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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo

Reading the Maan and Geet scenes of your stories is like watching the GHSP series. They're so perfect and enjoyable that the reader can't help but picture it all.

Just absolutely loved reading their love and their banters and their possessiveness over each other. I do feel bad for Sasha but I don't want Geet to mellow down towards her if and when Sasha tries to verbally abuse Geet.

I feel so happy for Teji and Sona. They're finally going to get the happiness they deserve, especially Sona.

Really enjoyed the chapter.


Geet is softhearted but still a warrior at heart so she will deal with Sasha on her own
Sona and Teji are still stuck in my head so I want to write more on them 😳
Thanks Mari 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
Heeeyhyy avvviii...firstly a big thank u for letting me in in spite of lagging behind solo much...
I have missed wtt sooo muchhh...hopefully I 'll make quick comments and catch up with current updates ssooonnn...

Anyways moving on...story is becoming so interesting ...dev has finally got a clue...if he had nt realized on checking the time aspect...there was a chance he would have completely missed the small hint that he was able to catch on...but is it really going to.lead him to something...if I think of it...the mystery is only getting more more complicated ...I am.not really able to guess how a woman who.is completely covered going to lead him on...agreed she had worn black but her shoes were in contrast of her attire...but then after that what...?...it could be anyone...considering it was a grand royal wedding with sooo many guests...how will he be able to zero down on the criminal...I am most curious with this aspect of the story...more than Maan and geet s condition right now...
Talking about Which my heart totally went out to mean s pathetic state. ...his insecurity for his love is totally justifiable...he has been unlucky once...his fear to loose it again and that too at the time when he has truly and deeply fallen in love...
Kiran did tell that raj send them away because he wants them safe...but feet should have said her good bye ..and not given him a chance of feeling so vulnerable...What it so urgent that she did not have even five minutes to talk to him...not even a message or a call...sure his anger on her is justifiable ...definitely she does trust him...
.I don't think geet s love is so week that she would leave him just like that and not even talking about it with ma'am even once...

And I was so happy to see his parents having such immense trust on their son...De did not believe the story that the pictures were telling...sometimes the children do need such support and trust from their parents...unlike many times when the patents jump on blaming the entire situation on the children even if they do know that he / she is innocent...
And keeping my fingers crossed that raj would be alright ...let it be a false alarm please...



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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: nish285

Heeeyhyy avvviii...firstly a big thank u for letting me in in spite of lagging behind solo much...

I have missed wtt sooo muchhh...hopefully I 'll make quick comments and catch up with current updates ssooonnn...



Anyways moving on...story is becoming so interesting ...dev has finally got a clue...if he had nt realized on checking the time aspect...there was a chance he would have completely missed the small hint that he was able to catch on...but is it really going to.lead him to something...if I think of it...the mystery is only getting more more complicated ...I am.not really able to guess how a woman who.is completely covered going to lead him on...agreed she had worn black but her shoes were in contrast of her attire...but then after that what...?...it could be anyone...considering it was a grand royal wedding with sooo many guests...how will he be able to zero down on the criminal...I am most curious with this aspect of the story...more than Maan and geet s condition right now...

Talking about Which my heart totally went out to mean s pathetic state. ...his insecurity for his love is totally justifiable...he has been unlucky once...his fear to loose it again and that too at the time when he has truly and deeply fallen in love...

Kiran did tell that raj send them away because he wants them safe...but feet should have said her good bye ..and not given him a chance of feeling so vulnerable...What it so urgent that she did not have even five minutes to talk to him...not even a message or a call...sure his anger on her is justifiable ...definitely she does trust him...

.I don't think geet s love is so week that she would leave him just like that and not even talking about it with ma'am even once...



And I was so happy to see his parents having such immense trust on their son...De did not believe the story that the pictures were telling...sometimes the children do need such support and trust from their parents...unlike many times when the patents jump on blaming the entire situation on the children even if they do know that he / she is innocent...

And keeping my fingers crossed that raj would be alright ...let it be a false alarm please...


