Clandestine~ #Thread 1* Maaneet FF Maan Geet[T2 opened]

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 6 years ago

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PRECAP :

His eyes mimicked her actions and her plump lips invited him immediately!!

It was just one breath away as his soothing voice enchanted her, "I want to...Umm..Can I...Kiss...Hmm..." That immense innocence gleaming in her eyes made him shy for a moment!!

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Posted: 6 years ago

#32

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"Dear heavens...You smell so yummy..." Nuzzling in his chest spoke like a delirious entity that she was, "Oye sadu tum itna perfect kyun ho...

Kiya ho jata tumhe agar mujhse thoda sa pyaar kar lete tum Maan...Sadu...akhdu ghamandi..." She cutely jerked his collar, changing her expressions frequently which made Maan shocked as ever!!

"Hmm toh main tumhe ghamandi lagta hoon??

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#33

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"Tussi mainu chad ke naa jao... She was sounding beyond cute!!

"Main yehi hoon...Hum ghar jaa rahe hain... As Maan was petting a wild Geet in order to tame her but making him more smitten she clutched on his right hand which was caressing her tender cheek!!

"Mujhe ghar nahinnn janaaa...Mujhe aapke paas rehna hain...Purr puruu... Saying so in an intoxicated voice Geet dragged Maan closer to her, looking at him with her dilated pupils!

Edited by Iptida - 7 years ago

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Posted: 6 years ago

#34

PRECAP : "Sach batao...Ye kiya naya game hain?? Maan was pinned down to the wall while that sharp edge of the knife was a few centimeters away from his throat as Geet was pressing her right hand on his collarbone!!

"Umm...Aise pagalpan nahin kartey...Neechey rakhdo chot laag jayegi tumhe..." And there was a war scene started where Geet was scrutinizing Maan without blinking and he was trying to get a good hold on both her hand and waist, "Areh aise kiya dekh rahi ho...Haan tumko hi lagegi chot...Main toh fisal ke nikal jaunga...

And ye ye surgical knife hain kiya? Omg!!

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Posted: 6 years ago

#35

PRECAP : Click Play and Enjoy the Precap

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HVLLdozQ9Mg[/YOUTUBE]

Yes...This is the precap for next few updates... 😆😉

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 6 years ago

#36

Important Note : Here I am again with another big update

But For Next update again : The target is 60 +likes and 20+ comments. It's a request to all the silent readers to come forward and hit the like button for both parts.

As for comments it's very important for me to be guided by feedback comments. So do share your support.

18+ Updates - in future if there is any 18+ update you must know it would be shared with only those who have liked all the parts from chapter 1 till the end.

Thanks for all the support!!! Keep reading!!

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Posted: 6 years ago

#37

Done.

Next update within 3 days if the target is completed!!

Thanks for all the support!!!

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Posted: 7 years ago

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NOTE : Many of you seem to think that Aayan has spiked Geet's drink, but read it carefully...He didn't.. It was his friends who did that and he was informed later!!

I am hoping to get some reviews folks, don't you people think at least that is least you can give me for updating ? Lack of response is highly demotivating!! Wishing all your support!!

Feature comment for last chapter!! Special thanks to Khwaish!!😳

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
thanks for updating and the super duper long update!

Chap 2 - Part 1 and 2...

lovely gifs...⭐️👏

enthralling updates! wonderfully written!

hating this Ayaan... he just wants to get close to Geet!

hmm why does Geet want to dance with Maan? she seem way to interested in Maan!

Loved how Geet handles Ayaan!

on no he spiked her drink just to get close to her! but glad his plan flopped! haha Geet going after Maan!

Ayaan deserves this! this Ayaan 😡

Maan stunned seeing Geet talking to him!!

so sweet of Maan to compliment Geet! he is a gentleman! enjoyed Geet;s ramblings! oh no she is drunk!

omg she made Maan dance with her! she is indeed smart! Geet affected by Maan's touch and closeness and so is Maan! sparks are flying btwn them!

lovely song! I am surprised that Geet let Maan get close to her!

Maan realises she is drunk.

liked that Maan wants to protect her dignity!

👏Outstanding comment!! I am overwhelmed with you awesome response Khwaish!!🤗

Thank you for liking the GIFs!! 😳

Aayan - He is not that bad, it's just that he is quite normal how boys are these days!! He doesn't just want to get close to Geet, because of her aloofness he is trying to make things ease up a little!! His character will shape up more in the upcoming updates!!

Geet - Why she wants to dance with Maan!! 😆 Maybe she dislikes him or likes him!! Both reasons can make any person interested towards another one!! With upcoming updates your views will get more clear about Geet!!

Drinks - Aayan didn't spike Geet's drink, it's his friends who took things on their own!!

Maan - He is definitely a gentleman!! In my stories you will rarely find Maans lacking morality from the fidelity side!! Even though it is fiction but I do not like ruining the main essence of Maan's real characterization on the show!! And one of his strength which sets him apart from everyone else is his loyalty!! Though I might try dark types in future for different essence but magically a Casanova falling for the girl next door aint gonna happen!! 😆 So till then you will have to bear my high moral-ed Maans!! 😆

Glad that you liked the song!! 😳

Thank you for this lovely long res!! I hope I am not pressuring you for giving long comments baby!!

Edited by Iptida - 7 years ago