Manchala ,madness of heart part 12 and last on page 19 - 10 feb

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IMA9167

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Posted: 7 years ago

#81

Ok taking a guess maan family surely playing with maan...

Geet sister aur vicky ka roka hua..

Surely msk os dump to not recognize his feelings

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Posted: 7 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167
Ok taking a guess maan family surely playing with maan...
Geet sister aur vicky ka roka hua..
Surely msk os dump to not recognize his feelings

ye lo first itna achi comment

than galiya

than murder 🤢🤢

yaar mahi pe kuch reham karo ji 😆

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IMA9167

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Posted: 7 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Mahimaan

ye lo first itna achi comment

than galiya

than murder 🤢🤢

yaar mahi pe kuch reham karo ji 😆

Yeh toh aap geet vicky khi roke khi plan banane se pehle sochna tha...

Abh maaneet koh alag karne khi paap mein murder toh banthi hai na

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Mahimaan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167

Yeh toh aap geet vicky khi roke khi plan banane se pehle sochna tha...
Abh maaneet koh alag karne khi paap mein murder toh banthi hai na

to kya kare apka MSK is not intrested in marriage so what

will i do na

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ETRIKA

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Posted: 7 years ago

#85

Nice story...cont soon with the update

I think its all vicky plan to make maan realise what blunders aur mistakes he take in anger and both the families are supporting him...

Thanks for the pm

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Mahimaan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#86

part 7

Maan look to dadaji and nodded ..

Dadaji - ok now I am giving u another chance I like handa other girl for u it's her image ...dadiji show him one image a girl standing with geet ...maan eyes stuck on geet only ...maan feel like a Bomb fall on him ...

Dadaji - no hurry in ans Vicky ke eng after one month hai ...till than give me ans to hum apka roka Vicky ki eng main kar denge this time took decision ...wisely no hurry no any stunt .

Poor maan who almost turn blank nodded and come out from study room.

maan feel so blank and shock with turning event of his life his life is total mess now he is fighting with his own emotions one side family one side Vicky and one side his heart why his heart want to look that one face again and again why ...he once again look to image which is dadaji given to him .

he went t o garden side his fev place whenever he feel alone or happy he alwyes come to this side of KM ...its small garden with fountain ...maan seat on ground itself he is still in shewani he dont to feel to do anything ...silence of that place start to make cl

am maan in some manner he closed his eyes and ...seat there with open hand his hands rested on grass... its evening time and sun going to hide all atmosphere turn too heavy for maan like ..this sunset becoming uddas like his heart and mind ...

that photo is still in his hand ...he dont want to be away from that photo ...his brain accusing him that its wrong she is vicky would be wife ...and now big q of what he have ans for dadaji proposal what ...

few tear fall from his eyes whom he will share his heart he dont want to disturbed vicky who is starting new life . Than he dont want to hurt family also so ...Adi is good option but how many time he will nug him like this ...few tear escape from his time ,Few days before this tear should be alwayes sine of weakness for him but today this tear making his heart light ...

just then maan feel plam on his shoulder ...Maan know its vikcy they are twins and vikcy feel his sorrow ...maan chided with himself ...he disturbed vicky on his happiest day .

vicky seat beside maan and vicky gaze fall on maan plam which is holding a Image vicky took that photo to see and he stunt when he found its Image of geet and Meera Handa .

vicky - meera and geet ka image tumre pass kaise aaya maan ...vicky ask with tense he feel like he is going to heard something bad ...

maan open his eyes and give a look to vicky .Vicky get more tense with maan painful gaze from childhood Vicky never look MSK like this He first time looking so tense ,so helpless and lost person its not his bro msk ...

vicky ask with tense what ...

maan give a look ..

vikcy are u going to speak up or i use another way MR MAAN SINGH KHURANA do not show me attitude of mard ko dard nhai hota so speak up ...

dadaji want to marry me to that another Handa girl ...

what the hell ...are dadaji tun mad or what vicky reply within second ...

maan give him a angry glare like mind your word MR.vicky singh Khurana ...

sorry but what are dadaji doing ye koi gudiya ka khel hai ek gudiya pasand nahi aayi dusari pasand kar lo Come on both girl from same family .

maan feel good that vikcy himself start the topic ...

maan - how u know other girl name ...

vicky smile on maan q and say proudly ohh msk tilll now main to poore Handa Family ki history nikal chuka HU so don't ask me such q

she is meera Handa geet ki cousion sis ...Master in law ..abhi Uk se aayi hai age 25 fair and beautful ...down to earth ..usko italian khana bahot pasand hai. abhi yahi practise start karne wali hai ...

maan mouth open in O shape ...how much vicky know about her ... A qustion escape from maan mouth are u going to marry to Miss geet or this Miss ...whats her name

vicky say imm its meera .Meera Handa ...

maan ya ya meera Handa.

vikcy - Syaayad wahi hota MR msk if u don't do that stunt in front of Geet handa ...

maan turn serious with vicky word ...

other side in handa villa both girl giggling with enjoying ice-cream .

meera found geet lost in thought ...

meera --- say loudly JIJAJI ki yaad aa rahi hai kya ...next month eng main ki place pe shadi karva du kya dadu se bolke ...meera say in teaisng maaner .

geet roll her eyes ...and mummer stop it meera i am thinking about vicky he say smothing on that other day when his so called brother do that stunt but today i saw other side of his brother meera ..i am confused is he really that arrogant or soft hearted .

meera make serious face look gitu sabki personality main kuch plus point hote hai kuch minace point ...koi bhi insan sirf acha ya sirf bura nahi hota gitu ...may be wo insane us din wihtout any thought behave kar gaya ho gaya ...wiase to be frank main tumare place pe hoti to uska mhoo tod deti but jab main cool mind se souch thi hu to i feel like ye galati koi bhi kar sakta hai even we also when things get to preserised on us .

geet lesion meera talk and nodded ya may be u are right but now what shall we do ...uske hath se time to nikal gaya ...

