VISHKANYA**EPILOGUE 1, 2** Pg. 119, 121** 18/01/18 - Page 69

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CHAPTER 38



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PRESENT TIME

It was a week before Vicky and Meera's wedding that, Vicky saw Parvati being surrounded by two evil looking snakes in the verandah of Khurana Mansion. Vicky yelled, "Bhabhi, bhai kahaan hain? (Bhabhi, where is bhaiya?)

"Patta nahi Vicky bhaiya. (I don't know Vicky bhaiya.)

Suddenly without him being aware, Vicky had an unnatural intense feeling of anger and next he felt his body being dragged on the cold floor of Khurana Mansion. Vicky realised that he had transformed into his snake or python form. The two evil snakes seeing Vicky and Parvati in snake form were perturbed and were about to attack but before that a huge deep black python with golden spots appeared. Seeing just the size of python and his intense golden angry eyes, the two evil looking snakes vanished. Black python changed to Maharaj Bhujang and he changed the other brown python to Vicky but when he turned to look at the brown cobra he found it not moving. Bhujang with his powers first transformed the brown cobra into human form i.e. Parvati Kalika and then carried her to their bedroom with a worried Vicky following.

"Bhai, bhabhi ko kya hua? (Bro, whats wrong with bhabhi?)

"Patta nahi Vicky, Geet aaj kal bahut behosh (faint) hone lagi hai. Kal mai rajvaidhji ko bulata hoon. (I don't know Vicky. Geet is nowadays frequently fainting. Tomorrow I'll ask royal priest to examine her.)

"Doctor, ko kyun nahi... (Why don't you ask a doctor...)
Vicky understood the reason before he completed his question.

"Vicky, thank you for saving Geet. Bhujang went near Vicky and hugged him.

"Bhai, I'm sorry that I got angry with you and was disrespectful to you few weeks back.

"No it alright. I understand. You know I never lie but it was very urgent that I marry Geet or Parvati as soon as possible if we have to kill Brijendra and save Naaglok!

Two weeks later Vicky and Meera were married admist lot of pomp and show. Vicky's happiness knew no bounds and he was grinning ear to ear whereas Meera was a blushing bride. Kumudini and Maan (Bhujang) were busy seeing to their guests needs. Parvati was busy running errands for the panditji (priest) performing the wedding as well as other errands as she was the wedding planner! Suddenly she felt dizzy and sat down at once. Pam came in search of Parvati and saw her sitting holding her head. "Ma'am,are you alright?

"Pam, I'm feeling dizzy can you please get me a glass of water. Just as Pam was leaving, Parvati caught hold of Pam's hand and said, "For heaven sake, DON'T TELL MY HUSBAND!

Few days after their marriage, Vicky and Meera left for their honeymoon not realising that when they return their family life maybe turned upside down!

Location: Kailash Parvat, Lord Shiv and Goddess Adishakti's home.



"Swami, aapne aur humne Bhujang ko kitna samjhaya aur uske paapon ko kshama bhi kiya hai, kintu uske swabhaav mein koi bhi parivartan nahi aaya. Woh abb bhi ek ghammandi, krodhi aur hatteela naag hai. (My Lord, both you and I have tried time and again to explain and forgive Bhujang for his sins but he refuses to mend his ways. He is still an angry, arrogant and stubborn snake.) Goddess Adishakti asked Lord Mahadev.

"Priye, Bhujang humara "raudra roop ka ansh hai iss kaaran vash usmein adhik komal bhaavanaiye nahi hain. Bhujang prithvi lok mein kewal Brijendra kaa anth karne ke avtarith hua hai jiss prakaar aapki ansh Parvati Kalika avtarith hui hai. Bhujang aur Parvati Kalika dono sipahi hain aur ek saadhan maatra (means) hain Brijendra ka anth karne ke liye. Bhujang ek purush hai aur usmein manushiyon ki tehre prem, lasya evam karuna bhavna nahi hai. Parvati Kalika prakrati hai iss liye usmein prem, lasya evam karuna hai kintu woh apna upmaan nahi seh paati." (My dear, Bhujang is born from my "anger form and hence doesn't have finer feelings. He was sent to earth only to kill Brijendra just like your fragment, Parvati Kalika was also sent for the same purpose. Bhujang and Parvati Kalika are warriors and a means to destroy evil force, Brijendra. Bhujang is a male form of nature hence he doesn't have feelings like love, compassion and grace. Parvati Kalika is the female form of nature hence has love, compassion and grace but can't withstand her disrespect.)

