Amorous Elixir! UPDATED CH12, CH 13@Pg126[CH11@pg 114]24th Dec

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#581

Omg what a update
Loved Maan's possisivenes and his backfire language
Loved the way Maan warn Raghav
Poor Raghav kitna bhi koshish kare ki he is not effected by maan but maan ki fiery words usse alert kar rahe hai
Geet Raghav ko Maan ki possisivenes dikhana chahti hai but uska plan Maan apni witty talking se fail kar deta hai
Loved this Maan soo much
Beautifully written

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AYAZU12

@AYAZU12

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Posted: 7 years ago

#582

marvellous update ipti...seems like Maan had truly lost his mind as he geet declared Raghav as her bf which didn't go well with him and the possessive bff of hers laid down all the terms and conditions to Raghav which he has to follow if he wants to be her bf but what was left for Raghav as all the rights on her were already sealed by Maan...poor geet was so embarrassed as Maan told Raghav about what they did in the morning has been doing since years...Raghav left them alone saying it doesn't bothers him and he will talk to Maan when he'll be a little calm and composed...geet was so angry on Maan as he embarrassed her infront of Raghav told him go away from her but Maan asked her for her phone and dairy after which he'll leave...so Maan is all set to clear all the mu between them and hope he will succeed in this...thnx for the pm update soon...

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#583

superb part

but ya

geet ko thoda mehnga pda

but its good

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Tris

@astrisa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#584

My res in on page 87 baby tumne dekha nai kia 😭

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#585

TEASER~~~~~~~

"It's ok... You can trust me..." His soft voice caressed her longing listeners, "You know how?? Just close your eyes and remember my face... remember the days we spent together..." He slowly traced his fingertips on her cute eyebrows, painting her with his amorous touchings, "Listen to your beats... can't you still trust me Geet??" With each sentence his voice got soother!

"I know you can still find your little Maan there... I know you miss me... I am so sorry for not being with you as I have promised... I failed you??!! I failed us!! I am so sorry for making you feel so lonely... I know you...feel these... because I feel the same without you Mooh... I miss our naive fights... running around like we didn't care anything...

Roothna manana.. Your cribbing... And mostly... Tumhare woh sarey cravings... dreams... late night blackmails... Ek paal mein mujhse gussa hona dusre paal mein bhag ke mere paas aana... Sharing everything together... Solving math riddles together... Everything...

Sardi ke mausaam mein ek blanket ke niche hamari ladai.. Hamesha aapne freezing hands se achanak mere stomach mein tumhare shararati touches... Ya baarish mein jabardasti mere sath bheeghna aur phir dono ke sath mein fevers... Mere liye hamesha school ke bahar intezaar karna... Sath mein golgappey khana... Jaab tak main rootha rahoon tumhare bhookhe rehne ki woh sarey zidd...

Abhi bhi main wahi Maan hoon.. Aur tum meri Mishti ho... Thoda sa toh aitbaar karo mujhpe... "Unlike any other time, these instances his voice was saturated with gentleness and so much of tender love that she forced her vision to look into his dark browns!

There she only found out oozing emotions for her. If love can be seen with naked eyes it must look like the gaze he is emitting right now!

Maan saw the pain in her eyes and could not help himself from pressing his trembling lips on her forehead!

"You know..." He paused briefly, trying to read her bemused hazels, "You will always be my elixir..." Deeply gazing into her eyes for another eternity he let out a sigh, "Good night... I am sorry for everything..." His last sentence echoed even after he was long gone after planting that soft kiss on her forehead which she doesn't even comprehend why made her feel the time has stopped within that one fraction of a second! So much peace! Just like her old Maan! Just like those old days!

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Thanks for reading!!

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Edited by Iptida - 7 years ago

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#586

UPDATING POSSIBILITY TONIGHT IF NOT THEN TOMORROW!

Make sure to like the teaser!

Edited by Iptida - 7 years ago

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Tris

@astrisa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#587

Awe its so so so adorable n emotional
They had such a pure friendship bond
Very simple yet extra ordinary
Maan still has a child inside him
His soul reside inside geet like literally
He loves her so much so purely
I wonder why is geet so hurt
Is it because what maan said?
Because she felt lonely?
Want to know her point of view
I just loved it when he said "you will always be my elixir"
And dialogue to as usual you are pro on it
Teaser is indeed teasing
Waiting so much for the update
Plz update 2night if you can
Thnx a lot for this beautifil teaser

Edited by solaceMG - 7 years ago