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Posted: 8 years ago
#61
POOR maan but he is in fault he have to think once before doing things like this any girl instead of geet will react same way , end of the day she have also self respect how can he introduce himself as vicky , what if same thing done by geet then, and what if geet only love maan's name not recognize him by his face , then she will marry with vicky
nice but family take nice decision
thanks for update and pm dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 5

Maan who somehow hold himself from last day at last he broke down in Adi hug ...with chocked voice maan mummer I lost my own family faith on me ...i feel so hurt with this roka and all, I am not happy with this arrival ye rista muje chub raha hai adi adi turn more confused with maan word he cannot calculated one on one ...

Adi caressed maan back he not stop him ...he wait to become normal of his emotions outburst.

Adi - thik se bolo kya hua maan ...adi ask softly and maan narrow all things from family bugging to geet meet to today function.

Adi took deep breath he is sad with maan situation but he know maan himself is responsible for such situation His so called anger put him in such situation .and may be He fall in love with Miss GEET in first meet itself , which his extra clever brain not accepting it .

Maan achiv so much in his little age his hard work is behind him. His success become some time enemy for him specially with women they always ready to throw on him.They only want the MSK billiniuam MSK but uske pitche jo sidha sadha Maan hai wo to MSK ke mask pitche hide hota gaya ...with experience of so selfish people jinko sirf msk ki money and power main interest tha . This all experience make him like this jo women ko ek hi view se dekhne laga he lost respect for women ku ki uski zindgi main koi Geet handa aai hi nahi thi ab tak. Chalo koi to takkar ka mila ...adi thought for while .

But what's wrong with this Vicky adi .. his teeth ...some time maan much better from this silent devil Vicky ...what's he up to. I don't believe that he will ready to marry that girl who reject Maan no way something is wrong ye calculation nahi bet raha (GST ke naam pe kuch alag hi tax ki calculation chal rahi hai ) he thought for while .iske ye silent khurapati dimag I have to talk with him...Vicky I am going to kill u ...he mummer.

Adi hug maan once again and mummer maan please clam down I get what u feel now but meri baat suno ek tarkie se ye acha hi hua na that family not informant u ..

Maan give confused look to adi

Adi - look u yourself say u are not happy with this roka and relation to agar ye tumko attend karna padta to ye kitna harrasement hota tumare sath maan..adi ask in clam tone ...maan he took maan palm in his palm and say humari family huamre khilap nahi huamre sath hi hai .They don't want to hurt u ya u feel awkward in front of handa family now think after your so much STUPID AND NOT FORGIVEABLE DEED .what u behave with Miss Handa and her family it's not acceptable maan agar tumari ghar ki beti ko koi aise prank ...but before...adi competed maan called adi ...he called in anger .

Adi that's the point ...Mr Msk ...it's so much hard to face dekho kitna ghusa aa raha hai ,now can u say miss Handa behave wrongly ? adi ask his qus to maan .Today adi want to show maan a mirror a fact that u cannot look all people with same view ya he get bad experience but he have to change his view about women...so many time he and Vicky try it but maan not lesion them wo bola jata hai jab tak khud face na kare admi hosiyar nahi hota.

Adi word put maan in deep thought ...Yes he is not ready for thought also how the decent girl accept such things ...yes she react natural jisko self respect hai he or she react in same way...

Maan face start to turn calm and adi get that he is in right track Msk pe uski kadvi dawai ka ashr ho raha hai ...

Maan ...caressed his own hair in frustration the pitcher get upto 70% clear still why he feel hurt with roka ..

Maan - I got your all point I know its my mistake ..i got punishment but ye roka why I feel bad muje dard ku ho raha hai adi...

Adi - adi thought the great Msk is so much duffer in his own heart ...feeling .adi took deep breath ...Maan in that u have to search yourself I cannot help u in that ...

Maan thank bro I feel better now I know family thought for my hurt but I have to think about their pride and respect main agar ceremony me nahi huga to bahot sare qus and tont mil jaayenge unko ...till now may be roka finish hone ka aaya hoga but I I will try it .

Adi give full smile on his talk first time he get what is imp of family and now he is ready to face hurt for his family adi hug him and say all the best ...

Tumara ek sharwani hai yaha pe change in that and javo ...maan nodded and change into white sherwani ...he looking as usual dashing and handsome ...maan almost run to car side he almost loose all weight from his heart ...he feel better now ...he reach to Km in less time .

As he say roka get finish because he saw Vicky on door on call he talking with someone . he is in shrwani in white sherwani ...tilak on forehead maan have to admit his bhai looking dashing.

Maan went to near him wait to his finish the call ...when Vicky finsh call maan tap on his shoulder and called softly cong Vicky and looking dashing in this ..haapy for u .

Vicky clutch the mobile tightly...almost hurting his finger Vicky very well know that maan is pain that's why in morning he ask dadadji to send maan in office .

Vicky turn to maan and before he say anything maan cut him ...shuuu I am ok Vicky main thik hu I want to share your happiness with OUR family please . ... A tear drops from both brother eyes ..they are twins and both emotions are same thou they are poll a part but both of them always be closed ..Vicky very well know the state of mind of his brother ...

Vicky mummer in soft and heavy tone bhai app ...hurt ho jaavoge ...maan cut him again and say I will ok Vicky .and I will not hurt anyone promise . Maan say like small kid.

Vicky nodded in yes ..and both entered in house ...to grasp so many gasp both looking dashing and handsome ...




