VISHKANYA**EPILOGUE 1, 2** Pg. 119, 121** 18/01/18 - Page 68

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Nice update dear
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Brijendra summons his son to attack Bhujang and wants to fulfill his thirst for revenge. Lord Mahadev fore warns Parvati and asks her to decide her fate. Parvati choose her husband's life over her self respect. Maan as got second chance to amend his mistakes and to lead a blissful life with his love. Hope he doesn't break her self-respect this time.
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love song gumar with imagining drishti in it, now rajkumari in dielema save life of husband or her swabhimaan what she will select i think she will select this time bhujang over her atmasanmaan.
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CHAPTER 37




ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, RELIGIOUS TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

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In two days time Bhujang (Maan) will be leaving for Mumbai. But Rajmata Savitri Devi was not letting Parvati leave for Mumbai with Maharaj Bhujang, much to Bhujang's annoyance. Unfortunately, Bhujang (Maan) couldn't do anything as his grandmother was in poor health. Hence a frustrated Bhujang (Maan) was going to leave alone for Mumbai. Due to looking after Rajmata's (Dadimaa / Nanimaa as she now insisted on being called) health in these past three weeks, Bhujang (Maan) and Parvati had started coming closer physically as well as emotionally.

It did not take Bhujang long to understand that Parvati has removed her "suraksha kavach (protection shield) when next day Bhujang woke up to find Parvati is sleeping closer to him than ever before as well as Bhujang was holding her hand tightly in his strong manly hands. Now Parvati would also not shirk her hand away when Bhujang held it or Parvati didn't fume when he gave her kisses on her nape, her hand and even her lips. But besides few touches and kisses here and there nothing progressed any further. Bhujang was happy and contented as of now as it was better than getting electocuted and being given a cold shoulder. Bhujang trusted Parvati implicitly regards welfare of his grandmother and would not do anything without Parvati's approval regarding Rajmata Savitri Devi i.e. his Dadimaa's diet, medicine, activity etc. Parvati would also not make any changes in Dadimaa's life style unless Maan approved of it!

It was one night when Bhujang was returning after having a political meeting with his grandmother, father and ministers of Ajgarh, that Bhujang saw Parvati sitting outside in the Palace verandah in deep thought.



"Kya hua Geet? Tum pareshaan lag rahi ho! (What happened Geet? You are looking tense.)

"Maharaj aap hummein "Parvati hi keh kar sambodhit kijiye. Kyunki deewaron ke bhi kaan hote hain. (Your Highness, please address me as "Parvati. Because there are traitors here everywhere.)

"Theek hai, magar tum itni pareshaan kyun ho?(Alright, but why are you so perturbed?)

Parvati tried changing the topic, "Aap hummein yeh battaiye Maharaj, ki aap ne hummein mera matlab hai Geet ko kaise pechana Garv ke roop mein?(Your Highness, please tell me, "How did you recognise me to be Geet instead of Garv?) While talking Parvati was walking resulting in her outside in the Royal lawn with Bhujang following her.

"Tumhein yaad hai ki tumne tabhi khaana khatam kiya thaa? (Do you remember that you had just finished your lunch?) Parvati nodded in affirmative. "Tum apne jhoote uttar kar beithi thee? (You were sitting with your shoes kicked off?) Parvati again nodded in affirmative. "Khaana khaane ki wajeh se tumhari mooch nikal aayi thee aur nange pair hone ki wajeh se maine tumhare pairon ki nail polish dekh li thee.(Due to eating your moushtache had got dislodged. As you were bare feet, I could see nail polish on your toe nails!)

"Oh toh iss kaaran... (Oh, thats why...)

"Parvati, battao ki tumhei kab patta chala ki mai Ajgarh ke rajparivaar se, Yuvraj Bhujang hoon? (Parvati, how did you come know that I belong to the Royal family of Ajgarh and I am Yuvraj Bhujang?)

"Maharaj... (Your Highness...)

"Maan bolo yaa Bhujang. Abb tum MERI PATNI ho! (Call me Maan aur Bhujang. You are MY WIFE now!) Maharaj Bhujang commanded.

