MG OS Change of Heart!!! (Last Part Pg 6) 7 October 2017

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A bright morning, birds are chirping, everyone are waking up to do their daily chores. A lavish mansion surrounded with vast and beautiful garden amidst chaotic Delhi. A beautiful women with blue saree, blue bangles in both her hands, mangalsutra adoring her, kumkum and sindoor on her face. An ideal bahu, wife and amazing architect is performing morning aarti and also singing with her melodious voice.

Om Jai Jagadish Hare

Swami Jai Jagadish Hare

Bhakt Jano Ke Sankat

Daas Jano Ke Sankat

Kshan Men Door Kare

Om Jai Jagadish Hare

She then takes the blessing of her Daadi saas. She is the only daughter-in-law of Savithri Khurana, a caring sister-in-law of Anjali Raizada and Abhimanyu Raizada, favorite maami of little Mahi (Daughter of Anjali Raizada and Abhimanyu Raizada) and loving wife of Maan Singh Khurana, (MD of Khurana Constructions) she is none other than Sameera Khurana. This is the daily routine in Khurana mansion. Sameera rushes to the kitchen to see if breakfast is ready for her family and special dish for her sweet and naughty mahi. Once everything is ready she starts going to her bedroom to check her husband.

"Maami, maamu kaha hai asks mahi holding a stuffed teddy. Sameera picks her up smilingly "chalo dekhte hain ki maamu kya kar rahe hain. Both of them see that Maan is still sleeping while sameera gets angry and mahi giggles "maamu toh abhi tak so rahe hain "hmmm aao main tumhe batati hoon ki maamu ko kaise jagaane hain she bring a mug of cold water and gives to mahi, mahi being naughty pours it over maan.

Maan wakes up shrieking loudly while sameera and mahi is laughing. "Sameeera yeh kya tareeka hain subha subha utaane ka??? "haawww maamu pehle aap late ho aur phil meri pyari maami ko daath rahe ho rukho main mumma ko batati hoon. Hearing all the commotion Anjali, Abhimanyu and Daadi (Savithri) comes to their room "Yeh kya shoor hain subha subha?? asks Anjali. Abhi laughs "Anju yeh aapki bhabi aur beti ka kamaal hain. Everyone laughs when Daadi replies "Aab chalo sab naasta kartain hain aur maan bete hum jaante hain ki kal aap kaam ki wajhe se late hog aye par ab chaliye naasta kijiye warne phir bhaagenge kaam ke liye.

Everyone leaves when maan pulls sameera and kisses her "arre ruko tum kaha jaa rahi ho meri jaanemann sameera blushingly "chodiye maan yeh kya subha subha koi dekh lega "accha ji aap bhi mahi ke saath milkar hume pareshaan kar rahi ho, hmm "nahi nahi main toh bas.. "chalo koi baath nahi bas kuch din aur "kyun maan kuch din aur uske baad kya hoga asks sameera confusingly. Maan hugs her "kuch din baad humari nanhi pari aayegi naa tab who meri team main hogi aur dekhna tab hum milkar in sab ka badla lenge sameera blushes "maan aap bhi na abhi main pregnant bhi nahi hoon aur aap abhi se yeh sab, chaliye jaldi kijiye aapko mujhe airport par drop karna hain maan whines "jaana jaroori hain kya??? "Maan main che mahine main ek baar apne ghar jaati hoon ab chaliye na

Everyone have breakfast and as usual mahi and maan are playing and joking around, everyone absolutely adores them. Maan drops sameera to airport and goes to Khurana Constructions. Its not even an hour when Anjali calls him "chote aap jaldi se ghar aajajao. Maan panics "Di kya hua aap ro kyun rahi hain?? Daadima teekh hain na Abhimanyu takes the phone "Maan tum pehle ghar aaja jao abhi issi waqt. Maan rushes to his home and sees everyone is crying and ACP is waiting for him "kya hua di humare ghar main police baath kya hain "Maan sameera ka flight crash ho gaya aur aur... "kya???? Aap juth bol rahi hain.. "nahi maan yahi sach hain. ACP comes forward and places a hand on him "Mr. Khurana sambhaliye apne aap ko yeh confirm hain ki Mrs. Khurana ki death hui hain par abhi body nahi mili hain. Hum milte hi aapko inform kareenge and goes away.

Maan refuses to accept and searches for her for a long time. Its been a year that Khurana Mansion has lost its charm and happiness. Maan has totally become aloof and stays to himself. "Naani yeh kab tak chalega chote apne ghaam se bahar kab ayega "isi baath ki fikaar hain hume Anjali beta, hume lagta hain maan ke shaadi dobaara karna chahiye This time Abhimanyu speaks "par naani aapko lagta hain maan maanega yeh toh bohat mushkil kaam hain "haan beta hum jaante hain par aur kya kar sakte hain. Sameera ko gaye huye ek saal ho gaya uska kuch pata nahi, who sach much hame chod kar chali gayi hain

Maan comes down from his room into the hall. Daadi calls him "Maan beta breakfast ke liye ayeyiye "nahi daadi ma office main bohat kaan hain.. "bete rukhiye aap roz kuch na kuch bahana banate, dinner saath main nahi karte atleast breakfast toh kijiye "please daadi ma mujhe force mat kijiye and goes away. Daadi starts crying "yeh kya ho gaya Anjali and Abhimanyu consoles her "please naani sambhaliye apne aap ko, hume poora yakeen hain ki maan ke zindagi bohat jald badal jayega Abhi takes her "naani chaliye aaj janmastmi hain hum sab mandir ho kar aate hain..

