Fantastic chapter awesome storyline
It's different basically all your stories have different versions of Maaneer and they are indeed different than all other ff i have read till now but its a treat 2 read somthng on horror like this and your excellent writing the whole thing is just so much interesting n with each ud a few questn is ansd par new questn arising
Maan has some divine power bt r they against evil?
Maan is so soo so kind soul in this he is worried abt geet n myrah 4 that creature
Geet jab faint hui uske bad kia really usko kuch yad nai thi k wo natak kar rahi thi?
Uski mom dad n background jo bataya kia wo sach hai? Ho bhi sakta hai warna why didnt her mom dad try 2 save myrah
Ab geet maan ko lure karne k lie kia karegi kyu ki maan toh hatkato se insan lag nahi raha aur wo dark chiz usne maan ko warn karna chaha it said they are sinners? Its so mysterious wow i loved the whole glowing divine part it seems like maan is some sort of divine creature but he doesnt know or control that aur ab toh bohot jayda interesting ho chuka hain loving this one extremely plz try to update soon yar at least 4 me i wait 4 this 1
I love horror supernatural n maaneet ke upar toh its a treat 2 read
Overall i am smitten by this wonderful chapter and wanted 2 comment a big 1 for all the efforts you are doing. Love u ipti for such wonderful ffs
Edited by solaceMG - 8 years ago