"Yeh tab ki baat hai jab Rajkumari Neelakshi aapke vivaah prastaav ke prashchaat hummein apne saath zabardasti le gayeen theen. Ek din humne Gurudev (Rajpurohit Ram Prasad Mishra) se chupte-chupate aapse milne Khurana Mansion aaye the kyunki hum aapse judaai aur sehan nahi kar paa rahe the. Hum apna naagin ka roop badalkar aapke kamre ki shweth (white) deewaron mein lupt ho kar aapke aane ki pratiksha kar rahe the. Jab aap apne kamre mein Maa ke saath aaye toh aapko humari gandh aayi. Iss se pehle ki aap hummein dhoondh paate athva hum manushiye roop mein aate, aapko Ajgarh ke sainik naag apne saath le gaye. (This incident happened after Princess Neelakshi forcefully dragged me with her. One day I slipped away without Gurudev (Rajpurohit Ram Prasad Mishra)being aware of my absence from his home. I was unable to bear seperation from you any longer. Hence, in my snake form which was white in colour I was camouflaged in the walls of your room waiting for you. When you entered your room with Maa you smelt my body odour. Before you could detect me and I could transform into human form, Ajgarh's snake soldiers came and took you with them.)

While narrating this, Bhujang had gently guided Parvati to the corner of the royal garden, made her sit on the swing present there



and Bhujang placed his head on Parvati's lap and started playing (not playing but opening) with her braid!



While Bhujang was busy opening Parvati's braid, Parvati was busy running her fingers through Bhujang's dark brown thick wavy hair. Suddenly there was a crack of thunder and it started raining before Bhujang and Parvati could take shelter, they were drenched.





Clothes were sticking like a second skin to both their bodies showing each muscle and curve respectively.



Unable to hold himself any longer, Bhujang carried his semi aroused wife inside their bedroom and they made passionate love to one another till they were exhausted.







Two days later Bhujang left for Mumbai but in these two days he made sure that Parvati and his nights were full of passion and love!





Meanwhile in Mumbai, Rajkumari Kumudini was getting hyper with making umpteen frantic phonecalls to Parvati as days of Vicky's wedding was coming closer. Despite of Parvati's trying to calm her down. Parvati was giving daily a subdued Pam instructions on phone as Parvati was not present physically to supervise. Now that Rana Rudrasen Rathore had returned back to Mauritius (according to Pam) a dillusioned and disappointed Pam started focusing more on work. She was given a reality check when she came to know that Rana Rudrasen Rathore and her Parvati Ma'am are engaged. When she heard that her Parvati Ma'am has got married to the Maan Singh Khurana, Pam was elated that now she was free to marry Rana Rudrasen Rathore. But one day before she could ask about Rana Rudrasen, a common business associate of Rana Rudrasen Rathore and Parvati Ma'am arrived. He asked what was the reason for Parvati to break of her engagement to Rana Rudrasen Rathore? Parvati Ma'am had said that she broken off the engagement when she came to know at the last moment that Rudrasen was an already married man.

Two weeks after Maan's leaving, Parvati along with Rajmata Savitri Devi and Maharaj Nagendra left for Mumbai for Vicky's pre wedding ceremonies when rajvaidh (doctor) gave approval nod that Rajmata Savitri Devi could travel. Rajmata Savitri Devi, Maharaj Nagendra and Parvati left for Mumbai by Royal Singh family's owned plane.

Seeing Rajmata Savitri Devi's extremely poor health and weak body, Rajkumari Kumudini had wanted to postpone the wedding by three weeks but didn't have the heart to request Vicky for postponement of his wedding which he was extremely excited for. Before Rajkumari Kumudini or Parvati could gently speak to him regarding postponement the wedding, he himself said, "Mom and Bhabhi, I would like to postpone my wedding by three weeks.

"Magar kyun beta? Meera aur tum toh bahut excited the apni shaadi ko le kar. (Why son? I thought Meera and you were very excited for your wedding.)



"Haan the Maa aur abb bhi hain. Magar Maa abhi Nanimaa ki tabiyat theek nahi aur meri ek important meeting hai jisse mai delay nahi kar sakta. Maine Meera, Gupta Uncle aur Gupta Aunty se baat kar li woh shaadi postpone karne ke liye tyaar hain. (Yes Mom, we were and we are very excited for our wedding. But Mom, grandmaa is not well and besides I have an important meeting for my business which I can't postpone.I have already spoken to Meera, Gupta Uncle and Gupta Aunty regards postponing of Meera and my wedding.)
Vicky had opened two years back his Interior Designing company as that was the condition by Khuranas if Vicky wanted to marry Meera i.e. he has to be economically independant. Once he started working, he started enjoying it!

"Theek hai beta jaisi tumhari marzi! (Alright as you wish!)

