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She moved her eyes again at those red burn marks!! Brutal!! Atrocious!! Vicious!!
Alas!! This is what expected of men!! Yet she was caressing the wounds of her best friend who had those scars, still fresh regarding his latest agony!! Nowadays seems like women doesn't want to be behind in any department!!

Another reason to despise the ideas of orchestrated marriage!! The not knowing criteria comes with a lot of clandestine agendas!

Here the contempt of hers was peaking high and there he at some other city was rushing to catch the train!!

But some beggar was pushed badly and he simply couldn't ignore that like everyone else!!

"No problem...Ek aur ghanta khade hokey gujar lenge..." Smiling with his own thoughts he dragged the old rusty man back and got himself inside the train just before a few seconds where it was about to get closed!!

I am Maan Singh Khurana!! An extremely simple individual!! I just maintain myself well otherwise there is nothing which would put me in the crowd of uniques!! I guess I consider myself quite dull and boring!

Yes, I was very reluctant to get married to her when I got to know about her!! The reason was very simple!! She is going to be much more educated than me, also will earn twice as me!!
No, it's not my ego but concern for her!! I felt she deserves way better!!

And me? I am a mere employee at a bank who has done CA though it sounds so hollow in front of her!! She is doing her major in oncology!! Cancer specialist to be precise!!

Not to even mention the lavish lifestyle she is used to live in!
So yeah!! All her behavior which she is doing now must be very much suitable for me!! I don't blame her...She is naive and young!!

Also irresistible!!

His last thoughts were tender and inexplicit which ultimately got pierced by her loud voice, "Tum koi doubt maat rakhna...This so called marriage is certainly not made in heaven Maan...I am not here to cook...You won't change a single thing about me...Nor will you interfere in my life...Got it??" She blazed fire in her whole conduct while declaiming, those eyes of hers were searing him down!!

"Haan Ji..." His counterclaim was compact and precise!!

"Kiya haan ji?? Don't just stare at me...I will not magically melt by your looks only...with passing days...Fyi...Oh, It means for your information...I am Geet...Handa...Not burdened by your Khurana name...My father must have been lost it when he thought there is not a single guy better than you...He must be burdened by the shit your grandfather once did to us..But I...Geet Handa...am not affected by you...So you better..." She continued spitting fire while he was ogling at her nonstop!!

Aarrgghh!! He is certainly getting on my nerves!! What a shameless creature!!

"Ji..." Maan was much smoother this instance!!

"What is this ji ji?? I wonder tumko kuch samajh bhi aa rahi hogi ke nahin..." She hissed and stepped closer to him in anger!!

"Nahin...Itni angreji toh shayed mujhko aati hain...Samajh lete hain hum...Anyway, Aap jaisa chahti hain...waisa hi hoga..." Setting her nerves on fire he dared to move his bold lips!!

"Yeah...Better...Main jaisa chahoon waisa?? Ok!! Now if you will iron this dress of mine?? I need to meet my boyfriend...!!" Geet controlled herself and smirked while her phone started ringing!!

"Haan...Dev?? Hello?? Yeah...I am coming...Just give me half an hour..." Maan saw her whole demeanor changed instantly and she flashed that extraordinarily beautiful smile of hers!!

"Aap bura naa maaney toh ek baat kahoon??" Tossing her phone away she looked at Maan!!

"Bolo...And stop this aap aap...I am 10/12 years younger than you...Tumhare choti behen se bhi kam umar hain meri...Toh ye aap aap jaap kahin aur karna..." How can she not taunt him for the age gap which is huge in her eyes, "Sahi waqt pe shaadi karli hoti mere umar ki beti bhi shayed ho jati iski..." She muttered to herself which he indeed heard, still remained unaffected!

"Ahmm...7 years ka difference hain..not 10 or 12" He cleared his throat nervously at his blunt wife, "Main baas keh raha tha ki shaam hone ko hain...Kiya main aap...Matlab tumhe chorne jaau?? Akeli delhi mein aise..." His words got sliced in the middle!

