VISHKANYA**EPILOGUE 1, 2** Pg. 119, 121** 18/01/18 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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My Dear friends,
Hi!
There are a few things I would like to bring to your notice before you start reading the story "Vishkanya".
As I was writing two stories at the same time, there was a slight mix up in the charactersketch, hence I would suggest you all please re-read the edited Charactersketch and Prologue of "Vishkanya" .
Although this is a purely a "fantasy" story with very little truth behind it, there will still be mentions of Hindu mythology hence read only if you are comfortable with it!
But if any of you are uncomfortable with it, please skip this story fully!
I hope you all enjoy this story.
Thank you!
LM



P.S. I have a writer's block regarding "Satrangi Indradhanush" hence you will have to give me time to complete that story.
LM

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CHAPTER 1

ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, RELIGIOUS TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

ALL THE PHOTOGRAPHS DOWNLOADED DO NOT BELONG TO ME BUT BELONG TO THE ORIGINAL UPLOADER. I HAVE JUST USED THEM AS THEY GO WITH MY STORY! PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!


Location: KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS (KC), MUMBAI, SATURDAY 08:50a.m.



The staff of Khurana Constructions were arriving and quickly settling in as their boss cum terror, THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA, was due to arrive soon after a month of absence from KC office. Soon the siren hooted indicating the arrival of THE TERROR! All the staff were running here and there to reach to their seats and make their work area neat and clean. Men were correcting the collars of their shirts and tightening the knot of their ties. Women were straightening and smoothening their dresses/skirts and applying another coat of lipstick or lip gloss on their already coloured lips! The only person uneffected was the young and new PA to MD of Khurana Constructions, Mr. Garv Singh Handa. The MD of Khurana Constructions, Mr. Maan Singh Khurana had arrived Garv sensed as there was pin drop silence in the central enclosure where majority of staff's cubicles were present; also there was complete silence in the doorways and conference room next to his cabin. Just then there was buzz on intercom connecting to MD's cabin and Garv knew that he has been summoned. Picking up files of all ongoing projects and a copy of today's schedule of meeting and conferences MD had to attend (original MD's schedule was already on MD's table) which Garv had put as soon as he had arrived in the morning i.e. 08:00a.m.

Location: MD's CABIN, KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS (KC), MUMBAI,



Garv knocked the cabin door with shivering hands as he was meeting his boss for first time since his joining KC. Although in past one month, Adi Sir had made sure that Garv was comfortable with KC's functioning and what MD likes and dislikes but still boss is boss!! A husky baritone answered, "COME IN!" Garv opened the door and entered. MD was bent over blue prints which Sasha Ma'am had designed. Seeing Adi Sir, Garv relaxed slightly. MD finally looked up and Garv was stunned seeing him after so long with his hatred rising. Before his hatred could surface for this man and he doesn't blow his cover, Garv looked at the file in his hands. But Garv must remember to keep his little sister, Geet away from this man's magnetic personality! Also Garv wanted to leave this room as soon as possible due to the certain overpowering smell in this room. Just then Garv realised that the smell was not from the room but from the man named Maan Singh Khurana. Smell was also a body smell not a smell due to Mr. Khurana's deodorant or after shave. Smell which if Garv stays near for too long could trigger Garv to take his natural form. But luckily Adi broke Garv's thoughts saying, "Sir, this is Mr. Garv Singh Handa your new PA. He is a very hardworking youngman. He is currently studying, hence attends office only in afternoon after his college but Saturday he is here full day." Maan nodded in understanding.

Garv was not the only one effected by overpowering smell, Mr. Maan Singh Khurana was also effected with overpowering smell. The smell had come in the room since Garv had entered. A smell which had a strong connection with Maan's past, the past which he so wanted to ignore and forget. Maan was feeling as if this young lad, Garv although simply dressed but is trying to hide something below this heavy business suit, turban, out dated spectacles and a wispy moustache and beard.



Adi also use to be simply and modestly dressed but this young lad seems to suddenly come out from the 1960s era. "Mr. Handa, where is my today's schedule?" Maan asked to change his train of thoughts. Garv went around the table and fished out his schedule from under the blueprints on the table. The moment Garv came near Maan, the smell grew stronger making Maan's head swim and his eyes sparkle. Before the smell makes Maan loose his control and come to his true form, Maan got into his MD mode and started barking orders which quickly Garv started jotting down and Adi quitely slipped out of the room.

After an hour of intense work, Maan said, "Mr. Handa, I'll give you rest of dictation later in the day as I have to leave for my meeting with HODs."

"Sir do you need me to come with you to take down notes for the meeting?" Asked Garv in his slight husky boyish voice. The voice was young and immature suiting his age. The touch of huskiness was making it certain that he was a male.

"No Mr. Handa, you please type the urgent letters, I'll take Tasha with me. You can leave."