Vicky was hardly talking to Maan. There was a cold war going on between Maan and Vicky since past four weeks.

FLASHBACK

It was six weeks back when Vicky saw his brother going inside the Hotel suite and another man who called himself Rana Rudrasen Rathore exited after sometime. Vicky by using his influence, entered the suite of Rana Rudrasen. Soon as Rudrasen entered his Hotel room, an angry male voice stopped him, "THEHRIYE RANA RUDRASEN RATHORE! (STOP RANA RUDRASEN RATHORE!)

Rudra turned and was shocked to see Vicky but gathering his composure he said, "WHO ARE YOU? WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN MY HOTEL SUITE?

"Even I can ask, "who are you and what are you doing Mr. Maan Singh Khurana or Maharaj of Naaglok, Maharaj Bhujang?
Rudra closed his eyes and came back to his "Maan Singh Khurana persona.



"Vicky, I want to woo Geet.

"Magar Geet bhabhi toh... (But Geet bhabhi is...)

"Bhagwan Mahadev ne mujh par apni aseem kripa karke usse punarjanam diya hai "Parvati Kalika Chauhan ke roop mein. (Lord Mahadev had mercy on me and gave her a rebirth for my sake. Now her name is "Parvati Kalika Chauhan)

"Bhai, bhabhi ne aapko pehchana nahi? (Bro, sister-in-law didn't recognize you.)

"Woh toh mai nahi jaanta Vicky. Magar woh naa toh mere se theek se baath karti hai aur mere paas aati hai. (That I don't know Vicky. But she refuses to talk or come near me.)

"Are you surprised? Vicky asked sarcastically.

"No I'm not. But I have to get her back, I'm incomplete and lifeless without her.

"Aapko yeh sab unki disrespect karne se pehle sochna chahiye thaa. (You should have thought about all that before disrespecting her.)

"Maanta hoon ki jo kuch maine apne gusse, ahankaar aur ego mein kiya woh galat hi nahi gunah thaa. But I want to repent my sins. (I agree with you that what all I did under the influence of my anger, arrogance and ego, was not only a mistake but a sin. Now, I want to repent my sins.)

"By using a fake identity? NEVER! Mai abhi jaa kar bhabhi ko sab sach batta doonga! (By using a fake identity? NEVER! I will go and tell bhabhi the truth right now!) Vicky walked towards the main door in anger.

"Theek hai toh mai bhi Meera ko tumhari asliyat batta doonga. (Fine then I will also tell Meera truth about you.) Vicky looked at Maan confused. "Yehi ki tum insaan nahi ek icchadhaari naag ho. (That you are not human but a self transforming snake.)

"MAI ICCHADHAARI NAAG NAHIN HOON! (I'M NOT A SELF TRANSFORMING SNAKE!)

"Chalo maana ki tum icchadhaari naag nahi ho magar tumhari nanhihaal(maternal grandparent's family) toh icchadhaari naagon ki hai! (Agreed you are not a self transforming snake. But your maternal grandparent's family belongs to a self transforming snake family.)

"Bhai I never thought you will stoop so low.

"EVERYTHING IS FAIR IN LOVE AND WAR!

"Theek hai toh "war hi sahi. Aaj se aur abhi se naa toh mai aapko apna bhai maanta hoon aur naa hi aapke iss dhokke mein Maa aur mai aapka saath denge. (Fine, then this is "war. From today onwards, I neither consider you my brother nor will mother and I support you in this deception.) Vicky walked out of the suite slamming the door much to Maan's surprise as he had never seen Vicky this angry. Vicky's anger was resembling the anger of a snake or a person from "naag yoni.


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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for pm. Wonderful update.
The anger of vicky is right while maan too in their places. It is not new for maan to hurt someone for his wish. This time he hurt vicky in all this. Maan is lucky that he has boon of lord shiv. Otherwise after doing so mistakes he never deserve second chance but he is getting chances after chances so that he can finish brijendra.
Even geet too surrender coz it was order of lord shiv otherwise she will not let him touch her at any cost.
waiting for next.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update
Finally Maan and Geet come closer
Hope in future they remain like this
Also there is war bw be Maan and Vicky
Thanks for PM
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
oh no...abb kya hoga vicky aur maan k beech...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
Edited by love2_soma - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice part
Maan geet came closer
But vicky maan were drifting apart
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thanks for the pm! perfect update, well written! Maan and Geet come closer! but Vicky upset with Maan! update soon

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