"How cunning...Dev...My boyfriend...He is my childhood love...Tum agar ye soch rahe ho naa...Ke usey jaake kuch ulta sidha bologe it's not going to work...He will trust me only..." Geet stabbed her finger on Maan's shoulder which he caught momentarily and ended up giving her a huge shock with his next words!!

"What do you think what will I say?? That you try so many things...project that you despise me...Yet ended up kissing me back on our first night?? Tab yaad nahin aaya tha tumhe tumhari friends...Oops sorry childhood friend...
Nada..correction BOYFRIEND!!" Holding her soft hand firmly Maan smirked, those heartbeats of hers enhanced rampant within seconds!!

"Howw daree youuuhh..." Geet hissed under her teeth only to be harshly pulled into his arms as he pinned her to the wall behind while pressing his lips momentarily!!

Detaching that soft and brief peck he spoke, "Ssshhh...Awaz niche...Bohot der se...Nope kafi dino sey... I am listening to your shits..." Hearing his husky voice her stomach was filled with new pulses as she looked into his orbs valiantly, "You won't like to meet your so called bf with your lips being swollen...Will you??" He was holding her dangerously close as their lips were a few breaths away while her eyes widened with shock grasping the consequences which were advancing!!



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Chapter 1 :C L A ND E S T I N E



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Secrets, concealment, hidden closets- these were something which she feared the most!!

Gladly that was never present between them!!

She can't remember the first time she met him, the cause might lies in the beginning itself as she has known him forever her whole little life!!

"Geet...Hehehehe...No no no...No tickling please...I will do all the homeworks... The little boy who was running for his life from his devilish naughty best friend was trying hard to clutch into those floating invisible oxygen!!

"Yeah!! You better...D!! D for dev and D for devil...But also D for... A little Geet screeched while glaring at her playmates residing in her cute room!!

"Doll... Dev immediately chanted while gaping at Geet lovingly!!

"Right...Which is me..So... Tapping his small nose Geet was about to boast but got hindered by her another friend's sharp voice!!

"Nahin...Geet..D for dayan bhi toh hain...Tu woh hain... A cute boy in his glasses put his remark and initiated his running spell instantly!!!

"Harsh kiya kaha tuney...Rukk...Dev nahin aab toh tere se karwaungi main homework... A furious Geet too stretched her small legs and ran after Harsh like a tornado!!

"Yaar kaisi ladki hain ye...Ghar pe mehmaan bulake aise kaun homework karwata hain... Panting heavily Harsh finally gave up being cornered by Geet!!

"Main karwati hoon..Waise bhi, Mera kiya kasoor...Jaake miss Lucinda ko koi samjhaye...Maine thodi na diya hain...ye!! Said a pouting Geet looking at Roohani, her another bestie and she cutely patted Geet's back in condolences!!

"Geet betey?? Rano's loud voice disrupted all their playing session the very next moment as Geet jumped out of fear because she was in her threatening avatar to get the homework done by all her besties which her mother definitely would not like if revealed!!

"Thank god aunty aa gayi...Ufff Harsh sighed relief immediately in eagerness, later got burned by Geet's scowling!!

"Ji mummy?? Keeping the most innocent face possible Geet turned over and face her mother!!

"Beta idhar aao...Ye kiya baccho tum sab yaha pe kiya kaar rahe ho...Udhar tumhara ek aur dost akela baitha hain naa...?? Rano was standing at the door and she waved her hand by calling her ever so innocent (!) Daughter closer!!

"Kaun dost?? This time Gehna, the elder sister of Geet spoke who was chatting with her friends at one corner of Geet's room!!

"Maan... Rano informed that unfamiliar name to both her daughters, "Wo dekho...Kaise chup chap akela khada hain...Khurana sahab ke betey hain woh... Pointing her fingers towards the huge party room she made them look at the furthest corner where a boy wearing white was sitting silently, alone, fidgeting a little!!

