Arcane Divinity!~On Hiatus - Page 14

Originally posted by: Iptida

<font color="#009999">Not so soon! Need more feedback!</font>

Originally posted by: solaceMG

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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

thanks 4 da pm! already commented on page 9 for chap 1 and page 13 for chap 2

Originally posted by: anu5

Intriguing start with mystery nuance dear

Loved it!! Well written.

Maan was attracted towards Myra seeing her beauty and unpretentious aura. He went out of his self to help Myra in her studies as she confided him about her problems and counted on him for her studies. He reached Myra's place to assist her in her studies and came across Geet. Geet was threatened and coerced to entice Maan in her trap. Geet was forced to accept their ( boy and girls) words and offer as Myra was held captive in their clutches. They girl and boy's respective beloved person was being held hostage by his captor and wants Maan in return of his freedom. The boy and girl choose Geet to lure Maan. Geet was brought back from her muse by Maan's action.

Since Myra is with Geet , I think Geet successfully accomplished her mission. If Geet was fortunate then how come Maan didn't recognize Geet !!? Is Geet some undercover cop that boy and girl approached her to lure Maan !!? What pain and oath Geet was referring too !!?

Looking forward to the mysteries to unfold.

Thanks for updating !!

:))

Originally posted by: solaceMG

Excellent update
Brillant writing
Very mysterious
Someone is blackmailing Geet so that she traps Maan, but why? What did Maan do? Looks like someone wants revenge. But why that guy who is threatening geet he wants Geet to lure Maan? Why he can't do it himself
Maan is a teacher n he seem to admire his new student myrah.
How is maan around girls?what about his love life??
Maan ne geet ko pehchana nahi but then geet ke pov se toh looks like she was or is in love with him
This story is different
Waiting for it to unfold
Thank you so much ipti for sharing your stories.

Originally posted by: Iptida

<font color="#009999">I guess lot's of your question has answers after the 2nd part!
Hmm what did maan do- good question. he did nothing!
Thank you so very much for all your love and support isha! Admire it!😳🤗</font>

Originally posted by: solaceMG

He did nothing???
Aur confuse mat karo already bhot confuse hu
Ud kab karogi?

Originally posted by: solaceMG

Ek suprise ud hi de do ipti
Waiting 4 this eagerly

Originally posted by: Iptida

thanks a lot sweetheart! 😳🤗