Amorous Elixir! UPDATED CH12, CH 13@Pg126[CH11@pg 114]24th Dec

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nehakapoor7

@nehakapoor7

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Posted: 7 years ago

#571

awesome update..

OMG.. Geet wanted to show Raghav possissiveness of Maan but game ulta ho gaya.. Maan is uncontrollable & warned Raghav.. also told them his feeling about Geet.. which means clear indication that he never ever let go geet from him.. & won;t allow anyone to come near her.. she is his & only his.. actually i love his possessiveness

Indeed Geet is lucky she is having Maan & good friend like Raghav.. now Geet too know What Maan is for her.. I was literally laughing when Maan said Raghav that if he is BF of Geet then Even Maan would be his BF 😆 OMG🤣 & in bachpan Maan Geet played chupa- chippi.. now both will play Pyar-Pyar😳😉

thnx for pm..waiting for next update

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#572

hi Ipti commented on chap 8 on page 88

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#573

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hi Ipti commented on chap 8 on page 88

Thanks a lot sweets...
Yes I have seen!! Shall reply soon!😳

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 7 years ago

#574

Profound update dear

Loved it!! Articulate and crisp writing.

Loved Maan's fiery and possessive shades for Geet. An absolute treat !!

Loved Maan's retaliation to Geet's statement and his proprietorship over her. Maan was irked with Geet's statement about emotions but his retort to Geet was worldly-wise and impressive. Loved his line regarding heart and emotions ka Kya connection!?. Maan was on blaze and brilliance to show Geet and Raghav who has upper hand on Geet and claims on Geet. Seeing Maan's intensity of attitude and eccentric banter Raghav choose to leave the place but alas he couldn't apropos to Maan's demeanor. Loved the way Maan mellowed down seeing Geet in tears and wanted to kiss her in intense situation. Geet's words made Maan pounce on her and her statement about Raghav being her boyfriend made ambiance more grave and sarcastic. Maan being a good observant didn't fail to notice Geet's restlessness whilst stating her words and could understand Geet better than her. Geet wanted to show Raghav glimpse of Maan's possessiveness for her owing to their previous convo before Maan's entry and Raghav's demand for explaination but alas Maan showed Raghav the whole picture of his possessiveness for Geet with his witticism and sarcastic digs. Loved the way Maan tried to convey depth of his relationship with Geet and value of the extra "f" in their relationship. If Raghav accepts Geet's proposal he has to accept him as well as he is comes with Geet. Loved Maan's do and don't list for Raghav on being in relationship with Geet.He wants them to understand if Geet wants to leave him , he wont let her go or leave her I his entire lifeline. Maan mentions Raghav about their kiss and level of intimacy they share. Loved his endearments for Raghav with sarcastic best. He wants Raghav to understand how important and special Geet is to him.Geet was flabbergasted with Maan's demeanor and asks if he is drunk!? Guess Maan is drunk in Geet's love but not willing to show his emotions out and was best in masking his feelings for her. Inspite of his sarcasm and forewarns, Maan was surprised to see Raghav unwavered and clam with his retaliation whilst Raghav was bothered and distrubed about Maan's words but didn't make it obvious and noticeable on his face and did show that he wasnt affected by Maans words. Maan came to Geet's place as he wants Rahul's recording to solve the problem and Geet's diary. why does he need Geet's diary !? Geet was affected by Maans closeness.

Loved Maan's witticism and sarcastic demeanor. Maan stoled the whole limelight with the every shades he protrayed. He definitely wants his kitten back in his life as his best friend.

Thanks for the pm !

:))

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Doracake

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Posted: 7 years ago

#575

OMG what an explosive update

Maan said all about their relations in front of Raghav.

Poor Raghav had to witness the intimacy of Baby Maaneet.

If they r this much in their teens what will happen when they grow up ????????😲

Waiting for next

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Tris

@astrisa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#576

Originally posted by: Iptida

<font color="#009999">Thanks baby!</font>

Commented page 87 n 77

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#577

Originally posted by: CRAZYCUTEE
what is this maan is so so so so possive for geet
and geet plan backfire her realy maan is mad for geet
any way superb update

Thanks a lot dear!

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Jasbir Kaur

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Posted: 7 years ago

#578

Awesome nd adorable possessive maan. ..i love this maan. ..beautifully written ...Thanks for pm and update

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#579

Originally posted by: taahir004
This is another story of yours that I love reading , this Maan I totally enjoy
The Chapter was just Perfectly Awesome

Oh how cool Maan answers his Misty that he has a heart its pumping blood and he is all perfect and fine standing in front of her and her so called BF , now annoying her further he tells her she is Miss Topper but so sacastically reminds her she is Ex Miss Topper because he is there and has taken her place .
okay and I so loved how he said "Now stop F... with me and tell me where is it " , he is there mainly for a mission to recover that recording Rahul made and at the same time to give Raghav a dose of what BFF is about . the possessiveness I just can't get enough of this shade of his .
poor Raghav wanting to leave and Maan telling him to stay quiet while Geet sizes the moment in defense of Raghav , she riled Maan up and shattered him with her words but he is strong enough not to show his emotions and the fact that Raghav is there just makes it worst so what better way to then to turn the tables around and let Raghav know about their unique friendship but before that I could actually visualize Maan saying to Geet Don't give me any F... Attitude , now isn't that so cool he knows just how to simmer her down too and yes it also felt that Maan could easily lose himself in her closeness .
his demands his statements that held so much anger , possessiveness and as if he only as all the rights on her well he did already make that clear with Raghav that everything should pass by him oh I forgot Maan telling Geet that from now she will behave like she used to do before wow that was just so awesome I felt at that statement he was wanting his old friend back but didn't show it as his attitude was raw and wild
I'm so into this Maan's character
Geet having tears in her eyes and that has to be Maan's weakness
ouch ! the way Maan calls Raghav as sweetheart had me in stitches then he says my heartfelt condolences oops sorry I meant congratulations now Maan was at his sacastic best
telling Raghav that his Cutie , his Baby is angry with him because he left for two years and I think he wants Raghav to understand just how special Geet is to him that he won't stay away from her even if she wants that , Maan says so Raghav Baby again been sacastic before he rectifies himself calling him dude

Thank you for this Mind Blowing Chapter I totally enjoyed it

WOW Now that is a comment which made my day!
I am so happy to know that you are liking this story to this extent.. Are my other ones not up to the mark though? hehehe JK!

Thank god people are receiving his sarcasm positively! I myself do have such a side in me (oops secrets are getting spilled) So I do relate with Maan a lot rather than Geet! 😆

Thank you very very much for this wonderful comment Taahir!!!

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#580

Originally posted by: vrishtigoel
Lol.. m not able to clearly understand maan .. and geet also for that matter. Does she love hin or not.. but loved his possessive jealous banter 😆😆..
Really nice update.. please continue soon :)

Maan is a very complicated character here...
With time his shades would be clear!
What you don't understand ask me i Shall try to clear it my best!

Thanks for the lovely comment!😃

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