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@LovelyUmang5

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#61

okay.. I was travelling since two days so couldn't reply earlier..
so maan was watching geet from long time near bus stop..
He din't realize she worked in his company from so long..
He might be very happy to get her as his assistant..
why was there sadness in her eyes.. did she have a bad past??
OMG!! geet is a robo.. m shocked..
maan is still in love with her even after knowing this..
really a hatke concept..
loved it..

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SweetestPari

@SweetestPari

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#62

Wonderful concept...

Very different..

Couldn't have guessed it too that Geet could be a robot too..

This is the first time m reading a story like this one :-)

Loved it... :-)

Perfect name for the story :-)

It very interesting..

Continue soon..

Eagerly waiting for next part...

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cutical

@cutical

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#63

oh no wat is tbis u gave us a shock 😲 geet a robot n i was thinkung tht she lost some one thats wy she is sad plz update next part soon but how robot can wrte a letter 😕

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preetidhawan

@preetidhawan

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#64

Nice Update

Maan got attracted towards Geet,s eyes and one day found Geet as his PA but Geet is not human , she is robot tu usse job ki kya jaroorat, so many questions in mind, eagerly waiting for next

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#65

Interesting start

Liked it!!

Maan was intrigued by Geet and was lured by Geet's emotionless and emptiness filled eyes. He wanted to solve this mystery of her which made him feel attracted towards her. He comes across truth that Geet is not human but an artificial intelligence humanoid from different timeline. Maan was determined to support her promises to be with her forever.

Thanks for the pm!

:))

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seema saini

@HateMee

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#66

Wohhh she is not human but machine...woww

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seema saini

@HateMee

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#67

have guessed lots of things while reading but not this 😆

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Nefret19

@Nefret19

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#68

Congratulations buddy:) An awesome start with a very very unique & intriguing story line. Geet being an artificial humanoid is very novel. I felt so sad when Geet apologized for not being a human and I could feel that sadness emanating out to me...It doesn't matter to my sweet Maan who loves her as she is...So so sweet the way he comforted her and hugged her with his promise...Loved that buddy...I loved this unique story very much:):):) All the best buddy:):):)

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payal.gupta177

@payal.gupta177

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#69

Fantastic start. Unique and different. Maan is intrigued by the silent eyes of a girl and followed her, came to know that she works in his office . To his astonishment his brother appointed her as his PA and both became friendly. Geet turned out to be a humanoid and apologised to Maan for not being a human, Maan promised to be with her always. New concept , never attempted by anyone I guess. Loved it. Will wait for next.

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drrose31

@drrose31

Achiever

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#70

Conggozz for the new work dearie...

well prologue, was that really??? Just two lines????

Part 1

To be honest, i was expecting same... some sorta Geet's bad past being the cause of her emptiness but well, at the last point...Ahh She's a Robot... Ehh...

Now that's seems interesting to read...

Thanks for pm dearie...

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