"Prantu swami, iska upaye kya hai? (But My Lord, what is the solution for this?)

"Devi, yeh manushiyon ki prem kahaani nahi hai ki dono patron mein prem ho jaaye and uske pashchat woh sakushal jeevan bitayen. Yeh divye yudhaon ka yudh hai asuri shaktiyon ka naash karne ke liye. Yudh samaapath ho gaya toh woh dono hummein wapis samaa jaayenge. (My dear, this is not a humans' love story that the two central characters will fall in love and live happily ever after. This is a battle of celestial powers against evil forces and thereby destroying them. Once the battle is over they will merge in both of us respectively.) Saying this Lord Mahadev closed his eyes and started meditating.

Location : Khurana Mansion, Mumbai

Kumudini was on phone with Rajveer and Sumitra. After lot of insistence by Rajveer and Sumitra as well as Parvati not keeping well, so Kumudini agreed to send Parvati to her "maika or maternal home making Bhujang furious. "Maa, aap Gee...Parvati ko kaise "Kailash Sadan bhej sakteen hain? Uski tabiyat bhi theek nahi. (Mom, how can you send Gee...Parvati to "Kailash Sadan. She is not even well.)

"Issi liye. Woh apne mata-pitah ke saath kuch samay bitayegi toh uski tabiyat behtar ho jaayegi. Aur waise bhi abhi aap London jaa rahe hain aur Parvati ki "pag pheron ki rasam bhi poori nahi hui hai. (That is the reason. She will stay with her parents and feel better. Anyway you are away for a business trip to London. Also one post wedding ritual of "pag phera has not been performed.)

Therefore next day Parvati left for Kailash Sadan for her pag phera ceremony. After two days of her being in her maika, Kumudini called and Parvati asked if she could see her previous birth parents i.e. visit for few days to Vishgarh. Kumudini agreed as Maan (Bhujang) had gone for a week to London for business. It was only two days since Parvati arrived in Vishgarh and it felt that she had never left. Maharaj Virendra Pratap got his voice back and started talking. Maharani Pallavi's paralysis also reduced and she was able to get up and gingerly walk. Maharaj Krishan Pratap now openly hugged and showed his emotions to Parvati in presence of family members which he never did with Durga. One day Parvati was in lawn playing with her 9yr. old nephew, Rajkunwar Vidyut Krishan Singhania



when a strange man dressed in a royal get up came and told Parvati, "Rajkumari Neelakshi, aap turant humare saath chaliye.(Princess Neelakshi, please come with me right now!)

"Hum Rajkumari Neelakshi nahi hain. Hum Parvati Kalika hain. (I'm not Princess Neelakshi. I'm Parvati Kalika.)

"Naam badalne se roop nahi badalta. (Just by changing your name you can't change your beauty.)



The man forcibly held Parvati's hand and felt himself struck by an electric current. "Theek hai aap nahi jaayengi toh hum iss sapole (baby snake) ko le jaayenge. (Fine, if you won't come with me. I'm taking this baby snake.)

"Theek hai hum aapke saath chalenge kintu aap Rajkunwar Vidyut ko pehle chodhiye. Aur apna parichay dijiye! (Fine. I'll come with you but first leave Prince Vidyut. Introduce yourself.)

"HUM HAIN MAHARAJ BRIJENDRA, NAAGLOK KE MAHARAJ! (I'm King of Naaglok, King Brijendra.)

"AAP MAHARAJ BRIJENDRA AVASHIYE HAIN. KINTU NAAGLOK KE MAHARAJ, KEWAL HUMARE PATI, MAHARAJ BHUJANG HAIN. (You are undoubtedly King Brijendra. But King of Naaglok is one and only my husband, Maharaj Bhujang.)