Mandir is decorated completely pandit is doing aarti and beautiful girl is singing

O Paalanhaare, Nirgun Aur Nyaare
O Paalanhaare, Nirgun Aur Nyaare
Tumre Bin Hamra Kaunon Naahin
Humri Uljhan Suljhaao Bhagwan
Tumre Bin Hamra Kaunon Naahin
Tumhe Humka Ho Sambhaale
Tumhe Hamre Rakhwaale
Tumre Bin Hamra Kaunon Naahin

She is Geet, an orphan who is working as a school teacher and bakth of lord Krishna who comes everyday to the temple. After completion of aarti pandit gives her prasad to distribute. Seeing sweets in her hand all the kids run to her "Didi didi hume chahiye do na "arre arre ruko sabko milega pehle jao aur Krishna baghwan ko pranam karke aao Daadi smiles seeing her while mahi runs to her "didi mujhe prasad chahiye maine pranam kar liya "accha.. so sweet good girl yeh lo mahi takes it and turns around she is not able to find her parents or naani in that crowd and starts crying. Geet comes to her and picks her up "kya hua aap ro kyun rahi ho??? "mujhe mumma chahiye par who mil nahi rhi hain "ale mera bacha ro mat hum milkar aapki mumma ko doonte hain chalo. Here Anjali is also frantically searching her mahi see and shouts. Geet takes her to them Anjali hugs her and cries "mahi baby aap kaha chale gaye yesa bhagte nahi Daadi comes and thanks her "thank you beta aapne itni madat ki aapka naam kya hain??? "ji koi baat nahi mera naam geet hain

Daadi likes her sweet nature and comes to the temple everyday to meet her. In a short span of time both of them gel up and daadi shares everything about maan with her and geet shares about her life. One day Daadi is very upset. Daadima kya hua aaj aap bohat udas hain "beta hume maan ki chinta lagi rehati hain aap toh sab kuch jaante hain na "don't worry daadima khanaji sab kuch teekh kar denge "who toh hain par ab sameera ko gaye huye ek saal se zyaada ho gaya, jab bhi hum maan ke saath uske shaadi ke baare main baath karte toh who chillate hain "daadima unhe waqt dijiye humesha har mushkil ki haal waqt ki karta hain "hmm yeh toh teekh kaha aapne accha yeh sab chodiye aur hume batayiye ki aapki bhi umar ho gayi hain toh aap kab shaadi karenge geet feels very sad "humse shaadi kaun karenge daadima hum toh anaath hain na aur phir shaadi ke liye ladka dekhne wala toh koi bhi nahi hain na "arre geet aap udaas kyun ho rahe hain hum hain na hum aapke shaadi karenge who bhi dhoom dhaam se aap chinta mat kijiya. saying daadi hugs her

It was soon mahi's birthday everyone was discussing about celebrating her birthday while having breakfast. Mahi sat there playing with her food she is very upset and shouts loudly "mujhe nahi chahiye birthday party!!! Anjali scolds her "mahi tum chilla kyun rahi ho, ho kya gaya hain tumhe bado se baath karna bhul gayi ho tum??? abhi stops hers and seeing tears in mahi's eyes he kneels down in front of her "kya hua baby aapko birthday party kyun nahi chahiye??? mahi cryingly hugs her father "kyunki maamu nahi ayenge har saal ki tarah aur who mujhse baath nahi karte aur wish bhi nahi karte.. main maan maamu ko bhohat miss karti hoon.. hearing this everyone feels very sad and one among them is maan.

Maan realizes in his sorrow how much he is hurting others. Mahi gets down from the chair and tries to run away when maan calls her. "mahi baby ruko mahi is happy that maan called her after so many mother and stops in her place. Maan goes to her kneels down and hugs her "I am so sorry baby aapke maamu na bohat bure hain par ab unhe samaj aa gaya hain unki mistake aap ne jo bhi punishment doge who hum karenge "sachi?? "mucchi "toh aapki punishment yeh hain ki aap kabhi bhi mahi se kabhi baath karna band nahi karenge aur hum sabko picnic lekhe jayenge.. "teekh hain baby jaisa app kahoge ab chalo kal tumhari birthday party ki preparations karte hain everybody smiles with tears in their eyes to seen maan changed so much and thanks mahi in their heart.