Meanwhile, Amrit Handa, elder brother of Geet also reached their direction as Rano called him too!!

"Paar woh hamara dost thodi na hain mummy...Hain naa...?? Geet who was inside her mother's hug she blurted out in confusion while looking at that boy called Maan, he seemed of Gehna or Amrit's age to her!! Meaning quite elder than her!! Had long eyelashes and a very affectionate pair of eyes, as if those two orbs are the mirror of his heart!!!

"Koi baat nahin...Main milwati hoon na tum logo se... With a warm simper, Rano called the calm and timid Maan towards them while reluctantly enough yet he stepped forward to meet Rano!!

"Ji aunty?? His soft meek voice entered their senses!!

"Beta tum uss koney mein akele kyun baithe ho...Ye hain Amrit..mera beta...Tum dono ek hi class mein ho na betey?? Aur ye hain meri badi beti Gehna aur choti beti Geet... Introducing everyone to each other Rano cupped Maan's face lovingly, "Aur ye sare unke dost...tum yaha raho...kisi cheez ki jarurat ho toh sharmana maat...Party toh abhi abhi shuru huwi hain...Enjoy...Ok beta..Mwah... Kissing his forehead followed by ruffling his hair that warm lady left with a soothing smile plastering to her face while Maan looked at his new companions who were got a meek smile from him in return of their wait!!

"Hi Maan Bhaiyaa... He looked at the doll like creature who addressed him as brother and for some reason, he felt a little awkward as none calls him "bhaiya like that even Annie!! She calls him dodo and bhai!! Yeah, a peculiar pet name!!

However, swallowing the sudden uneasiness he faked a smile and proceeded with the greetings with all of them!!

That party was one of the reasons why he hated parties and denied to accompany his father most of the time when he had to attend similar events!!

On the other hand, Geet's memories long forgotten the one she ever interacted into her father's birthday and her life was going in a full swing!!

She was growing up and was one of those categories who were not so fascinated by the concept of love!! The harsh reality which our society offers had a lot to do with it!!

Her mother was also a working woman so most of the time she has been pampered by the maid Sushma who was appointed specifically to look after Geet!!

The tales of Sushma's daily life intrigued Geet to a great level!! Slowly enough yet she certainly developed a prenotion about the human society and was focused into her career vowing to escape from the cruel treatments society offered to the less fortunate or less educated ones!!

Good thing is that she was neither a feminist nor a misogynist!! Her practical mind has grasped it somehow that the coins can be dirty from both sides!! She firmly believed in equity!!

The secret of evil deeds lies in that flipping of coin!! Amidst all this there were a few bizarre incidents she faced; some by accident and few with sheer luck!! Or bad luck would be the correct pick!!!

In these 21 years of life, she was always the one reluctant to love amidst her social circle. Her friends even consulted her to see a doctor to check up for her uneven messed up hormones until that one day she met him in a wedding function. Today's similar ambiance is reminding her about all of that!!

He was handsome for sure but more than that she was attracted to his behavior... Such a gentleman he was with his extremely decent demeanor as he was firstly greeting the guests lovingly and then when that was done he was sitting in a corner with some old lady and was taking extreme care of that woman.

She was already 17 yet for the first time in a long time, her heart was beating fast just to capture his one gaze.

Maybe it was his remarkable personality which made him look more good looking like a prince!! Or it was the way he was walking with a straight attitude!!

However, The best thing about him was that he was treating everyone equally. No excused gazes were spared for any girls present there but just like Geet a lot of girl's attention was towards him.

Later however she got to know from the random gossips hovering over that he was probably committed to some girl... Yeah right that just totally got out of her mind. He must have a girlfriend which is why he is not even interested in anyone around him and was ignoring all the suggestive lewd tactics ploying around him.