"Kya tu kal ki naagin, hummein... (Why you a chit of a...) Saying this Maharaj Brijendra was about to attack Parvati when larger than life Maharaj Bhujang blocked Maharaj Brijendra's way. "BRIJENDRA SAVDHAAN! HUM CHETAWANI DE RAHE HAIN YADHPI AAPNE HUMARI PATNI KO HAATH BHI LAGAYA TOH USKA PARINAAM AAPKO BHUKADNA PADHEGA! (BRIJENDRA BEWARE! I'm warning you, if you touch my wife,I will not be responsible for the consequences!)

Both the Kings of Naaglok, one former, Maharaj Brijendra and one current, Maharaj Bhujang changed into their battle uniform and hence the war started.




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CHAPTER 39


ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, RELIGIOUS TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

ALL THE PHOTOGRAPHS DOWNLOADED DO NOT BELONG TO ME BUT BELONG TO THE ORIGINAL UPLOADER. I HAVE JUST USED THEM AS THEY GO WITH MY STORY! PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!




P.S. THIS CHAPTER HAS HINDU MYTHOLOGICAL CONTENT. READ ONLY IF COMFORTABLE!




The battle between Maharaj Brijendra and Maharaj Bhujang continued. Day became days, days became a week and it was soon going into the second week of battle, when Maharani Parvati against her family's wishes joined the battle. Maharaj Brijendra was again using underhand ways for the battle, resulting in both Maharaj Bhujang and Maharani Parvati being brutually injured by Maharaj Brijendra. Finally both husband and wife using their remaining powers aimed at Maharaj Brijendra giving him a fatal wound but he was still alive. Using a deadly weapon he again attacked both Maharaj Bhujang and Maharani Parvati making them immobile (paralysed) but before he could attack them again there was an intense divine white light.



The divine white light was none other than Lord Mahadev in "Rudra form



and Goddess Adishakti in "Kali form.



They aimed at Maharaj Brijendra and he was lying dead.



The only people who could witness Lord Mahadev's "Rudra form and Goddess Adishakti's "Kali form were Maharaj Bhujang, Maharani Parvati, Rajpurohit Ram Prasad Mishra, Rajmata Vijaylakshmi, Rajmata Savitri Devi and Maharani Rukmini. Maharaj Bhujang and Rajmata Savitri Devi could witness the Almighty due their devoted penance in last five years. Rajmata Vijaylakshmi due to her selfless devotion and Maharani Rukmini due to her unconditional love and good deeds towards Durgeshwari and citizens of Kingdom of Vishgarh.

Lord Mahadev and Goddess Adishakti blessed Maharaj Bhujang and Maharani Parvati, "Aap dono ne sarva shresth karye kiya hai. Adishakti aur hum aap dono ki kartvya prati nishtha se atyanth prasann hain. Bhujang aur Durgeshwari, aapka yeh sansarik jeevan tyaagne ka aur bhramaand mein leen hone ka samay aa gaya hai. Bhujang ke moksh se aapka moksh bandha hua hai Durgeshwari iss liye hum aap dono ko moksh pradaan karte hain. (You both have completed your mission par excellance. Adishakti and I'm very pleased with your devotion to duty. Bhujang and Durgeshwari, now its time for you to leave this world and merge into your creators! Durgeshwari, your salvation is connected to Bhujang's salvation so I'm granting both of you salvation.)

Maharaj Bhujang and Maharani Parvati closed their eyes and bowed their head in respect as they were immobile.
"Prabhu aap Maharaj Bhujang and Maharani Parvati ko humse door nahi kar sakte. (My Lord you cannot seperate King Bhujang and Queen Parvati from us!) Rajpurohit Ram Prasad Mishra said with tears running down from his eyes.