"Yes Sir!"

Once Garv left, Maan was in his thoughts, "Kyun mai uss ladke ki taraf aakarshit ho raha hoon? Ek mard dusare mard ki taraf...?
Nahi! Yeh aakarshan manush yoni kaa nahi hai. Yeh toh...
Magar yahaan kissi ko meri asliyat maloom nahi siwaye Maa ke...
Toh phir...?"
(Why am I getting attracted to that boy? How can one male get attracted to another male...?
No! This attraction is not of human form. This is...
But no one is aware of my truth except mother...
Then why...?)

Maan ran his hand through his hair ruffling them to a mess.
Just then there was a knock. Maan ordered, "COME IN!" Maan knew in advance due to the overpowering smell who it was before Garv even opened the door.
Garv came in and said, "Sir, HODs are waiting for you."

Maan pulled himself together and came to his MSK mode. He went to wash room, straightened his clothes and combed his hair and left for the conference room. After two hours Maan returned to his office and Garv sent with MD's personal peon, Ramkhilawan a black coffee and some crackers. Soon after his coffee, Adi, Meera and a subdued Sasha entered the MD's cabin. After an hour the three came out. Adi and Meera were grim and Sasha was exceptionally quite as if she is a truant child given a thorough scolding by Principal of the school. As it was lunch time and Maan's food had arrived from home, Garv switched off his computer and left for the office cafeteria for his lunch. Rest of the day passed away without any major event with Maan being occupied by meeting and conferences for most of the day.

Maan had just finished with the last meeting of the day and was waiting for his lift to his office when he saw back of a girl in blue churidaar kurta waiting for the employees lift.



Although he was inquisitive about the identity of a girl alone after office hours but just then his elevator (Lift) arrived. He thought to ask the girl in front of the employee lift to accompany him but she had already left. He reached his cabin to still find his PA's cabin light on. Keeping his files in his cabin he entered his PA's cabin without knocking and was surprised to see Garv standing and arguing with the same young girl who was standing in front of the employees lift. "Mr. Handa". Hearing Maan's voice both Garv and the girl turned. The moment girl turned Maan's world stood still as he finally found his bride whom he was searching for so long. Seeing Maan staring at the girl, Garv decided to introduce Maan to her before he looses his job. "Sir, Sir, SiR, SIRRR!" Garv yelled to attract Maan's attention and he suceeded. "Sir this is my younger twin sister, Geetika Singh Handa. She usually picks me from KC so we both can go home together. I'm sorry, from tomorrow we will meet outside the KC premises." Maan outstretched his hand for a hand shake but Geetika politely folded her hands in namaste and bowed her head slightly signifying her greeting to Maan. Seeing Maan's confusion, Garv again spoke, "Sir Geetika is very shy and doesn't talk much." Garv still getting no response finally said, "Sir if you don't have any more work for today, can I leave for the day?" Breaking Maan's trance and he nodded yes.


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Edited by LM1991 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome cs and prologue loved it so very in teresting so yuvraj rejected princess neelakshi proposal coz he was in love with someone else but for his dadi he agreed but singhania didnt wanted the alliance so the swayamvar is happening for both the prince and princess till yuvraj seeing neelakshi called her hasini seems she is the princess he has been looking for
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Posted: 8 years ago
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love;y upadte maan comes to kc in full style garv for some reason hates maan coz he knows what maan is here maan is also affected by garv smell but try to ignore it garv is his pa and maan has to deal with him but maan isnt human i guess still confused as what maan is and why garv hates him maan seeing get gets lost in her and decided sh will be his ride garv introduces geet as his sister
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Such a different concept. Garv and maan are enemies eh and geet is the bride he is looking for but from how long waiting to understand more as the story proceed
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update
Maan and Geet met
Also Maan is lost in Geet
As he think he found his bride
Thanks for PM
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fab character sketch dear !

@prologue
Yuvraj returned back to his palace vowing to his grandmother health and agree to marry bride of his family's choice. He rejected princess Neelakshi as he was in love with someone else. Princess Neelakshi's family declined yuvraj's proposal after his little stunt and arranged for her swayamvara. Lookslike yuvraj's lady love is Princess Neelakshi @ Hasini herself
:))
Edited by anu5 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28
Interesting start
Geet is maan bride n what truth maan was talking about
Garv has come with hidden agenda
Eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@chapter 1
Interesting start dear
Liked it!!
Garv seems to dislike Maan and wanted to keep Geet away from him. Maan and Garv were effected by each others odour. Maan found his bride in Geet. Garv introduced Geet as his twin sister to Maan.
Confused with garv's gesture wasn't he the one who wanted to keep geet away from Maan!? And seems like Garv knows Maan before hand.
Thanks for the pm !
Will be waiting for the next update
:))
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what r they
mysterious creature
how can he be sure just by one glance she is d one

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