Manchala ,madness of heart part 12 and last on page 19 - 10 feb - Page 10

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Posted: 7 years ago
#91
part 7 & 8 on page 14😉
Edited by priya_21 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#92
Nice update di
Liked it!!
Geet was trying to comprehend Meera's words and felt it's too late to discuss. Meera asks Geet to accompany her for shopping but was dreading to accompany her as Meera is shopaholic person !! A compulsive shopper unlike her. On other hand Vicky asks Maan out , even Maan doesn't want to join Vicky for shopping as Geet will also be present there and he won't be able to control his feelings for her. On dadaji's insistence and happiness Maan agrees to accompany Vicky. Meera was openly drooling over both the Khurana brothers embarrassing Geet to the core.
Thanks for updating!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#93
MAHIMAAN suniya zara humara ye kehna
first you make maan not ready for marriage
then VSK ne kya baat ki geet se asi
jo geet usse shaadi ke liye raazi ho gyi
maan ki baat krne gya tha na
khud ka taka bitha liya

second thing
when meera name come in vsk and msk
toh vsk ne kaha meera ka rishta usse hota
par wo baat beech me kaha gayab ho gyi

can you take little pain to clear this MU
MU means misunderstanding

jaldi reply de😡
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Posted: 7 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: priya_21

MAHIMAAN suniya zara humara ye kehna

first you make maan not ready for marriage
then VSK ne kya baat ki geet se asi
jo geet usse shaadi ke liye raazi ho gyi
maan ki baat krne gya tha na
khud ka taka bitha liya

second thing
when meera name come in vsk and msk
toh vsk ne kaha meera ka rishta usse hota
par wo baat beech me kaha gayab ho gyi

can you take little pain to clear this MU
MU means misunderstanding

jaldi reply de😡





my mouth is 🤬



last part main pad le 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: Mahimaan





my mouth is 🤬



last part main pad le 😉


gussa mt dila mujhe
chup chap bol

last part me kya
charo mile hi toh shi 😡
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Posted: 7 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: priya_21


gussa mt dila mujhe
chup chap bol

last part me kya
charo mile hi toh shi 😡



me updating last part of this story in hour tab pad le samjhi devil
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Posted: 7 years ago
#97
part 9


meera - meera give her plam to shake hand and say hello mr MSK i am Meera Handa ..
maan took meera hand for hand shake and mummer nice to meet u Miss meera handa. maan give his charming killing smile .



vicky look to maan with unbelived becuse he know maan alwyes hate firting and all but he is comfertable with meera which is not less than mirecal ,what hppening to msk .




geet feel like to kill meera with her own bare hand , why she firting so much with this MSK... she took deep breath ...just than vicky say softly don't be tense she is in safe hand ..



geet feel like she get cought she try to say nahi me only, wo meera littel bit childish ...
vicky cut geet and say she is innocent and its health flirting so ...be relax





geet nodded and follow maan and meera with vicky .



maan and meera entered in restro ...and vicky geet folllow them and for geet unbeilve before geet say anything meera seat beside maan .




geet and vicky settel in front of them ... really meera and maan get geled so nicely and that too so early ...




just than waiter ariivel there ...and maaneet reaply same time one pasta with extra cheeze ...maaneet look to each other ..with surprise both sharing same choice ...
vicky word brought back mg from thier staring ...





vicky miss meera hope so u dont like this blunder food vicky ask with Yuk face he hate this pasta and all...he love indian food full of spices ...




meera imm reply no Mr. VSK i love indian food its yummy ye fika khake kon apni testbud kharab karvyega ...no way




geet nodded in no with meera such cheeky comment ...




poor maan all lost in geet soft smile ...thnaks to his moible which brought him back ...just than maan gaze went to front side and maan face chnage into anger from softness ..geet taken back sudden changes in maan ...





geet try to follow maan gaze which change Msk face .. ..geet saw one girl in short dress have back to maan side .




vicky also saw maan change face ...vicky also turn tense when he saw the girl he fearing about maan reaction kahi valcano fat na jaye .




vikcy text maan




vicky - " r u ok " do u want to go another place





that brought maan back ...he read the massage and took deep breath ..like he trying to hold his anger which may burst any momnet his all happy moment runied by that girl ..




maan once look to vicky and nodded in yes like assuring him that he is fine don't worry .Maan somehow control himself but destiny is not with maan today and that girl come to thier table and before anyone get anything she pick maan cheek and say ...Hi maan how are u ...after long time we met ... Maan face turn red in anger his eyes draging fire ...for while meera and geet taken back ..





vicky try to hold damage and say in warning tone Mrs. Sameera ...nice to meet u...he say with fake smile ...




sam turn to vicky and say - wow so both brother on DATE ...GOOD Improvement maan ..she again try to touch maan cheek ...but maan dug that .





geet and meera get that the girl or women extremily cheep and she is almost forcing herself on MSK.



sam - oh maan u miss the chance exprience person give more you than unexprience person dont u think ...sam say this with gazing meera and geet ...sam again try to touch maan but her hand get hold in middel itself. And before anyone get anything that place get big sound of tight slap...




all froze on thier place itself ...



all looking in disbelive and poor sam holding her cheek which is turn now red because of slap .




dont u try to touch him when he is not intresed in U Mrs sameera or what is your name now out before u get another slap ...geet say in high voice Yes geet slap sam .





sam - brak in anger hey girl dont u know who am i ...how dare u to hit me ..u dont have rights so ...




geet - i am not intresed to know who are u ok and i am Geet handa MD Of Handa Indusrty ...and trust me i have more dare than this and third is we are enged ...so we all are family so no one harm MY FAMILY in any sense got it.




sam face lost its color ... she know about handa ...she took back step and went from there .



geet take her place she still firming with anger. meera push galss of water to geet side which geet finish in one go..




geet took deep breath and look to maan side who is all shock state ...




Geet pointed finger to maan and ask in hard tone dont u have guts to say Her NO ...how could u allow her to touch u like this waise to bahot stunt karne ki adat hai than ajj kya hua ...guts khatam ho gaye kya ...

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Posted: 7 years ago
#98
Maan aur geet ki engagement kb huyi😡
tune mujhe wo part ka link bhi nhi diya
dekha babaji ye mahimaan kitni big wali dust hai
.
waise i liked maan shocked face😆
and slap
haaye👏

khi geet roke ke baat toh nhi kr rhi


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Posted: 7 years ago
#99
thanks for updating!! why no pm????
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 7 - nice update, well written!!

Dadaji wants Maan to marry Meera! Maan confused! Maan reveals 2 Vicky after Vicky sees the pics! indeed Vicky know so much abt Geet! glad Geet is thinking abt Maan! she speaks 2 Meera! loved how Meera made Geet understand!

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