Hazaaron Khwahishein Aisi (3) New Ch - 170 - Page 39

ch 70 & 71...both th parts omg...ur thought n organized writing...i m right now speechless...details comments later

Wow, both chapters were simply amazing!!

For the first time we took a peak into Maan's mind and was happy to see what he has... and a fathers plight and helplessness. Amazingly written.. each line and each connection. Let me read it a few more times to stop this inner turmoil i'm going through right now.

Geet's father's perspective is so relatable!

part 70

very emotional update... maan;s is unhappy in childhood after loosing his other and after that he lost his father also... his insecurities and may be later his heart break later had made him very introvert. hope maaneet will clear their misunderstanding and talk openly about their relationship...

part 71

amazing update... rano harsh words made mohinder very upset. from his poin of view whatever he had done is for the good of his family. feeling bad for him as there is no one to understand him and his situation. hope nothing happens to him..

super updates 70 & 71. I can't explain how happy I am reading your updates. you have beautifully described the plight of a father and a child who lost both his parents. I also loved his emotions towards geet.

PART 70 N 71

thanks 4 updating!

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5

Chapter 71:
Starting part of this chapter was describing about the person walking along with all the things happening around him.. how can you describe something as simple as walking so beautifully??
Like seriously dude, it's walking.. we do it everyday.. but never thought it be described in such attractive way..
Ok I am totally shaken up reading this part.. Too intense for me to handle..
Mohinder had already met maan in delhi & wished for someone like him for his daughter.. this was shockingly surprising..
Maan was a good choice no doubt.. If only he did not have a past with someone else..
That meeting had made him really how good maan was.. but that was only a part of him..
Without knowing about him completely he should have not taken the decision..
May be maan's name came out from his lips, but he could have taken time not done the wedding in haste..
He should have even maan's pov about this wedding..
He has done many sacrifices for his family.. But may be as he said he did not have that strong decision making power in him..
He loved them with his life no doubt.. if only he had been little vocal about it..
Plus I feel he was at times influenced by darji too much which led to these problems..
Instead of thinking of coming back to village he could have stayed in the city & enrolled his daughter in some other course, things would have not turned out this ugly..
But yes Rano should not have been so blunt.. she was wronged, but he couldn't do much due to his circumstances.. not that he was a bad person..
But what is done is done.. There is no use of regretting now..
I think these two should resolve their differences, they should sit down together & have a heart to heart talk.. & come to an agreement about what to do next..
Fights do not lead you anywhere, they only worsen the matter..
Last time you wrote Rano's pov & this time Mohinder's pov.. Both were written in exceptionally good manner.. bringing out all the right emotions in right places..
Parents always sacrifice so much for their kids & love them unconditionally, but it is rare that we recognize their struggles, their sacrifices.. This update did a great job at doing so..
Really phenomenal writing..

P.s- almost everyone will sympathize with mohi uncle & comment about his overflowing emotions, so I instead of doing that pointed out his faults😉

I wish I had the same literary ability as you so that I could make as amazing comments as your writing.