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Posted: 7 years ago

nice song
sad update...
👍🏼 ..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely ss dear and love it plz forgive me for late comments actually busy with studies but keep updating me and thax for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
When will you update again
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Posted: 7 years ago


Thanks for the PM jasminerahul

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Posted: 7 years ago
Still waiting for updates
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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 8:
Maan went towards Geet place..
Their also some function happeing ...
He saw Geet dancing..Geet look at Maan & she got smile..
She start dancing happily..
Hey dhin tadaak dhin tadaak
Aa jaa ud ke saraat
Pairon se bedi zaraa khol
Nagaade sang dhol baaje, dhol baaje
Dhaayn dhaayn dham dham dhaayn


Hey, dhin tadaak dhin tadaak
[Indian percussion beats]
Come flying fast,
Open the shackles of my feet,
drums beat with the kettle-drums*
with huge sounds..

[*For more on meaning of Nagada, check THIS POST.
Dhaayn dhaayn dham dham is onomatopoea for the drums' sounds.]

Re khat-khat, haan khat-khat
Baaje dastak wo naa ab tak aaya
Re tab se, haan tab se
Haan dekhi raahein
Ki ab tu khol baahein aaja
Umad-ghumad ghoome,
re machle re mora mann
Goonje re baalam ke bol



There is knocking on the door,
but he hasn't yet come.
Since then, yeah, since then
I've been waiting,
now open your arms and come.
my heart roams here and there in joy,
getting all restless..
The words of my beloved speak out loud..

[Now this may mean that my heart is saying the word 'beloved' out loud, or that the words spoken by my beloved are being heard, as if they're in the air. You can take it either way.]

Lili limbudi re, leelo nagarvel no chhod
Parbhu parodh na re
Maar gher uttaara karta jaao
Utaaro nahi karun re
Maar gher Sita juve vaat
Sita ekla re
Juve ram-lakhan ni vaat

This green lemon-tree and green betel-tree
O Lord, don't refuse..
Please have a little stay at my house,
I'll not stay,
as Goddess Sita is waiting at my home,
Sita, Alone there,
waits for Ram and Lakshman..

O pal-pal re pal-pal beet'ta jal-jal
Naach ab chal aaja
Re thar-thar thar-thar haan kaanpe thar-thar
Haan dar dar jee se darr ab na na
Baaghon mein bola, bola re bola mor,
badla re dil ka bhoogol

Every moment passes burning (in agony)
Now come and dance (with me)
(why do you) shiver so much,
Now don't be afraid of your heart..
Peacocks now speak in the gardens [that is, it's the rainy season now]
and the geography of my heart has changed..

Nagaade sang dhol baaje, dhol baaje
Dhaayn dhaayn dham dham dhaayn

Maan admiring her happily..
Geet rush to Maan & hug him tight..


Maan kiss on her forehead & cheeks..


Geet hold his lips both lost on each other..
Veeru & meena burn with anger..
Veeru took gun & target on Maneet..
Priya came & slap him..
Maneet look at veeru..
Priya: u don't have shame stupid ..if someone try to harm Geet & Maan I will kill them..because of u all enimitI will kill them..because of u all enimity I lost my gautam ..i wont let any to them..
Geet go in your room & Maan u to go know..
Geet look at Maan & rush inside..
Maan to went..
Priya rushed in room...
She remember how her & gautam marry..

Their moments..
She crying badly..why not when his child on her womb ..
Geet came in room with juice glass..
Geet: bhabhi have juice..
Priya: no I don't want it ..
Geet: bhaiya atlesst for baby..
Geet make her drink..
Priya hug Geet..
Priya; u & Maan will meet soon don't worry..
Geet lay on her lap & said..
Geet: we wish this dushmani & hatred finish..
Priya caress her hair..
Maan its to worry for Geet..
Naantara enter in room..
Naantara:don't worry Maan nothing happen u & Geet will meet..
Maan:Hope So bhabhi..

Meena & Rajender to meet..

Edited by arisharosid20 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
The song was beautiful

glad that Priya came and saved both Maan and Geet
waiting now to see what will happen
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Posted: 7 years ago
thanks 4 da pm!

excellent update!

nice that Priya helped Maaneet!


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Posted: 7 years ago

nice picture of geet...
enjoy reading it..
awesome
thanks for the pm.. 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice Update
Priya helped Maaneet and Tara also assured Maan that everything will be fine

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