTEE

@CRAZYCUTEE

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#56

SUPERB UPDATE

LOVED IT READ AGAIN

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Shraddha Sinari

@SHRADDHA2102

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#57

OMG !!!!

IN LAYMEN LANGUAGE GEET IS ROBOT... OMG THIS OS FREAKING AWESOME CONCEPT ON GF. LOVE IT... EVEN AFTER KNOWING GEET TRUE IDENTITY MAAN IS PROTECTING HER THATS REALLY NICE OF HIM...

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@jssood

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#58

geet emptinrss in her eyes is justbcoz she is not a human but a robbot.????

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#59

thanks 4 da pm! fab banner! awesome update! well written! Maan watches Geet! she reveals she is not human but a robot! Maan stunned and decides 2 be with her! update soon