For the first time, Geet could feel the definition of having an innocent crush on someone but her poor fortune was already hell bent on savoring her the bitter taste of heartbreak. Still, his loyalty for his ladylove was making her fall more for him. Admiring his loyalty she felt her faith in men was getting restored a little!!

She herself felt clueless about the whole squeezing feeling happening inside her heart. Even before she could celebrate and relish for having a crush on someone, she was experiencing grief...

Rest of the wedding days become critical and the anticipation of never being noticed by him, being invisibly unknown to him-twistedly multiplied the infatuation which was clouding in her naive heart!!

This first crush saga got over with herself crying in agony and scolding herself vehemently as within those few meetings how can she get so much obsessed with someone that was out of her own comprehension.

Taking more or less one and half months she got herself moved on from that crush which she started calling the funniest thing after getting her sanity restored slowly slowly. She didn't miss to boast about her crush as they all sighed relief that their bestie is indeed normal without any certain hormonal issues!! She too has a heart which can feel inclined to someone who probably hasn't even noticed her!!

However, that was definitely not the last crush she would ever feel... There was a few more to come but for that time being it was just a confirmation that she too was indeed an emotional creature who was too emotional as well as critical of sustaining any sort of romantic love for someone!!

Her study and getting independent being the first priority she ever held until now!!

But there ruining every plan of hers that guy stood on the other side throwing his huge smile as if doing some advertisement of some toothpaste company!!

And oddly she is nostalgic about that first crush of hers while she is about to get engaged to that shop of teeth!!

"Papa...Ye namuna chun ke laaye hain aap mere liye?? I can't believe this... Sach mein yehi milna tha... She was peeking from her room at the distance where a handsome guy in suits was standing with a big smiley face!! As if he was mocking her fate!! Every time she was seeing that smile it just burned her intolerably!!

"Beta... Aisa kyun bol rahi hain meri jaan... Ekbaar thandey dimag se soch..baat toh kar le... Mohindar smiled weakly at the naivety of his loving daughter, "Ladka dentist hain... Sharab nahin peeta, cigerate ki laat nahin hain... bohot accha ladka hain Geetu... He was lost in Geet's mind somewhere as she muttered in a low tone, "Usi kaa toh darr hain... Itna perfect?? Which her father didn't hear!!

"Tujhe aur teri career plans ko bhi acche se samjhega... Ek mauka toh deke dekh... Khurana khandan ko acche se jaante hain hum... Mohindar was continuing his convincing session as he placed his hand on Geet's head and caressed his fuming daughter!!

He knows she is young and vibrant. Which means the lack of experience and her young heart might not be ready for the new adaptations of her life!! Hence he was ready for her retaliation. It's just that he loves his crazy daughter to some extreme extent as she has been the only thing after Rano's sudden demise 1 year ago who have kept him going, gathered him strength!!

"Aunty...Please bachalo... Mohindar looked at the middle-aged woman whom he respects immensely because she has been another lamp in their desolated sad life after Rano's departure who have strongly bestowed so much support to the Handa family!! Madhuri Singh Khurana... The wife of his childhood friend Garv Singh Khurana... A retired government officer.

Who has one son and a daughter!! He loved living a simple life and had to travel across India because of his government job. Finally 8 or 9 years ago they have settled here in Delhi. Garv's elder brother Aadarsh is the one who owns the Khurana builders legacy now.

Mohindar has known these people his whole life so it's more like devoting the apple of his eye to his another family!! He knew they will treat Geet just same as their own daughter!!

"Lo batao itni bhi koi shareef ho sakta hain vala?? Ek kiya teen bar mil chuki hoon main... Aunty...Aab baas aap hi meri aankhri ummeed ho... Papa toh mujhe samajh bhi nahin rahe hain... Geet saw her father peering at Aayan's direction with a lost gaze while she shook Madhuri's hand who just entered her room with a heart warming smile!!