You had exams so how could I deny you😃
next part sent 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
Finally finally finally...the ball is in der court..can I please do a happy dance here..pumping my fist in the air...keeping fingers crossed that the catch turns to be fruitful...I hope he is not just a pawn planted by the criminals and he knows nothing at all...he should be knowing something please...
Dat was a very smart move by chandan and dev...de have caught hold of two such leads...I hope dis will lead them to something...
...dis update has put me on the edge...Its like a suspense scene in a thriller...I was expecting the concentration in dis update...but no worries...they finally have their hands on the person who was following them...I can't wait for this scene in the next update...

Moving on to the khuranas...so even geet does not know the full matter...in fact she knows nothing at all...but y did nt they tell anything to geet...they keep that a secret from dadi ma it's understandable...but y geet...?...May be they felt dat she would nt trust maan...and she should be protected until all is sorted out...but is geet that weak hearted...I don't think so ...yes it would be a shock for her...but I feel eventually she would have trusted maan and stood by him...
And on top of that...De even asked her not to call him up...
And here maan does not know either that geet does not know anything about pari fiasco...
***siiggghhh***...so many complications...I just hope he does not misunderstand her or she does not misunderstand him
..
And v have one more problem...geet not being safe in hoshiarpur...avviii...saare problems ko ek Saath plan karna that Kya aapko...not fair year avviii...specially wen de just had see first date...
...
U should be punished for creating so much of suspense and drama...
Nevertheless..u are always going to be my favourite writer...and I will continue to love it writings...
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Posted: 7 years ago
And yes the pw for previous update keeps me hopeful and curious...
hopeful dat good times are ahead soon...and curious that considering you..it could be something else altogether.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: nish285

Finally finally finally...the ball is in der court..can I please do a happy dance here..pumping my fist in the air...keeping fingers crossed that the catch turns to be fruitful...I hope he is not just a pawn planted by the criminals and he knows nothing at all...he should be knowing something please...

Dat was a very smart move by chandan and dev...de have caught hold of two such leads...I hope dis will lead them to something...

...dis update has put me on the edge...Its like a suspense scene in a thriller...I was expecting the concentration in dis update...but no worries...they finally have their hands on the person who was following them...I can't wait for this scene in the next update...



Moving on to the khuranas...so even geet does not know the full matter...in fact she knows nothing at all...but y did nt they tell anything to geet...they keep that a secret from dadi ma it's understandable...but y geet...?...May be they felt dat she would nt trust maan...and she should be protected until all is sorted out...but is geet that weak hearted...I don't think so ...yes it would be a shock for her...but I feel eventually she would have trusted maan and stood by him...

And on top of that...De even asked her not to call him up...

And here maan does not know either that geet does not know anything about pari fiasco...

***siiggghhh***...so many complications...I just hope he does not misunderstand her or she does not misunderstand him

..

And v have one more problem...geet not being safe in hoshiarpur...avviii...saare problems ko ek Saath plan karna that Kya aapko...not fair year avviii...specially wen de just had see first date...

...

U should be punished for creating so much of suspense and drama...

Nevertheless..u are always going to be my favourite writer...and I will continue to love it writings...

😆 kar lo punish 😆
Thanks
I am glad you are enjoying
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chap 39

Finally a new thread, now I'm getting somewhere 😃
Seems like dev finally found a clue, glad that both the brothers are working together and smart enough to use codes. Of all people I didnr expect jugnu mama (though he's no mama here I don't think) to be following Chandan but hopefully they can extract some important information from him

Shot don't tell me Geet left reading the note, I doubt she would. Though she didn't know the entire truth but she knew of his heartbreak. Don't tell me she thinks he still loves her but I won't react, I have full faith in my Geet lol

Sounds like a hard time for Maan but he's parents being by his side and the trust would help him sail through I'm sure, parents love and trait makes a worlds difference

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Posted: 7 years ago
Chap 40

Just by going off the pw I would have got scared of this ff finishing but seems like there are perks of being a slow reader lol

Like I mentioned before I like both brothers working together. Two minds are greater then one. Hope jugnu is helpful at least once in his lifetime lol

