MANEET FF HIS PRECIOUS POSSESSION - HIS MAID THREAD THREE 29/1/2018 - Page 9

Originally posted by: solaceMG

i am resting maan aside
I know he lusts over geet
As he is a casenova so suits well how he is reacting
But geet
She is making me extremely angry
I do not / can not appreciate characters like this geet
I tried a lot 2 overlook bt i just cant
Why is she giving in 2 maan so easliy? Its just not happening
N i m fininding a lo of contradiction in her
She is innocent thats why she lets maan come close
So that should b the same with other boys as well
What i feares from the beginning of this story is that maan will end up making her pregnant n then for the sake of the child would marry her n give her dignity n i feel its exactly headed there
1 thing is hazy about maan 2 why n howcome a casenova like him is not messing around with other girls it doesnt change overnight, never heard any1 like that changing so fast. Even geet n him rarely hv any convo so its not like he has fallen 4 her other than lusting yet again a richie rich like him can arrange beautiful girls like geet so why would he stop everything 4 the sake of geet. That remains a mystery still!
Now i m eagerly waiting 4 the story 2 pace up
Lovely part, ended on wrong time
Plz ud soon

Originally posted by: Mg13

<font size="5">Thank you di for your comment😃</font>

<font size="5">I am not understanding now from where to start...first of all di.i really appreciate your comments as always.😃you always caught my weak point in story😳And thanks for that as I needed this to see any flaws or faults in my story or writing...That's what I always kept on telling you all guys..didn't I that I want arranged sequence in line to line in proper way but I think now that is not happening. I am really trying hard di😳that's why yesterday update aldosterone got late to post...</font>

<font size="5">And Main point is didn't I mension in story if there maan feels different for her or he didn't go to another girl after there small make out that night of party or before his routine is on.so here complete about maan.</font>

<font size="5">And now it's geet's turn. Didn't I mension before she feels secure or protected in his arms.or she did feel different that not good feeling at the time of karvachauth when he was close or staring at her though she did lost in him.but she feel negative vibes that time. Your all comment is whole of true di😃but see at what I mension also. If you can I kindly request you to re-read from start as I know we forgot also from ongoing story I have that experience😳and I am trying di it's my first attempt to write an story.so I am trying really hard. Now also about next update I am trying to what to wright geet's emotions or her feelings or her thoughts. In that only I get so much late to post here though I have story or plots ready with me😃</font>

<font size="5">But I really feel happy you only catch the right faults here.never hesitate to do that di.😃I will rectify my mistakes as the story proceed further😃😃</font>

Originally posted by: anu5

Congrats on new thread sweety.

:))

Originally posted by: anu5

Lovely banner Sweety

Nice update.

Liked it!!

Maan was buying thyself in his desires and was high on his passion. Geet was melting to Maan's amorous touch and feelings. Maan came back to his senses seeing Geet clutching her head due to pain. Maan couldnt see her in tears and was concerned about her. Maan's concern for her over shadowed his lust for her.

Thanks for the pm !

:))

Originally posted by: naanii.1389

very nice update. maan could ctrl himself seeing Geet's condition.. but little confused.. waiting for next part for more clarity