"Rajpurohitji, yeh aap kya keh rahe hain. Aap toh gyaani aur bhavishye darshi hain. Aapko gyaat hai ki Bhujang aur Durgeshwari ka iss sansaar mein janam kewal naagon ke udhaar evam Brijendra ke anth ke liye hua thaa. Yeh karye pehle hi poorn ho jaate yadi iss sansaar ki kureetiyon ke kaaran Durgeshwari ko apne praan unke samay poorv hone se pehle hi nahi dene padhte. Aapko yeh bhi gyaat hain ki Bhujang humara ansh hain aur Durgeshwari, Adishakti ka ansh. Abb humare anshon ko hummein leen ho jaane dijiye. Aap apna kartavya nibhayiye aur hummein apna nibhane dijiye! (Royal Priest, please control yourself. You are knowledgeable and can see into future. You were perfectly aware that Bhujang aur Durgeshwari were brought in this world for freedom and protection of snakes and snakeworld as well as destroying of Brijendra. This mission would have been completed long back had Durgeshwari not given up her life before time, fighting against social injustices of this World. You were well aware that Durgeshwari was fragment of Adishakti and Bhujang is my fragment. Now its time for our fragments to get assimilated in us. You do your duty and let us do ours!)

"Prabhu aur Mata, hummein humare paapon ke liye kshama kijiye. Humne aapke aur Maa Adishakti ke anshon ke saath bahut durvyovahaar kiye hain. Jiss kaaran humare vansh ko Maa Adishakti ka shraap bhi mila hai. (My Lord and Goddess, please forgive me for my sins which I did towards your respective fragments. Due to which my family was cursed by Goddess Adishakti.) Rajmata Savitri Devi said with folded hands, tears running from her eyes and she dropped down on her knees in front of Lord Mahadev and Goddess Adishakti.


(please imagine folded hands instead of phone!)


"Savitri, aapke paap aapne swayam nahi kiye, humari "maya ne aapse karaaya! (Savitri, you did not commit sins on your own it was due our "maya that you did it.)



"Kintu prabhu humare kukarmon ke kaaran humne apni moksha hi raah dooshit kar di. (But My Lord, due to my bad deeds I have tarnished my salvation!)

"Nahi Savitri! Aapne jo bhi kiya humare aadesh anusaar kiya. Aapke swabhaav ke kaaran, Durgeshwari ko punar-janam lena padha jiske kaaran uss Brijendra ka naash hua. Kyunki woh Brijendra ek sadhaaran naag nahi ek asur thaa. Uska anth kewal Durgeshwari ke dwara sambhav nahi thaa kyunki Durgeshwari ka ardh jeevan Bhujang ko dene ke pashchat unki shaktiyaan bhi vibhaajit ho gayeen theen. Durgeshwari ke punar-janam lete hi unki shaktiyaan bhi doggoni ho gayeen. Bhujang aur Durgeshwari ke saat kiye huye aakraman ko Brijendra seh nahi paya aur dher ho gaya. Iss liye aap apne antar mann se gilaani (guilt) nikaal dijiye." (No Savitri! You did what was destined by us. Due to your behaviour, Durgeshwari had to take a rebirth and thereby bring about the end of Brijendra. Because Brijendra was not an ordinary snake but a demon. His end could not have been possible by Durgeshwari alone as her half life was inside Bhujang and so was her powers. After Durgeshwari's rebirth, her powers also doubled. Hence, when Bhujang and Durgeshwari attacked Brijendra together he could not bear their attack and crumbled thereby making it easy for us to destroy him.Hence remove guilt from your heart.) Goddess Adishakti explained.




"Kintu Maa, humne apne vansh ko dooshit kar diya. Humare vansh mein abb koi "kanyajanam nahi legi. (But Maa, I have tarnished my clan. Now no "girl will be born in our family!)

"Savitri hum aapko smaran karaa dein ki Durgeshwari ne Rukmini se kahaa thaa ki saath (7) peedhe paschaat Singhania rajgharane aur Singh rajgharane mein ek-ek kanya janam legi. (Savitri, I should remind you that Durgeshwari had blessed Rukmini saying that after seven (7) generations both in Singhania Royal family and Singh Royal family a girl will be born in each family.) Goddess Adishakti reminded Rajmata Savitri Devi.