Maan being there for his parents and the father being himself, trying to ease his wife's pain warms my heart even at 1:50 in the morning lol when my eyes are drying to close and work is in the morning. I should do sleep but trying to play catch up abc decided to start with you as always lol

So Geet didn't leave but was told to, glad yo know that and cant wait for the phone convo. Geet had making up to do. I really like Dadima. You should know that too lol

Pari seems like an honest girl but carving for love in the wrong place. Glad maans mum knows the truth, hoping Geet dies too. Rasika is the step mum, now it makes sense lol though I'm sure you mentioned it before but maybe I forgot. I like Maan being the man and taking charge of the situation. He's almost declaring war and rightly so, rasika needs to be taught a lesson or two. Hopefully pari gets what she deserves, I like pari

Now can't wait for maaneet, hoping nothing bad happens to Geet and your categoric brij doesn't make an entry, I also hate brijs in your stories lol

Good night Avi, waiting for chap 41 😃
Edited by DaftGirk - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 41
Ooohhh laaa laaa...ouch ...that was hhhooottt...
Wat a passionate encounter that was...I am sooo thankful that they are finally together...hopefully there will be no more misunderstanding ...all of it will be cleared...
And the kisss...ohhh mmm ggg...main tohhh yahhhiii par flat ho gayi avviii...I can't believe this...I was expecting all the drama ...roothna manAana...but this is such a pleasant pleasant surprise...I could nt have asked for something better...sure they are going to be fighting...but at least they are still together and their kiss has already made up for half of their separation and impending fights...
And wowww...can I please steal raj and Kiran as my future in laws please...de are not onlysuch wonderful characters avvviii..but also such CCOoolll parents...and not to forget the coolest in laws any girl.could ask for...I so envy geet yea...
I can't wait for the next update...
I am actually waiting for rasikaa s entry...Is she the villain that would be coming in the next update..?..maan has worked out everything to deal with her...I can't wait to see her condition wen her plan fails...and how heartless could she be...I guess pari did nt have it in her to take such a drastic step...and hence rasikaa has done this to her...and she thinks maan is a fool enough to get scared wen she would blackmail him like that...she may be cunning but she is not smart...she has left so many loopholes in her plan...slitting of both the wrists by mistake...lol...I hope arjun and maan take advantage of her foolishness...
And talking about miss bose...we have yet another couple separated by misunderstanding...so both dev and sons thinks that the other one is married...and have moved on...**sigghh**.. It's a matter of time that they will clear all of it...until then v got to see their tom and jerry fights...
I had somewhere guessed that the detetective was only a pawn...and he knows nothing at all..
The criminals have indeed been very sharp in their plan...De have nt left any major clues anywhere at all.but the girl with purple metallic dress...anyways der has to be somewhat to get to the bottom of all of this...




Edited by nish285 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: DaftGirk

Chap 40

Just by going off the pw I would have got scared of this ff finishing but seems like there are perks of being a slow reader lol

Like I mentioned before I like both brothers working together. Two minds are greater then one. Hope jugnu is helpful at least once in his lifetime lol

Maan being there for his parents and the father being himself, trying to ease his wife's pain warms my heart even at 1:50 in the morning lol when my eyes are drying to close and work is in the morning. I should do sleep but trying to play catch up abc decided to start with you as always lol

So Geet didn't leave but was told to, glad yo know that and cant wait for the phone convo. Geet had making up to do. I really like Dadima. You should know that too lol

Pari seems like an honest girl but carving for love in the wrong place. Glad maans mum knows the truth, hoping Geet dies too. Rasika is the step mum, now it makes sense lol though I'm sure you mentioned it before but maybe I forgot. I like Maan being the man and taking charge of the situation. He's almost declaring war and rightly so, rasika needs to be taught a lesson or two. Hopefully pari gets what she deserves, I like pari

Now can't wait for maaneet, hoping nothing bad happens to Geet and your categoric brij doesn't make an entry, I also hate brijs in your stories lol

Good night Avi, waiting for chap 41 😃


Even I am done with Brij now 😆
pw sent

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