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ok so last two or three upadte is pending

of this ss enjoy

Edited by Mahimaan - 7 years ago

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fariya20

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Posted: 7 years ago

#87

Sach mein Vicky is right how they think to marry maan with other girl who is geet cousin
And here Meera made geet understand every one can do what maan did
It's not his full fault
Yeh log karey gey Kiya

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Sowmiya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#88

Nice update di

Liked it!!

Maan was stunned and flabbergasted with his grandfather's words. He could bring thyself to acknowledge his grandfather's words and was in dilemma. Maan wanted to share is thoughts and dilemma to Vicky and Adi but alas he didn't want to act as spoilsport concerning Vicky's happiness and doesn't want to nag Adi with his thoughts. Vicky knew everything about Meera !! Maan was self loathing himself as he was having feelings for Geet , who was vicky's would be wife. Loved Meera's words for Geet and her understanding level. Will Maan agree to marry other Handa girl !?

Thanks for the pm!!

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Sowmiya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#89

Thanks for the note !!

Only two r three updates ??? Seriously !?

Looking forward to the next update

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Mahimaan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#90

part 8

geet lesion meera talk and nodded ya may be u are right but now what shall we do ...uske hath se time to nikal gaya hai.

meera nodded on geet ans ...than she change the topic ok gitu we have to go for shopping tom so we will get the time to look fitting and all what say ..

geet - she never enjoy shopping thats too with meera ,meera is crazy for shopping she alwyes be want perfect things uske chakr main poora mall bhi kam pad jata hai ..poor geet want remind any excuse so she skip from thia so called shopping ...

geet say meera kal bahot IMP mitting hai xyz company ke sath ..geet praying to babaji ..meera maan jaye but alhas ...meera also geet sis ...

meera - u cannot escape because JIJU also coming so u have too ..come with me else main darji ko bol dungi ...

geet bas karo emotional drama yaar i m coming bolo kab aana hai ...meera hug geet in happiness a and gitu u are best ok apne card bhi lena ..ye family wala 10 q ask karege ye ku liya and wo ku liya ..

geet - bas bas ...chalo niche chale hai now ..

in KM maan turn mute yes if he do not make that stunt ajj wo itna alone nahi hota .

vicky - bro i need one help maan get alert with vicky word bro ...

maan come out from his thoughts and narrow his eyes vicky no my ans is no

vicky sun to lo than u decide do u want to say yes or no ..please

maan make face and say bolo ...

vicky wo muje shoping jana hai ...maan look vicky with disbelives ...

maan stand from his place took pic from vicky hand and say gn MR vikcy muje kaam hai thoda and tooke fe step to go inside mention ...

vikcy joe drop to ground with maan reaction ..he know maan hate shoping but ...

but next vicky word make maan stand on his place ...

vikcy _ muje handa girl ke sath shoping mian jana hai maan haluted on his place itself but ..he cannot show his feeling like this now maan scaring with his own feeling he have to took control on himslef ..

maan - no vicky i don't have time ...

vicky - mummer lets see MSK u are coming m more than 100 % sure ...

night is tuogh for maan ...geet thought occupied maan mind ...he never feel so much attraction to any girl ...

next day geet finish her work till Lunch time now both girl ...going to mall where Vicky going to meet them .where they going to took lunch than shoping.

around one o'clock maan get called from dadaji

dadaji - maan do u have time ...

maan - one moment dadadji ...maan look to her lappy ...and reply not any imp what happen dadadji .

dadaji ok thats good yesterday i have ask u about handa girl so my opinion is u have to spend time with her so u get comfortable with them ..look its not force but its my advise it will help you further depend on u beta dadaji say softly .

now maan is in big dilima ...what to do kya krega wo in such circumstances ...its so hard to him to face geet ...

he took deep breath and ans dadadji i m going ...

dadadji - thats my son ok enjoy your time beta ...

maan - i will ..

so after half hour maan and vicky waiting for girls arrivel thou maan present going to shock for geet and meera ...

around 2 o'clcok both girl reach there both khurana is in causal attired which is they change in office and looking handsome ...meera eyes on both brother ...

maan presence make geet littel bit disturbed geet but she control herself she don't want to spoil meera and other mood ... all greeted to each other but meera is meera drolling on both brother ...maan start to feel uncomfortable

geet feel embressed with meera action ..she try to call her but meera is meera at last ...geet push elbow to meera side to brake her drollling section ...

poor meera cried ...and look to geet side with irritation but geet one angry glare and meera make pout and her face make giggle to maan ...all get stun with maan reaction vicky found his this open smile after so many days ...he feel happy

geet first time point out that maan have beautiful smile ...

maan luagh amke atmosphear light and meera took advantage ..

meera - kya geetu rab ne inte sone mude banaye hui hai to ye babaji insult karna hua na agar hum babaji ki banayi hui beautitful na na handsome cheez na dekhe ...ha

geet eyes winded in shock with meera bak bak upon that she called GITU in front of khurana brother ..

geet grited her teeth and called meera dont called me with that name eles shoping ka bhool javo geet threated her ...

poor meera make very sad face and mummer sorry ...di

next moment meera turn to brothers ...

we need proper introduction may u dont know about me speically Mr. MSK ...

maan give smirk to vicky ...vicky get tense for while like now what up to now maan ...

next maan make blank face and say ya ya i dont know about u miss Handa .

meera - meera give her plam to shake hand and say hello mr MSK i am Meera Handa ..

maan took meera hand for hand shake and mummer nice to meet u Miss meera handa .