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maaneetcraze

@maaneetcraze

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#431

Precap is interesting
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Jealous maan is a treat as always
Waiting 4 next
N tune dte ka pm mari he i have already commented so didn't c it
Dubara bhej pm

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#432

thnx for pm
will read soon

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Jasbir Kaur

@jasbirkaur85197

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Posted: 7 years ago

#433

Great update. ...Thanks for pm. ...nd this is most desirable story of your's which I like the most

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paru

@enthusiastic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#434

Wonderful update dear⭐️

Thanks for the pm🤗

Continue soon..

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#435

awesome update maan was lost in his thoughts so much he didn't see ball coming his way geet saved him but ended in his arms both lst in each other geet is feeling something she hadn't felt in a long time she was amazed how emotional maan made her feel someone attack maan geet saved him she was hell scared for him and couldn't understand why but was very worried maan calming her down making her understand that he is alright myrah looking for a sword that belongs to khurana clan buried somewhere

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maaneetcraze

@maaneetcraze

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#436

thx 4 correcting the pm ipti
commente already
a huge 1🤪 bhag mat jana dek k

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AYAZU12

@AYAZU12

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Posted: 7 years ago

#437

awesome update dear loved it!! maan is getting drawn towards geet and is finding it difficult to stop himself from getting lost in her divine and mystical self and geet too is very attracted towards him and wishes if it was just a dream without the mission is is forced to do...someone shot a bullet at maan but geet saved him and was worried for his safety but maan assured her that he knows who is behind it and he'll handle it...what was myrah doing in the forest and what sword was she talking about then geet calling her and asking her why she send someone to shot maan without discussing it to her but myrah said she didn't send anyone so who was it and her talks to geet about the sword made me more curious...the story is getting more mysterious after every update ipti and that is what is keeping hooked and brainstorm myself thinking what the mystery behind all this could but for that we have to wait I guess...thnx for the pm dear update soon...

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nigah

@nigah

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#438

Thanks for the pm and update was waiting for it...

Loved the way maan is showing his inner feelings...

And maaneet vedio was awesome...

Waiting for next update and also update soon

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#439

Awesome update
Maan is drowning in Geet's mistriousself
Loved the way Geet saved Maan
You written it sooo well that I think ki I'm watching a horror movie
Loved it ❤️

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 7 years ago

#440

Excellent Chapter

The Vm's were all Amazing loved it

Geet and Maan's conversation was awesome it seems that both are getting attracted towards each other and yet at the same time they are controlling themselves

when the shooter approached Geet saw in the refection he had a gun and that's when she threw herself on Maan to save him , she was filled with such fear I was very much surprised

though I know that somehow Maan would have saved himself from the bullet but Geet's care and concern for him was definitely a new shade to her

and why did Geet think that it was Myrah who has send the shooter after Maan

so Myrah is after the sword that once belonged to the Khurana family so this sword must be having some special powers or its just extremely valuable

the entire scene with Myrah walking into the woods and the fog appearing thick the creepiness and howling of dogs that was just awesome