Maaneet Farewell Party Event - Page 128

Page 3 : Move On

I loved the part where almost every place in his house reminded him of her, specially that window part where she used to sit or wait for him.
it was like, she is there everywhere and her presence has filled every part of his heart..
glad that Maan realized and they moved on for better future together leaving the moments of differences and misunderstandings behind.

Page 3 : Cage In My Arms

I am not much into dark stories..except a very few that I have read.
but I must say that you have a writing hand..
Hope to read something different from you..may be light-hearted story :)

Page 3 : Sahana..A Rhythm

it is a complex situation between love and the responsibilities when one is already tied into a relation..but Infidelity, not sure what to say, only that Maan should have told it to Sameera in the beginning itself, Instead of solving he complicated it more and more.
loved the flow of the story. Right or wrong, although the words become less meaningful given the complexity life throws at them, but it showed everyone's side in the story.
an emotional one, where Sameera's love and pain overshadowed Maaneet milan in the end.

reminded me of another story, but not so happy ending for Maan-Geet.

Page 3: Destined Love

wonderful one..from the name I was expecting an emotional story..
but this happened to be more light-hearted with some the emotional backdrops.
I loved the their fights, more like the reasons of their fights, the way they got bonded each other, but were hurt with the idea of making other meet the ex taking a composed face...haha hospital mein bhi fight..loved the way the realization about their feelings slipped slowly and steadily in their hearts.

Page 4 : The Last Song

nice mix of the past, present, future.
Geet stuck in the past, but the last song paved a way for the future..
while the song remained as the memory...but the future continue with its melody aka Geet..
it was a different concept with the time travel..
who was the man in the end..Maan from the past time?


Page 5 : Love at First Sight

is it a promo hai, aanewali story ka..
chutuku sa promo..
Geet singing, hum dekhate hi reh gaye aur pyar ho gaya !!


Page 5 : In Respect of Love

liked how Maan brought the truth in front of the world and confessed his feelings in open.
he stick true to his heart even if that meant to stepping away from his parents.
Yahan pe Geet was feeling sad about the engagement, and wahan Maan took the matter in his hands to clear the farce started by his mother.
wonderful story.

Page 6 : Behen Hogi Teri Maa

Geet Bhai was mast..koi bhi aaye, beating the goons black and blue..
and secret mission with Maan, make her fall for him.
but Maan is one step ahead, he tricks her to confess her love in front of everyone.
that was wonderful one..


Page 6 : Discovering Our Love

wonderful one..It was right of her to feel a life with no existence, when Maan could not give the time for home and her..and the simple arguments about leaving reached to the stage of separation and divorce, neither the ego let then both talk and sort it out. But when she returned as the paying guest again, they both took to chance to discover what the missed for the last six months..
loved those simple gestures he made with a conscious effort towards regaining her back in his life..

Page 7 : Kahan Dhoondhoo Meri Beti Ki Maa

very well, catchy and apt title..
I loved the story and little Mishika's expressions and baby talks..😆
I was reading it with smiling face throughout.
Maaneet fall in love..and finally the marriage takes place with all mystery unfolded.
beti got her daddy..ans Maaneet for each other.


Page 7 : Clumsy Love

lovely one shot..Maan remembering the childhood memory very fondly..when they met for the first time as kids and ..although her clumsiness angered him initially, but her attitude and respect for work soon made him fall in love with her, and the alliance her father was trying for her did its last bit to open him up with his feelings..so she continues to be the disaster queen, but now queen of his heart too..

Page 7 : The Coffee Saga

lovey dovey stuff..cute and lovely one shot
all his tiredness flew out of the window once he found her around him..he was almost craving to go back his solace, to her..loved the way Geet explained that emotional karke fasa ke rekha hai and those simple little things they do for each other, like making coffee buying cards..all that makes their life beautiful and love fonder..

Page 8 : Waqt

wakt toh pal mein zindagi badal deta hai..Geet who walked like princess in the mansion had to work as an employee there.
but in the critical times, she just continued with her effort making a path of her own facing the test of times..that ended onto a pleasant surprise..wonderful story.

Page 9 : Forever

loved the story..Geet here is in some unusual role; that of a model..
like most of the people Geet too wanted it to be marriage based on love..she loved Maan, and wished it to be the same from his side as well..but some misunderstandings led her to a confusion on his perspective of the marriage..add to that his never openly expressing his feelings..but, finally everything gets clarified with a heart to heart confession.



Page 9 : My Prince

lovely story..the prince came finally to take his Cinderella to to the home of dreams,
a slow realization..the punishment part was awesome, something that churned his heart with the realization coming hard to him..
the way he teased and asked for the alliance was lovely, and the last confession was beautiful.



Page 10 : Aanchal

Ye kaunsi Exam hai..🤣
yahan toh khullam khulla copying chal rahi hai...woh bhi invigilator ke samne..😆

I liked the bit of innocence in Maan and his non-stop blabbering when he was caught, something unique about him.
and Geet too was like mujhe koi problem nahi, bas meri bhi thodi help kara do.. 😆

lovely one shot, cracked me up with the humor :)



Page 10 : Flower Basket

lovely story..loved there outing in Shimla..well suited their carefree characters and the feelings they have started for each other. It was like belated Valentine Day date for them both.
Geet holds the innocence and freshness of a flower and she possess a good heart too, the way she asked not to take the plans away from the mountains as they may die there, and the way she sacrificed her reward money for Maan.
Dadima's reaction to the valentine Day's Gift was superb..finally the misunderstanding about the GF is cleared and both set ready for a happy beginning.
and now the most entertaining part for me was Pinky describing her valentine day date with Adi to Geet..🤣 I have a special liking for humorous stuff and this was hilarious, very well written.



Page 11 : Kabhi Alvida Na Kehana

the misunderstanding and Maan's confusion was cleared, and Geet got the deserved love.
liked the inclusion of all creatives people here who contributed in the event and thread..

and for sure, Maaneet memories will always be cherished, no alvida there..:)



Page 11 : Beautiful Stranger

wonderful concept and writing..Maan In love with a Robot..
liked the way his feelings have written, the way he felt happy just by being in her presence, the way he wanted to reach to her trying to fathom the emptiness in her eyes, and by confirming the start of friendship.
Not sure what future holds for them, though it is fantasy, but loved the ending part of the one shot where the artificial intelligence coined the emotions that stirred into her and turned the emptiness into sadness while speculating may be they cant be friends anymore when he got to know the truth.

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

I know, I am super late...I started with it, but lost the track due to busy times.
so back again, kyun ki, ek baar maine commitment kar di toh main..umm...let us see...😆

starting from Page 1 this time.

but before the stories and writings, I must say that the thread is collage-ed with beautiful edits and VMs from the image/VM editors, so kudos to all creative people on this thread !!

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

Page1 : Behadh - Dastaan Mohobbat aur Junoon Ki

Geet coming from all rich and luxurious lifestyle, but deprived of love...nothing interests her, but then one day, Maan comes to her life and changes her perception to look towards life.
although from title it did not look like some behadh junoon type story, I liked the bike scene, where Geet steps up to take the ride of the bike with a fresh air and carefree attitude, while leaving her dull and monotonous life behind.

Originally posted by: priya_21

dear this is starting of BEHAD

behad story continue hongi aange😉

Oh nice priya...do let us know when you are taking it ahead 😳

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom

Oh nice priya...do let us know when you are taking it ahead 😳

Originally posted by: priya_pmlist

di after APRIl

fully packed schedule nowadays

Originally posted by: maaneetfavo

yes lakshmi akka..now PD very busy 😉😉😉