"Oho aisa kyun...Kiya huwa meri bacchi ko... Handa sahab aapne phir se danta hain kiya Geet ko??Madhuri cupped Geet's chin with an endearing gaze and put a stern voice when she glanced at a pondering Mohindar!!

"Areh...Kiyahh?? Nahin... Main kyun daantunga aapni gudiya ko... He looked at both of them and pouted sweetly, "Isko baas aapni shaadi ke baat se thoda sa chidh hain...Bacchi hain naa..Aap toh janti hain... Madhuri smiled back at Mohindar, she knew how hard it must be for him but right now making Geet calm was her top priority!!

"Accha?? Bhaisahab... Aap kuch maat kahiye... bin maa ki bacchi hain... Thoda waqt dijiye usey... Aur abhi umar hi kiya huwa hain?? Meri Annie se bhi choti hain na Geet?? Saying so with a loving tone Madhuri pulled Geet into a hug and saw Mohindar approaching outside as he saw some guests, "Haan ji... Woh dekhiye Sharma Jee... Main unko hello karke aata hoon...Aap dono jaldi aa jaiye... He pleaded with his eyes to calm a furoous Geet down to which madhuri nodded lightly!!

"Haan toh aap jo keh rahi thi...Abhi umar hi kiya hain meri...Wahi toh... Madhu aunty... Srif aap hi hain jo mujhe samajhti hain... Looking at her father's leaving frame Geet pursed her lips and was expressing all her grief to Madhuri, she loves that warm lady very much!!

For some reason, she didn't miss Rano tonight as much as she should have because of Madhuri... Who just listens to all her endless babbles and always supports her... Unlike her father who has hit his head or something that he is such inclined on this particular alliance!!

As they both were talking followed by Geet getting ready a slight knock was plastered on the door followed by his sweet yet sharp voice, "Maa...Aahmm... Geet sensed the tinges of nervousness the man behind her door tried to hide under the act of his clearing throat!!

"Haan Maan beta?? Madhuri opened the door halfway and looked at her son who was her whole world!!

"Engagement rings are ready... Guests bhi lagbhag saab hi aa chukey hain... Woh pandit jee thoda pareshan ho rahe hain... Unhe koi hawan mein jaana hain, sagai ka mahurat bhi nikalta jaa raha hain... Toh... Geet heard him vividly followed by the left profile of his sharp face was available to take a peep on!!

"Tum jaao Maan betey... Main aa rahi hoon Geet ko lekey... Madhuri looked back at Geet who was adjusting her neckpiece, standing in front of the mirror!!

"Papa aapko bula rahe hain maa...Abhi... Maan said again and with a nod Madhuri went outside, pacing her feet while Maan too dragged his legs slowly to follow his mother!!

"Ek minute Maan... Suno... He stumbled slightly, feeling confused by Geet's sudden invocation!!

Has she really called for him or he is mishearing things!!

"Haan??..😕 The question mark he had in his heart was well conveyed through his surprised facial expressions as well when he turned around, gradually, to find a beautifully adorned Geet in cherry red attire, standing before him, "Mera matlab hain, ji boliye..?? Retreating his gaze instantly to the floor he said while rubbing his windpipes of the throat, feeling his dry mouth!!

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She ignored his question royally and bolted in a low voice, "Ye bakwas mangni... Woh tumhara cousin... Aayan... Sach sach batao... Woh sahi mein itna shareef hain jitna dikha raha hain?? Sharab nahin peeta... Ciger ki laat nahin hain..." While talking she stepped closer to him, "Suno main na kaal ki paidayish hoon nahin... Ye jo tumlog sab milke mere papa ko bana rahe ho naa... samajh rahi hoon main..." By the end of her sentence she realized how proximate they were as Maan was literally stuck to the wall behind him with horror playing inside his innocent face!!
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Character Sketch :

Maan Singh khurana : Age 28, Mature , Simple , reserved, enigmatic, talks sufficient, mostly appear as an introvert,keen learner, Loves his family the most, Likes to be in solitude, holds high morals hence often called as an old-school amidst his friend circle and cousins!!