"Anjali beta aaj hum bohat kush hain, hum mandir ho kar aate hain air geet ko bhi birthday me liye invite kar me aayenge" " ji daadima abhi chaliye hum bhi guest list prepare karke invite bejenge" Daadima comes to temple and invites geet who agrees to come. The next day mansion is decorated in kids theme all for mahi by maan.. all the guests starts arriving and geet comes there.. She knew Savithri Devi was rich but did not expect to be this extravagant, she was completely mesmerized by the beauty.. Daadima welcomed her and introduced to her family everyone were happy meeting her. Maan was with mahi making her to laugh and enjoy..

Everything was going smoothly maan also had changed himself for his family but he was still against getting married again. Daadima was tired of pestering, also she was not getting a good match for geet and always shared her worries geet, she consoled daadima and assured her that khanaji will set everything right. In all this worries she fell ill and was admitted to hospital. "Daadima please aap kyun itni chinta kyun karti hain??? "maan hum chahte hain ki hum bhagwanji ke paas jaane se pehle aapki shaadi dekhna chahte hain.. "daadima aap kuch bhi kahiye main maan jaaunga siwaye shhaadi ke.. and goes away.

Doctor comes to Maan "Mr. Khurana aap please situation ko samjiye agar aa piss tarah Mrs. Savithriji se baath karenge unke health ko aur problem ho sakti hain, iske siwa aapke marzi Anjali and Abhimanyu goes near daadima and consoles her "please daadima aapki health sabse jyada important hain aap yesa kyun karti hain "Hum aur kya kare Anjali beta hume maan aur geet ki chinta rehati hain, maan ke liye kam se kam hum sab hain lekin geet use toh humne promise kiya tha ki hum unke ghar basayenge lekin unki bhi shaadi bhi pakki nahi ho rahi hain.. This strikes something in Abhimanyu's head and says "Daadima agar aap buran a mane toh kya main kuch kahu aap geetji ki shaadi maan se kyun nahi karte, who acchi ladki hain kaam karti hain aur aap unhe acche tarah se jaante hain "Arre haan yeh humare dimag main kyun nahi aya yeh toh bohat acchi baat hain aur hum jaante hain ki geet bhi humare baat ko mana nahi karegi.

To be Continued...😊

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Posted: 7 years ago
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😆 Sam gayab ho gai
Omg🤣 Maan ki tarah even I won't believe she's dead

Dekhna Maan k shadi k baad wo entry maregi😉

I'm waiting to know k wo mandap pe ayegi k shadi k baad 😛
Waiting for the next!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome ... Sam and maan are happily married .. 🤢
Yeh sam kaha chali gayi beech mein .??? Pakka kuch toh masla hain isiliye gayab hogayi ... I am damn sure that she is alive ... Ab beech mein geet jyada suffer hogi ... Maan will never accept her and sam firse waapas aayi toh yeh maan bhi uske paas chala jayega 😭 eagerly waiting for next one ... How many parts does this os contains???
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice start.. Sam not more & Maan can't accept..Dadi knows Geet from temple., anju give idea marrying both.. I hope Sam not come back.,
Waiting for next part..
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Very nice one,suddenly caught my eye as my sweet innocent sis ruppu commented here.😆

Ok coming back to the story-Maan and sam married, difficult to imagine...😕 That too happily married

and her dialogues matches with Geet and Geet's dialogue matches with Khushi of ipk... 😊

Geet is orphan!

So let's see what happens next!
Beautifully written!
Congrats for the new story!


Edited by Iptida - 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iptida

Very nice one,suddenly caught my eye as my sweet (devil) sis ruppu commented here.😆


Ok coming back to the story-Maan and sam amrried, difficult to imagine...😕 That to happiliy married

and her dialogues matches with Geet and Geet's dialogue matches with Khushi of ipk... 😊

Geet is orphan!

So let's see what happens next!
Beautifully written!

Congrats for the new story!


Sabko kehna chahiye kya ki mein devil hoon??? Ek kaam karo mere liye ek thread open karo meri devil sis bolkar 😵
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Posted: 7 years ago
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so sameera is very positive in this OS
geet entry and sameera exit
update next part soon
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Originally posted by: Roopa_1

Sabko kehna chahiye kya ki mein devil hoon??? Ek kaam karo mere liye ek thread open karo meri devil sis bolkar 😵

kaha pe baby🤣
waise thread ka idea accha hain 🤣😆
Edited by Iptida - 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iptida

kaha pe baby🤣
waise thread ka idea accha hain 🤣😆

😡😡
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Originally posted by: Roopa_1

Awesome ... Sam and maan are happily married .. 🤢

Yeh sam kaha chali gayi beech mein .??? Pakka kuch toh masla hain isiliye gayab hogayi ... I am damn sure that she is alive ... Ab beech mein geet jyada suffer hogi ... Maan will never accept her and sam firse waapas aayi toh yeh maan bhi uske paas chala jayega 😭 eagerly waiting for next one ... How many parts does this os contains???


Not many parts probably next will be last one if not 2 more parts...

Edited by SandhyaMG - 7 years ago

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