VISHKANYA**EPILOGUE 1, 2** Pg. 119, 121** 18/01/18 - Page 66

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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome updates dear, dadi suffer lot in her past, geet forgive dadi, eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow awesome update yaar

Just loved the update too much

Loved the way savitri devi shared her feelings and emotions
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Nice updates dear
Liked both the update
Geet and dadima's convo was emotional and touching too. Dadima shared her story with Geet and the reason behind her past deeds. She asked forgiveness from Geet too. Geet was never angry on dadima and could see through dadima to understand dadima's thoughts and prespective unlike her beloved who failed to understand dadima's grief s and thoughts. All came to know reality behind dadima's behavior.
Thanks for the double updates.
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NICE UPDATE
GEET FORGIVEN DADI

VERY SAD PART IN DADI'S PAST LIFE

THATS Y GEET IS VERY MUCH CONCERN ABOUT DADI

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Posted: 7 years ago
Two Fabulous Chapters

Rajmata had suffered emotionally as a young girl she was forced to marry the king and only when his first wife died she was crowned queen but after his death she had to control royal protacol and raise two kids all by her self
this made her believe that only power earns respect there is nothing about love in family
after Durga died Rajmata was guilty of poisioning Maan's mind still I believe Maan did not respect his wife neither could he love her as without respect there is no love maybe his Daadima made him realize his wife is characterless but he had no trust in his wife
the family now hearing her painful past has soften towards her and she also ask Pavati for forgiveness for herself and on behalf of Maan
Pavati and Maan are married but it also seems like now she hates her husband so will they not live like husband and wife
I'll be waiting to see what happens in their marriage and how will they combine they powers to kill Brijendra
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Chapter 27

Superb Chapter

Parvati knows everyone from the royal family and though hey all believe she is Durga she says she is not but only looks like her
why is Maan so adamant in wanting to marry Parvati he feels she is arrogant but he is also
he keeps on refering his late wife as his Geet yet he never respected her and Parvati also knows this
both make these vows one to never marry Maan while he promises to marry Parvati
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wonderful double updates...very emotional story which shared by dadimaa about her painful past... she also asked forgiveness from geet ... she was happy to hear geet was never angry on her but understand her unlike her lovely family...oh no dadima had Heart attack but recovered from it...excited for next...thanks for pm...!!


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CHAPTER 36


P.S. THIS CHAPTER HAS HINDU MYTHOLOGICAL CONTENT. READ ONLY IF COMFORTABLE!



ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, RELIGIOUS TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

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Now that Rajmata Savitri Devi's family had soften towards her and were with Rajmata emotionally and physically i.e. Maharaj Nagendra, Maharaj Bhujang and Rajkumari Kumudini (as long as she was in Ajgarh)and would frequently visit her in the daytime and Parvati would visit Rajmata Savitri Devi in night time. Thus, she started recovering. Maharaj Bhujang was unable to leave his sick grandmother despite of his anger towards her hence he took three weeks off from Khurana Constructions much to Rajmata Savitri Devi's delight and Rajkumari Kumudini's dismay. Rajkumari Kumudini had left after two days to organise Vicky's upcoming wedding. However, now Rajmata would only listen to Parvati's instructions and only want Parvati to help her in everything i.e. her food, her medicine, any suggestion etc. Many a time she even ignored Bhujang's suggestion in front of Parvati's. Rajmata was unable to address Parvati as "Parvati or Paro, she would only address her as "Durgeshwari or Durga.

Location: Maharaj Bhujang's room in Palace of Ajgarh




It was two days since the newly weds had arrived in Ajgarh. Since morning, Parvati was feeling low as it was that time of the month. Maan had asked her a number of times what's wrong but she refused to answer him properly. Finally around 8:00p.m. that night her body finally gave up. Parvati was on her way out of the washroom and had just opened the door when she fainted. Before her body could touch the ground Bhujang (Maan) caught her in his arms and carried her to their bed in the bedroom.
Unknown to anyone but her parents i.e. Rajveer and Sumitra. Her parents were forewarned by Lord Mahadev, "Rajveer aur Sumitra, ek chetawani, "Jab kabhi bhi Parvati Kalika murchit hone evam nindra mein hone toh uske shareer ko utthane ki cheshtha (koshish) matt kariyega kyunki tum dono uska bhaar seh nahi paaoge. Iss vishwa ka koi manushiye uska bhaar nahi seh paayega siwaiye uske pati ke. Smaran rahe ki Parvati Kalika ek saadharan kanya nahi ek divya kanya hai! (Rajveer and Sumitra, I'm warning you, "If at anytime Parvati Kalika has fainted or is in deep sleep. Please don't try to lift her physically as no human in this universe can lift her except her husband. Remember Parvati Kalika is not an ordinary girl but a girl with divine powers!)

