With This Taveez (6) Ch 49 pg 139 * new thd link pg 1 - Page 106

Originally posted by: DaftGirk

Chap 45

It's his dads cousin, dev them lot need to sort out the mess asso

I've read far to many first rains in so baby FFs lol, but never experienced it. It's rain 24/7 365 days a year (little over exaggeration but honestly at times it feels like that and my summer clothes seemed to be forever lost in the wardrobe, I have some awesome outfits that need to be warn lol)

Maan asking Geet about her opinion on his hotness, that man is too much at times lol
But I'm glad their together and very happy

Waiting for chap 46

yeah the rain thing has to be felt 😆
you made me feel silly and soppy 😆 like my sister does; rolling her eyes and asking where I get these weird romance ideas 😆
pm sent

Double updates...volllaaa...thanks for the treat...
Was thinking of giving combined comments for both the updates...but 43 was so big...so I wanted to deal with each update individually...
Finally...buddhhuu maan ke aqal me kuch samajjh aaya...but that was needed for him to get over his insecurities...
Khud Chuha ke jaise darr raha tha...aur geet ko chuha bola...she is everything but that...a liionedd for a lion...and mind u maan...she is my favourite (besides raj and kiran)...I love her awesomeness...so u can't be calling her anything...
Moving on to Tara...I had seriously expected Tara s bapu sa to become instantly protective on knowing that her daughter is in love with such a person who was somewhere responsible for his humiliation...and most importantly...the fear and insecurity of loosing his another daughter again...he may seem to be tough...but he is actually very soft hearted and empathetic towards his daughters...
Y are all the dad s in this ff so sweet avviii...I can't seem to decide who do I like more...raj...?..sona s dad...? Or bapu sa here...?...I don't know about sons...but a daughter definitely needs such dads...who would always remain the hero for them all their life...
Talking about sonakshi...oops...ab kya hoga...the girl is so broken...my heart goes out to her...going by the story right now...I am guessing she and her dad will end up giving teji a chance...der is so much of love everywhere...

Huh...take dat rasikaa...ON UR FACE...I had expected a longer drama from her...but I won't be complaining...the earlier v get rid of the pest ...the better for us...
Specially...wen v get more romantic scenes ...
Toga style...??...how did she manage to do that in jet speed...specially wen maan is only 10 seconds away from her...and not to forget she is nervous as well...and probably her hands and mind would nt work that fast...
Dis reminds me of the scene in bndd where they spend the night in a hut in a middle of forest..and if I remember correctly ...geet again finds a TOWEL which she ties in this style...seriously...how does geet mange to find the right seductive attire in such times ...lol...avviii...aapko pass jaan hai Isla...lol...just kidding...
So I guess that s bout...Will do part 44 tomorrow...and den will send pm.for next update...

Originally posted by: nish285

Double updates...volllaaa...thanks for the treat...

Was thinking of giving combined comments for both the updates...but 43 was so big...so I wanted to deal with each update individually...

Finally...buddhhuu maan ke aqal me kuch samajjh aaya...but that was needed for him to get over his insecurities...

Khud Chuha ke jaise darr raha tha...aur geet ko chuha bola...she is everything but that...a liionedd for a lion...and mind u maan...she is my favourite (besides raj and kiran)...I love her awesomeness...so u can't be calling her anything...

Moving on to Tara...I had seriously expected Tara s bapu sa to become instantly protective on knowing that her daughter is in love with such a person who was somewhere responsible for his humiliation...and most importantly...the fear and insecurity of loosing his another daughter again...he may seem to be tough...but he is actually very soft hearted and empathetic towards his daughters...

Y are all the dad s in this ff so sweet avviii...I can't seem to decide who do I like more...raj...?..sona s dad...? Or bapu sa here...?...I don't know about sons...but a daughter definitely needs such dads...who would always remain the hero for them all their life...

Talking about sonakshi...oops...ab kya hoga...the girl is so broken...my heart goes out to her...going by the story right now...I am guessing she and her dad will end up giving teji a chance...der is so much of love everywhere...



Huh...take dat rasikaa...ON UR FACE...I had expected a longer drama from her...but I won't be complaining...the earlier v get rid of the pest ...the better for us...

Specially...wen v get more romantic scenes ...