Physical appearance : 5.11'' tall ,Square shaped jaw
Well built
Black belt in Tai Chi , light brown complexion, dark brown eyes. Health conscious! He is intensely focused about his fitness.




Geet Handa : Age 21, wants to become oncologist, bright,Blunt bold yet reserved, Can appear as an extrovert but her real thoughts are hidden deep inside her, Intricate by nature, talkative, Lively, wants to become independent, believes in woman empowerment and equity!

Physical Appearance : Beautiful, 5.5 " tall, has long brownish hair, has soft curls, knows self defense.



KHURANA CLAN>>

Hansraj Singh Khurana : Founder of Khurana builders, 82 Years old, a witty old man with great intellect and enthusiasm!



Savitri Devi khurana : 75 years old, Maan's grandmother. A loving warn lady. She has 5 children. Aadarsh, Anika, Garv, Viraj and Vidya.




Garv Singh Khurana : Father of Maan, retired government officer, has temper issues but usually calm as a person, he likes to lead a simple life, less spoken, well educated!



Madhurima Singh Khurana : Maan's mother, warm loving lady, honest, meek, well spoken, her children and husband is everything to her!! Beautiful vibrant woman who spreads positivity everywhere!!



Annie Singh Khurana : Maan's Sister, Age 23, bubbly chirpy girl, happy go lucky by nature!!

Ayush Singh Khurana: Aadarsh's first child and Maan's cousin. Age 33, Handles Khurana Builders. Introvert, workaholic!! Married to Shweta, has 2 children!



Jyoti Singh Khurana : Second child of Aadarsh and Preetika... Age 27. married and settled into UK.

Aayan Singh Khurana: Aadarsh's youngest child, Age 25, a dentist! Funloving, happy guy!



Rest of the khurana Members shall be updated when it's required!!


Handa Clan>>

Mohindar Handa : A widower, recently lost his wife Rano in cancer 1 year ago. He has 3 children, Amrit, Gehna and Geet!! He has a big empire of family business and also a civil engineer by profession!! He is Garv's childhood friend!!

Jitendar Handa : Mohindar's younger brother.

Amrit Handa : Mohindar's first child, a civil engineer. Age 28. Stays at Pune due to his work, Got married last year to his longtime girlfriend Sudha and expecting a baby!!



Gehna Kapoor : Second child of Mohindar Handa, Age 25, Married to Arnav Kapoor and settled in new york!!



Other characters >>

Aditya Kapoor : Maan's best friend.




Dev khanna : Geet's childhood best friend.



More characters shall be added later!!



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Chapter 7 : Chaos!!



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70 hours ago. Khurana Mansion. The Morning after Geet and Aayan's infamous sangeet was over.

"What about Geet?? She will suffer in this... you guys know our culture right... The inquisitive voice of Aayush the elder brother of Aayan came through as Garv, Madhurima and Maan entered that humongous drawing room!!

"She is extremely pretty...Kuch din baad log sab bhul jayenge...She will get someone else! Who knows maybe she already has a boyfriend...Bas dabao mein aake haan bola hoga shaadi ke liye...Waise bhi kaal Geet ne bhi kaunsa kam tamasha kiya sharab pi ke...Sab toh samajh rahe hain uski shaadi Maan se hone wali hogi jis tarha se dono sath mein thhey!!! Aayan's mother spoke while not meeting her eyes with any of the people present there!!

"Ye kaisi baatein kar rahe ho aaplog!! This time it was Maan's father Garv who spoke with disbelief in his eyes while everyone looked at his appalled expressions!!

"Garv...Madhu..Maan...Accha huwa tum log bhi aa gaye...Hum ne ek faisala liya hain...We are breaking the alliance with Handa's..Woh toh baas papa ke zidd ke wajah se hum chup thhey...Par aab khair...And Madhu tumhe Handa sahab ko ye batana hain!! Kuch bhi bahana ban do... Aadarsh spoke in his casual voice as if it's not a big of a deal!!