When Parvati Kalika gained her consciousness she found herself on the bed. Surprised she asked, "Hummein yahaan kaun laya? (Who brought me here?)

"Obviously mai. Kyun? (Obviously me. Why?)

"AAP HUMMEIN UTTHA PAAYE? (YOU COULD LIFT ME UP?)

"Why not? You are as light as feather.

"FEATHER?

"But why are you surprised?

"Mahadev ke kahe anusaar humara wazan (weight) itna adhik hai ki hummein manushiyon ka uttana toh door ki baat hai, Naaglok ke shaktishaali naagon ke liye bhi durlabh hai siwaiye... (According to Lord Mahadev my weight is so much that for any human its impossible to lift me up and also for the strongest snakes in the snakeworld its very difficult to lift me. Except for...)

"Siwaiye kiske? (Except for whom?) Seeing Parvati became quite with a slight blush, Bhujang again asked, "Siwaiye kiske? (Except for whom?)

"Aapke yaani kewal "humare pati hi hummein utta sakte hain. (For you, I mean except for "my husband.) Making Maan ecstatic by hearing Parvati referring to him as her "pati for the first time.

Just then there was knock at door. "Yuvraj, Rajmata aapko aur Rajkumari-sa ko khaane ke liye bula rahi hain. (Crown Prince, Queen Mother has summoned you and Princess downstairs for dinner!)

Parvati was about to get up and go when Bhujang said in a forceful and no nonsense voice. "Agar tum iss bistar se uttheen to mai bhi khaane ke liye nahi jaaonga. (If you get out of this bed, even I will not go down for dinner.)

"Nahi aap jaayiye warna Dadimaa ghabara jaayengi. Mai yaheen leti hoon. (No you please go otherwise Dadimaa will get stressed. I'll keep lying down on the bed.) Parvati settled back in bed.

Half an hour later, when Maan entered his bedroom, he found Parvati (Geet) in deep sleep. Maan decided not to wake up Parvati as she was looking very pale and tired since morning. Maan changed into his night clothes and went to sleep. Yesterday, when Bhujang and Parvati had arrived in Ajgarh Palace after their marriage, Bhujang was expecting over reaction from Parvati i.e she will not sleep in one room and on one bed but she quitely went on left side of the bed and slept. Bhujang then remembered that she has nothing to fear because if Bhujang tries to come near Parvati, her protection shield will electrocute him.


Location: Place in a jungle under earth's crust (Pataal lok)



Maharaj Brijendra with two of his most trusted informers and his son, Rajkunwar Yashvardhan was discussing the next plan of action to kill Maharaj ("Yuvraj as Brijendra wanted to call him) Bhujang and may be his wife.

"Rajkunwar Yashvardhan (Brijendra's son) kripya aap Senapati Charudutt ke saath Yuvraj Bhujang par aakraman kijiyega. (Prince Yashvardhan, please accompany Commander-in- chief Charudutt and attack Crown Prince Bhujang.)

"Pitahji yadi unke saath koi ho? (Father,if someone else is with him?)

"Toh unhein bhi mrityu lok paunhcha dijiye. (Then kill them as well.)

"Parantu pitahji... (But father...)

"Koi kintu parantu nahi! RAJKUNWAR YASHVARDHAN AAKRAMAN KI TYAARI KIJIYE! (No ifs and buts! PRINCE YASHVARDHAN PREPARE FOR ATTACK.) Maharaj Brijendra thundered throwing a fire bolt at his own son's direction which luckily missed Rajkunwar Yashvardhan by few inches. Seeing his father's obssession with death of Maharaj Bhujang, Rajkunwar Yashvardhan decided to attack Maharaj Bhujang as he could foresee his death either at hands of Maharaj Bhujang or his egoist and heartless father.

One and a half week since Parvati and Bhujang (Maan) had arrived at Ajgarh, Rajmata started feeling better. Now she wanted to have a ladies singing and dancing evening or "ladies sangeet. Although Maharaj Nagendra, Maharaj Bhujang and Parvati tried to convince her against it but she was not willing to listen and was behaving like a stubborn child. Finally they agreed for a small two hour program with immediate family i.e. Rajkumari Kumudini, Vicky, Singhania Royal family and Rathore Royal family. Men were sent out and women picked up "dholak and started dancing.



Parvati was traditionally dressed in Royal attire with long ghunghat so all guests could do Rajkumari / Maharani Parvati Kalika's "mukh dikhai as well.





Soon the program was ending when Rajmata Savitri Devi and Rajmata Vijaylakshmi insisted on Parvati dancing so she picked up a traditional folk dance with little upbeat,

Ghoomar
(Movie: Padmavati)




Over hearing maids' talking that Princess Parvati is going to dance, Bhujang positioned himself at a secret "jharokha (window) from where he could see Parvati but no one else could see him.



Maan was smitten seeing his wife in the traditional dress and jewellery dancing very gracefully.