Toga style...??...how did she manage to do that in jet speed...specially wen maan is only 10 seconds away from her...and not to forget she is nervous as well...and probably her hands and mind would nt work that fast...

Dis reminds me of the scene in bndd where they spend the night in a hut in a middle of forest..and if I remember correctly ...geet again finds a TOWEL which she ties in this style...seriously...how does geet mange to find the right seductive attire in such times ...lol...avviii...aapko pass jaan hai Isla...lol...just kidding...

So I guess that s bout...Will do part 44 tomorrow...and den will send pm.for next update...

@bold: Fathers are like that right?
Glad you are enjoying the story
Catch up soon 😃

Chap 46

Tara fearing for Dev, why do I feel this chapter should be read in the morning rather than at night. Fear, tears and night isn't an awesome combination. I too hope it's nothing

Jugnu threatened, oh dear it us something? What the hell is this guys problem (guy in the mask that is) why can't he just let the two brothers live in peace. Half the worlds problem arise from wealth 😕 ehh why die for money, it can't give you life? When would the world ever realise that. Talking about the world, after UK now Publish a Muslim day has spread to the USA I heard it on the news. Sad and disgusting really 🤢

The father and Teji have a proper talk, thankfully clearing some bad air and misunderstanding. I second teji, Natasha is he only person that can remove this misconception. I'm happy for the little girl though, finally having a father has made her a little giddy with happiness. Cut kid

Both the brother truly love their respective partners. Love does make you do irrational things, they knew someone was after them yet uncaring they went in search of poonam and tara. I hope they both are ok, I like a rather bright Dev 😃 thank goodness Tara is one smart woman lol. Finally they found the brothers. Little wounded but I guess both would be fine. Maybe Chandan will take abit longer, wait take that back with poonam remembering maybe not though hazy memory but still. I really like bapusa, he's a father to both his daughters and Chandan /dev


And back to maaneet, wait did he just put on a Tshirt to take it off the next second - yeh Maan bhai nah
😆

Thanks WW waiting for 47 (n sorry for making you wait for Feminist dating)

Originally posted by: DaftGirk

Chap 46

Tara fearing for Dev, why do I feel this chapter should be read in the morning rather than at night. Fear, tears and night isn't an awesome combination. I too hope it's nothing

Jugnu threatened, oh dear it us something? What the hell is this guys problem (guy in the mask that is) why can't he just let the two brothers live in peace. Half the worlds problem arise from wealth 😕 ehh why die for money, it can't give you life? When would the world ever realise that. Talking about the world, after UK now Publish a Muslim day has spread to the USA I heard it on the news. Sad and disgusting really 🤢

The father and Teji have a proper talk, thankfully clearing some bad air and misunderstanding. I second teji, Natasha is he only person that can remove this misconception. I'm happy for the little girl though, finally having a father has made her a little giddy with happiness. Cut kid

Both the brother truly love their respective partners. Love does make you do irrational things, they knew someone was after them yet uncaring they went in search of poonam and tara. I hope they both are ok, I like a rather bright Dev 😃 thank goodness Tara is one smart woman lol. Finally they found the brothers. Little wounded but I guess both would be fine. Maybe Chandan will take abit longer, wait take that back with poonam remembering maybe not though hazy memory but still. I really like bapusa, he's a father to both his daughters and Chandan /dev


And back to maaneet, wait did he just put on a Tshirt to take it off the next second - yeh Maan bhai nah
😆

Thanks WW waiting for 47 (n sorry for making you wait for Feminist dating)

😡 one of the reasons I don't read stories
except for where my heart is involved 😆
as in with the web woman 😆
shape up Soph
readers are so down now that there are few writers left 👍🏼
give them teasers and buy some time 😃

""""Pyar karnewala hu baby, he wanted to say but he was sure his warrior princess would throw her juttis over his head for that."""""
This surely cracked me.up real bad...I so wish I could see geet doing this to maan...
I seem to have enjoyed the comical scene here rather than the romantic one...
And hanumaan chaalisa really... ..wen it comes to geet even hanumaan ji cannot stop maan...

Why would the wife of a relative have anything to do with Poonam s kidnapping...unless she is just a pawn like the detective whom they had caught hold off...
Keeping my fingers crossed that this turns them towards the culprits very soon...I hope they are able to get their hands on those...