"They are not suitable for our family... Aayush appended while Garv seethed in fury, "Ye kiya naya bakwas hain?? Do din pehle tak toh they were perfect?? Abhi achanak? Yahatak kaal raat tak aaplog Mohin ko convince karne pe tuley huwe thhey...
We are not really sure that Aayan is telling the truth...Ye bhi toh ho sakta hain he just got scared seeing all chaos of the wedding...Aur bahana bana raha hain...

"Iska wajah Aayan hain hi nahin chachu...
You know what really kabhi kabhi jo hota hain woh acche ke liye hota hain...God just saved us...I can't believe it...

Handa& Co has lost 67% of market share.
We just got informed through an inside source... The words Aayush delivered sounded like greedy venom spewing up!!

"Now it's clear to me why Mohindar Handa was so eager to get his daughter married!!! Vidya, Aayan's sister and Maan's cousin added some more fuel as Maan was just spectating all of them in a dead silence!!

"Vidya is right.. Waise bhi Aayan se galti huwi hain iska matlab ye nahin hain ki ek bankrupt insaan se rishta jodenge hum!! Another awful comment being passed by Aayan's mother!!

"More important than all that is Mohindar now has total 60 crores estimated loan in his name!! Now he lost the shares too... Tomorrow he might sell that house and all properties...Sooner or later humpe aane wala tha ye toh...Vidya sipped her coffee in leisure while looking at Maan's stern face, "Papa ne bohot mehnat ki hain Khurana Construction ko maintain karke rakhne ke liye...Baas daadaji ne kab kisko kiya wadah kiya inn sabke wajah se hum kyun bhugte!!!" Indirect taunt delivered towards Maan and his father as Vidya shot a brief cornerned gaze.

"So wedding cancel?? Confirmed??
Since now All of a sudden Mohindar Handa is a big culprit... Shooting a spiteful smirk towards Vidya, Maan asked maintaining calmness with great difficulty!!

"No doubt in that!! Aayush sounded firm, a smirk appearing on his face.

"Waah...Veerji...Parzayi ji...
Kaal raat tak toh aap logone decide kiya ke Mohindar ko Aayan ka sach batana farz tha lekin phir bhi mahol theek karne ki kaushish karenge...Kal tak toh badnami se bada darr lag raha tha??
Par aab ye nahin socha kisi ne ke Geet ka kiya hoga...Ek bar uss bacchi ke...Maan can't forget the look his mother had while speaking to all those people who he thought of having blood relations!!!

But only blood relations that proved to be. Because their thinking can never sway away like that!!

"Fine, we will find someone suitable for her!! Their audacity just keeps growing!!

In this all Savitri didn't come down from upstairs, she only spectated all the bickering silently.

"Zaroorat nahin hain...but...What about Aayan?? Maan questioned, his jaws clenched, anger almost blinded him still he remained at his composed self!!

"Aayan ne jo kiya uske baad it's not important what he wants!! Vidya replied with a pause, "And yes...We are confirmed...This marriage was never meant to be Maan!!

"Right...I agree...Kyun ki mera beta Maan is the one who is going to marry her!! An irritated Garv took a step towards the gate after dropping the bomb!!

"WHATTT!!?? Wait... They all rhymed in unison, sparing frowns!!

"Itna choukiye mat...
Bankrupt insaan ki beti ki kiya shaadi nahin hoti!!!
Hum toh shuru se chahte thhey ke Maan ki shaadi ho Geet se...Par Maan ne mana kar diya tha, mujhe bhi laga tha ki hamare family mein aake woh match nahin kar payegi...Aapke ghar mein zayada khush rahegi... Isliye maine bhi zayada zorr nahin lagaya tha...Aab aap sabne woh problem bhi solve kar diya!!

