SS : To Sir, With Love (TEASeR- PG 8) 11/01 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thts superb part... Maan going to have tough times with all this mischievous gang... Waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb update
Geet is all rebel

& Maan is the strict class teacher

Lets see how they will bloom their relationship

Waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I have read many fictions of my favourite jodi but this one was just hatke from others. Maan, a strict teacher and Geet, a student who is carefree and unruly. Perfect combination. Loved the prologue and the first part. Beautifully penned. Let's see how Maan is going to deal with the whole class and specially tame the arrogant ones. Superb. Please include me in your pm list.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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absolutely amazing start.
problem no 1 and problem no 2!!😆

if i may ask, are you a teacher or anywhere closely related to that field? I loved the detailing and one simply doesn't get it right if they have not experienced or researched good about it.

Geet is such a rebel and Adi is her partner in crime. i can totally visualize the two of them.. esply geet and her way of wearing the uniform, her way of speaking..I can relate to her so well.

Maan might look rough and tough from the outside but his emotions that you sketched was pitch perfect.

I could remember my college days when we had this completely new professor taking his first class with us...he had never taken a class before and that we were his first, the nervousness was so visible in his voice and his attitude, I will be honest, I pitied him. But of course we all slowly warmed up to him by the end of the semester. So, yep, totally understand Maan there. dealing with teens, esply bratty ones is not that easy.

Meera and dev? does she have a crush on him? Uh well, too early to assume anything as of now.
keeping my fingers crossed.
do update soon.

until next time,
kawaii

Edited by kawaii_geet - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting start dear
Loved it!!
Maan was dreading and had no intention to mend and rehabilitate ways of recalcitrant students but alas he was assigned too. Maan seems to be an austere teacher who seems to be tough but fair, demanding but ultimately reasonable figure. Maan has an assemblage of bratty students responsibility's on his shoulder. Though students might not be too fond of him , but they will respect him with time. Loved the way you have protrayed school's ambience and Maan's typical thoughts concerning students behavior.
Looking forward to know how Maan will bring his uncooperative students into his control and teach them mannerism along with subjects.
Thanks for the pm !
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Posted: 8 years ago
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fab update! well written! Poor Maan! Geet and Adi r mischievous! he had a tough task ahead of him! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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lovely!!! thankfully a decent teacher student story...i like how you have etched out the details!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 1 - Superb part. Maan teaching bratty students etiquettes of being student and how to treat their teacher.

Maan was scared to be class teacher of this class and everyone increased his fear by giving him best luck and made him aware of the mischievous students. Poor maan. All made him bali ka bakra'. But he took it as a challenge and decided to teach them in his way.

Aditya and geet were two difficult students to deal with. Seems dev scares of geet and beside that she was sitting with him only. Meera is only courageous student.

I liked how he named them problem no.1 and problem no.2. lol.

Microsoft Khurana. Lol.

Now he set the basic rules for them. Lets see how geet manipulates them.

Waiting for next part.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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geet the trouble maker going so good
lovely update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb Chapter

Maan been the class teacher of teens would be a tough job but yes he needs to be strict and show them he is the reacher and won't tolerate their disruptions in his class
Geet though she wears her uniform her dress code is inappropiate but I wonder is she a bright student
or is Dev Mishra the only topper but it seems like Meera too might be bright in studies
waiting to see what happens next with Maan Sir and his mischievous students

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