"Bhujang aur Durgeshwari apne iss lok ke sage sambandhiyon se vidha le lijiye. (Bhujang and Durgeshwari bid farewell to your this world families.) Lord Mahadev instructed Maharaj Bhujang and Maharani Parvati. By Lord Mahadev's blessings, both Maharaj Bhujang and Maharani Parvati's immobility was removed. Also, now all the citizens of Ajgarh and Vishgarh could see Maharaj Bhujang and Maharani Parvati's true celestial form. Maharani Parvati who had by now changed into Rajkumari Durgeshwari or Maharani Durgeshwari, Queen of Naaglok (Naaglok ki Maharani).



Hence Maharaj Bhujang and Maharani Durgeshwari first touched Lord Mahadev and Goddess Adishakti's feet then Rajpurohit Ram Prasad Mishra, Rajmata Vijaylakshmi, Rajmata Savitri Devi, Maharaj Virendra Pratap, Maharaj Nagendra and Maharani Pallavi's feet. Next Maharani Durgeshwari went near Maharani Rukmini and hugged her and said, "Bhabhi-sa hummein Parvati Kalika ke purnarjeevan ke pashchaat aap ki kami atyadhik mehsoos hui hai.(Bhabhi, after my rebirth, I have missed you the most!)

"Durga matt jaayiye. Aap hummein itne varshon pashchaat mileen hain. Aur aap toh garbhvati bhi hain! (Durga, don't go. I finally got you back after so many years! You are pregnant as well.) Surprising everyone present most Bhujang.



"Bhabhi-sa, apne Prabhu aur Maa ka aadesh sunna hai. Aap abb yeh bhi jaanti hain ki hum dono naa toh "manushiye yoni ke hain aur naa hi "naag yoni ke hain. Iss liye hummei wapis apne lok mein jaane dijiye aur moksh praptha karne dijiye! (Bhabhi, you have heard Lord Mahadev and Goddess Adishakti's order. You are now also aware that we both are neither of human form nor of snake form. Please let us return to our own world and gain salvation!)

"Putri Rukmini, Parvati Kalika ki kok mein jo pal raha hai, uske moksha ka bhi vidhi ne yehi vidhaan racha hai. Aap apne bhai aur bhabhi ko moh mein matt baandhiye ki inka moksh sthagit ho jaaye. (Dear Rukmini, the child who is now in Parvati Kalika's womb, his salvation was also forecasted by destiny this way. Now don't hamper your brother and sister-in-law's salvation by tying them in a rope of wishes and desires!) Lord Mahadev explained.

Then Maharaj Bhujang and Maharani Durgeshwari rose to the sky with their folded hands saying, "Ajgarh aur Vishgarh ke niwasiyon hummein prasthaan karne ki sweekriti dijiye! (Citizens of Ajgarh and Vishgarh, please give us your permission to leave!) Then both again lay where they were lying before with eyes closed and their bodies still. Lord Mahadev transformed them to their snake form. Then with Lord Mahadev's raised his hand in blessing gesture towards Maharaj Bhujang and Maharani Durgeshwari's snake bodies, three lights appeared which were just divine light of their souls but no body and vanished into the sky with Lord Mahadev and Goddess Adishakti from the earth leaving behind a sobbing Singhania Royal family, Singh Royal family, Kingdom of Ajgarh and Kingdom of Vishgarh !






THE END



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End????

So soon?
Great story but sad ending .
But anyways thanks for the story dear
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Originally posted by: Ramjanki

End????

So soon?
Great story but sad ending .
But anyways thanks for the story dear



I hope to post an Epilogue in few days!

LM
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Originally posted by: LM1991



I hope to post an Epilogue in few days!

LM

i'll wait for few lovely moments😛
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Chapters 36 n 37
Amazing n wonderful updates
Edited by priyasree - 7 years ago
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Chapters 38 n 39

Awesome n superb updates

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nooo...dis cant b true...maan n geet cant die...want dem back...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Great one .. but so soon
Thanku for the pm
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Nice update
Waiting for epilogue
Thanks for PM
Update soon

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