It was two weeks since Maan and Parvati's marriage and their arrival in Ajgarh. It was around 01:00a.m., Bhujang and Parvati were sleeping on the bed in their room. When two evil looking snakes slithered on the foot of their bed. Before they could attack a large black snake with "trishul mark on its hood blocked their way.


(Courtsey: Icchapyaari naagin)

The snake increased its size and counter attacked. Hearing the hissing sounds, Parvati who was a light sleeper woke up. Before she could get out of the bed, the black snake with "trishul mark on its hood had killed the other two snakes.


(Courtsey: Icchapyaari naagin)

Parvati knew that its not an ordinary snake and she went near the snake and fell on her knees with folded hands, "Darshan dijiye Prabhu! (Please grace me with your benevolent presence, My Lord!) The snake disappeared and Lord Mahadev stood on its place.



"Prabhu, aapko sharth-shath pranam. (Lord Mahadev, my salutations to you!)

"Durgeshwari hum aapse rusht hain. (Durgeshwari I'm displeased with you.)

"Kyun Prabhu? Humse kya galati hui hai. (Why My Lord? What have I done wrong?)

"Durgeshwari, tumne apne aapko "suraksha kavach" mein kyun dhakka hai? (Durgeshwari, why have you covered yourself completely with "suraksha kavach (protection shield)?)

"Prabhu, woh...woh... (My Lord, that is...because...)

"Putri Durgeshwari, aapko smaran rehna chahiye ki aap saadharn naag kanya evam manushiye kanya nahi hain. Aap Adishakti ka ansh hain jo Devon ke ek vishesh karye ke liye iss sansaar mein avtarit hui hain. Aur Bhujang bhi issi karye vash iss sansaar mein bheja gaya hai. Yadi aap dono ka sampoorn milan nahi hoga toh aapki shaktiyon ka bhi milan nahi hoga. Yadi aap dono ki shaktiyan ek nahi huyeen toh Brijendra ki asuri shaktiyon kaa anth nahi ho sakta. Durgeshwari yadi tumne apna yeh shishu hatt nahi chodha toh hum bhi nahi Brijendra ke naagon se Bhujang ke jeevan ko baccha paayenge. (My child Durgeshwari, you must always remember that neither are you an ordinary human girl nor a girl from snake form. Your are a fragment of Adishakti who has been sent into this world by Gods for a special purpose. And Bhujang has also been sent for the same purpose. If you both don't come close in all ways then your powers will not unite! If your powers don't unite then Brijendra and his evil powers will not be destroyed. Durgeshwari, if you don't get rid of your childish tantrum then next time even I won't be able to save Bhujang's life!) Lord Mahadev explained calming down.



"Kaunsa hatt, Prabhu? (What tantrum am I displaying?)

"Woh hi hatt ki tum Bhujang ke nikat nahi aaogi. Durgeshwari abb aapka nirnaye lena ka samay aa gaya hai." (That you will not let Bhujang come close to you. Durgeshwari, time has come for you to take a decision.)

"Kaisa nirnaye Prabhu? (What decision, My Lord?)

"Durgeshwari tumhein aab yeh nirnaye lena hi hoga ki tumhein apna swabhimaan adhik priye hai athva apne pati evam apne suhaag ka jeevan? Chaho toh isse humari aakhari chetawani samajh lo! (Durgeshwari, you have to decide whether you love your self respect more or your husband's life? If you want you can consider it my last warning to you!) Saying this Lord Mahadev vanished taking the two dead snakes with him.

Parvati went to the balcony attached to her room, carrying "gangajal (water from the Holy river Ganges) from her puja table. She sprinkled water on herself and recited few mantras (verses) and then went and lay on the bed. To see if her "suraksha kavach (protection shield) is dissolved or not, she held Bhujang's hand. But when Bhujang didn't get up due to electric shock she understood that that her "suraksha kavach (protection shield) is dissolved. But before she could remove her hand, Bhujang in deep sleep held Parvati's hand in a tight grip muttering "Geet...meri...hansini! (Geet, my swan!) turned over and slept. Parvati went back into memories of her previous birth and was getting very emotional. Parvati knew she has to be emotionally strong if she has to fight Brijendra as he is all ready and waiting to kill her husband her love, her Bhujang, NOT MAAN! She had to think like Durgeshwari/ Parvati NOT GEET!



Parvati wanted to wake up Maan and remove her hand from his hold but she stopped as Lord Mahadev's warning echoed in her head, "Tumhein apna swabhimaan adhik priye hai athva apne pati ka jeevan?(You love your self respect more or your husband's life?)


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Edited by LM1991 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Woah very nice one
Now maan and geet may come close soon
Hope everything will be fyn and hope bhujang make sures durga's self respect wont get tarnished ..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update
Brij tried to kill Maan
So saving him Geet and Maan had to come close
Thanks for PM
Update soon

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