And suha is a complete sunshine...a saviour for her dad...I am actually surprised that Mr.bose agreed to give a chance to teji so soon...I had expected him to get really over protective and teji would have sure been roasted alive by him...
Nevertheless...things went pretty smooth...for teji...but that does nt mean his woes ends here...he has to win sonakshi as well..if his daughter can accept him so easily...he has put double the efforts for the same in case of sonakshi...
Let's see how he goes about it...

Part 45 and 46

An entire update on maaneet ...an entire update on dev and Tara..
Thank goddd...dev was safe...that was an awesone action.packed scene...suspense and thrill added to it...
..avviii...I thoroughly enjoyed all the imagination that your words created ...so dramatically expressed...
But I have one question nagging me ..how is that the person who shot at them just left them injured...and not just shot them dead...if all had been planned and the trap was set...that person might as well make extra preparations for their killing...but He left them injured...is this some sort of a ploy to distract their attention for a while from hunting down the criminal...
Only good thing out of this is Poonam has finally identified chandan... ..yes...she does not remember him completely..but still that is such a big improvement...

And talking about dev...yaar dis romantic maan is making me blush ...can He really get more romantic than this...???...pondering about it...actually yes.. ...I can imagine y does geet fall so weak before him in spite of her being a warrior princess...wen every time else she is head on to lock horns with him...
...now dat he feels completely secured of his love...and geet herself declared her liking of him...I wonder wat he is up to for the night...
I am thinking if dadi ma s thoughts will actually come true...the lion is all set to lure it's prey in its trap...and the best part was She knows her grandson is like her son...lol...raj would have been as naughty as maan...or rather he is still naughty

And sorry I am late In commenting...had guests over for the weekend...
Can't wait for next update...

Chap 47

Dev told his father, Damian and nandini is jail. Great, things are sorted for them now. How can a sister kill her own sister especially for money and land. How disgusting? Daman is an abusive husband, not entirely shocked

Back to maaneet, does Maan have dimples in reality, can't really remember
What is Maan trying to do?
Roles reverse heh? Maan playing in the rain instead of Geet lol
Why does the rain always hold so much more significance in your stories

When did poonam regain her memory, but happy that they are together now

Chap 48

Devs father made a public apology to bapusa. I liked that part, if he has publically shamed him then he should publically apologise too, I really liked that part. As a father, and that too the father he is, I'm sure bapusa would have forgiven devs father had he apologised just in front of him. I really love this father

Aww perfect now poonam and Chandan, dev and Tara will live a perfect happy life

I liked the showdown at sonaski house, loved the slap. It's true though, why are some woman so mean and selfish. The saying woman are woman's greatest enemy doesn't come out of no where. Natasha deserves that also and some more lol. Domestic violence makes me cringe, seriously don't know why everyone would love with it but I somehow understand their reasons though I don't agree with it. Feel bad for sona. Super glad she'll get her happily ever after, please tell me that effing bitch jatin ended in prison, the sole place he deserves

Maan just needs a reason for self praise, Avi keh do uses only Sophie and Geet are allowed that 😆
ajj Keli ye Maaf kiya lol but this is his last warning. My anger can be s deadly thing lol

I do love a jealous Maan lol that too of Nakul, I repeat NAKUL like wat lol
Family's back, thank josh for that, I was getting a little scared seeing their romance

Raj defo has a brain, knows his son too well, Maan is defo his son lol, dentures lol
I like the father-son bond, people in love don't sleep huh? How do you know? Shit I don't sleep at night but I can like 100% guarantee I'm not in love and now after knowing that defo not falling in love lol, I need that little bit of beauty sleep o get lol

Originally posted by: DaftGirk

Chap 47

Dev told his father, Damian and nandini is jail. Great, things are sorted for them now. How can a sister kill her own sister especially for money and land. How disgusting? Daman is an abusive husband, not entirely shocked

Back to maaneet, does Maan have dimples in reality, can't really remember
What is Maan trying to do?
Roles reverse heh? Maan playing in the rain instead of Geet lol
Why does the rain always hold so much more significance in your stories
When did poonam regain her memory, but happy that they are together now

@bold: I am too insignificant a writer dear Apple 😆 It is difficult for me to separate my special feelings and experiences from my characters. Hence the mountains, the mist, the rain and that special thing that makes all my heros so similar 😳