Shaadi toh hogi...aaj se 4 din baad ke usi mahurat pe hi hogi...Papaji ka wada bhi nahin tootega...
Chalo Maan... Madhu had a fiery commanding tone as she walked off from that toxic space!!

Maan, who himself was on the verge of offering the same solution couldn't be happier!!

Moreover, it was a great relief that now he would at least not answer the 500 probable questions Madhu might have asked regarding his sudden mind change!!

Why do you want to Marry Geet now?

Why did you say no first?

Everything is your fault that things are so messed up now!!!

Yes...Everything is his fault after all...All his life he was very punctual but when the need for being punctual to recognize the true life partner, Maan was slower than the tube light!!

After fidgeting for quite a while Maan's family reached the Handa residence. It's not a healthy situation to divulge all those new atrocious additions!!

That too in a circumstance where Mohindar is going through such a financial crisis! But the sooner they tell the better. Good thing is that Savitri tagged along. She seemed quite dismayed of what her eldest son's(Aadarsh) family offered in their thoughts!!!

And there, Madhuri was preparing herself to be slammed and even getting rejected but that doesn't mean she will not try for once!!

Another problem existed that she didn't even ask Maan once and he seems awfully quiet. Maybe this can be counted as somehow forcing him into the marriage but she knows her son that much!! It's quite different than the first time he was reluctant. After last night something is not the same inside his eyes!!

Amidst all the tension manifesting they gathered the last bit of mettle then Garv, Madhurima, and Savitri meekly kept their proposal in front of Geet's father. With Maan's parents and grandmother's persuasion, a perplexed Mohindar did reach to that conclusion all of them thought at the very first beginning!!! And then the rest is history!!!

However, Maan knew it was not an easy task to handle miss tufanmail Handa!! And presently Geet is just proving how right he anticipated!!

(Flashback ends)

"Ye kabse zameen ko ghoore jaa raha hain...pata nahin kaun sa naya natak hain... Murmuring to herself Geet waved her palm before Maan's dazed eyes, "Oye...Sawal floor ne nahin maine pucha hain...Idhar hoon main, idhar...Zara dekhne ki takleef karenge Maan ji??? Sarcasm brimmed from her voice as Maan focused his dark browns back at her scrunched eyebrows!!

"Toh tum kiya keh rahi thi?? Haan nafrat...
Geet...?? So you hate me!!!
Toh tum mujhe isiliye ye knife se chot bhi pahochana chahti thi?? His handsome face grew mysterious, feeling nervous Geet backed off a little!!

"Aaa...Aur...naa.. nahin toh kk..kiya...Itna tezi se agar aapka dimag chalta hain toh... As she started Maan halted her by shoving the knife back inside her hands, "Fine...Chalo kato...I am all yours...Waiting...
Agar nafrat hain toh nafrat sahi... He had some unreal amount of conviction in his vocals which sent chills down Geet's throat!!

She immediately put her hands down in a reflex while Maan raised his eyebrows, those perfect m shaped lips crooking in a sinful smirk!! Rubbing the dry windpipes Geet searched desperately for some words to evade the situation while Maan was stepping closer by erasing all the gaps between them!!

"K..k..k..kiya behudgi hain...Ye koi zunoon wali movie chal rahi hain?? Sanki aashiq ho aap!!?? Psycho!!" Though Chilled till her stomach, Geet somehow fluttered those words out in the need of keeping her unaffected act alive, "Yaar maine toh socha tha aap shareef type ho...Pat aap ho bade besharam aur dheet types nikle..!! Haat choro na mera... Twisted her wrist to set free where his dead grip remained still while her face scrunched in terror!!

"Shayad tumne theek se suna nahin, maine aapna character certificate nanin manga tumse... It's his stern voice which makes her oddly weak and that was just back, "I said come on..Do it...Let the blade pierce as your wish... Maan thundered at a stupified Geet who was stepping backward like a scared kitten witnessing his sternness!!

Death must be near now!! That too a psychotic one!!


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