Outside one person froze ...on place that person first time watching Msk ki such soft side ...which amazed that person .

Both family get tense with maan entry ...and maan get that with pin drop silence his eyes searching that face without his own knowledge ...he get in what extend he hurt the familys ...He took deep breath and went to stage side along with Vicky ...

I know I know all have ...terror of Msk but come-on I am not a Lion jo apko kha jaayega yaha pe main sirf maan hu ...who want to share his brother happiness...if all big person of both family giving me permission ...

Both family member froze on their place with maan avatar ... maan dadaji almost get tear in his eyes he know maan ...and how much hard to maan to take permission and all ...

Maan looking to dadaji and geet grand father with hope who are standing closed to each other .

Precap

Kya permission ya no permission wiase roka to ho gaya but kiska

Chalo chalo pehali hai bujo to janu .





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Kya dikhave pe mat javo apni akal lagavo

Edited by Mahimaan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63
Adi consoles Maan and also advices him what he did was wrong
and now Maan too realizes that he hurt both families
but he also feels he needs to be at the Roka for his families happiness
it actually was sad that he ask permission to be there to share in his brothers happiness
it seems that maybe Geet has seen Maan talking to Vicky at the door and she is surprised by his softer side

is the picture of Geet and Vicky or Geet and Maan
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64
Nice update di
Liked it!!
Maan beared his heart and feelings out. Adi could understand Maan's turmoil and knew Maan fell for Geet but wouldn't acknowledge it easily. He made Maan realise his mistake and Geet's reason to be angry on him. Adi showed him mirror which made him realise his fault and wanted to be part of his brother's happiness too. Guess it was Geet who witnessed Maan's softer side and was astonished. His family were shocked yet surprised to see Maan.
Nice precap !!
Does Geet have twin sister as well !? Who got engaged with Vicky.
Or it was Maaneet's Roka !?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thanks 4 da updating! amazing update! well written! Adi is a terrific friend! liked how he consoled Maan and made him understand Maan has fallen in love with Geet but has not realised it! Maan goes 2 the roka! he assures Vicky! Maan is controlling himself and Vicky knows! Geet see it? Maan asks permission 2 b attend the roka! Maan's dadaji understands Maan so well! update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mahimaan

Index

pro

part 1



part 2 on page 2


part 3 on page 5


part 4 on page 7


part 5 on page 9



mahi ji

part 1 - page 2 pe hai
aur part 2 -page 5 pe

madam part 3 aap beech me kha gyi hai
part 4 -page 7 pe
part 3 kaha gya😡

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Posted: 7 years ago
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part 6


I know I know all have ...terror of Msk but come-on I am not a Lion jo apko kha jaayega yaha pe main sirf maan hu ...who want to share his brother happiness...if all big person of both family giving me permission ...

Both family member froze on their place with maan avatar ... maan dadaji almost get tear in his eyes he know maan ...and how much hard to maan to take permission and all ...

Maan looking to dadaji and geet grandfather with hope who are standing closed to each other .

Maan dadaji talk something with geet darji ...darji nodded and maan dadji show thump to maan a bright smile appear on both brother face both hug each other in happiness all Handa get amazed and sweet shock with both brother bounding .

Just than prem, dev and anu marched to stage and they give group hug .. than prem pull maan aside and say something on that maan nodded in know prem make sad face but maan galre him .

Just than dev along with anu start to dance ...

Wah wah Ramji, jodi kya banaayi

Bhaiya aur bhabhi ko badhaai ho badhaai

Sab rasmon se badi hai jag mein dil se dil ki sagaai

Dev dance around Vicky make blush vishy first time prem wrishel on vciky reaction thou maan make perfect O shape face ohh poor boy looking Vicky like this frist time all giggle on maan reaction and pull him to dance ...and next moment maan jointed them they dance around Vicky making him more shy shy ...




dev



prem


Anu stand in front of her handa family which are gather in one place when all Khurana children start to dance . She pull two girls among them one is Geet ...other maan almost stop to watching geet who is in pink legha which adding her beauty ...just geet and that girl denied both once look to maan dadaji with respect ...when maan dadaji noded they stand before stage and start to sing and dance ...both girl giggle ...

Aap ki kripa se yeh shubh ghadi aayi

Jiji aur jija ko badhaai ho badhaai

Sab rasmon se badi hai jag mein dil se dil ki sagaai

Wah wah Ramji

Wah wah Ramji

Just than prem jump near handa girl and start to say ...to pointed to stage where maan and Vicky is standing ...

Mere bhaiya jo, chup baithe hai

Dekho bhabhi yeh kaise aithe hai

Aise bade hi bhale hain - 2

Maana thode manchale hain

Par aap ke siva kahin bhi na phisle hai

Prem make such face that all lugah of his act ...and Vicky run to catch prem ...

Just than one more girl from bride side come start to dance around geet and that other girl.

Dekho dekho khud pe jiji itraai

Other side Vicky hold prem but prem hug him and san

Bhaiya aur bhabhi ko badhaai ho badhaai

Sab rasmon se badi hai jag mein dil se dil ki sagaai

Wah wah Ramji Arre wah wah Ramji

Wah wah Ramji

Just than that third girl come to Vicky side and sang ...pointed to other two handa girl

Suno jijaji, aji aap ke liye

Meri jiji ne bade tap hai kiye

Mandiron mein kiye phere - 2

Pooja saanjh savere

Teen lok, tain tees devon ko yeh rahi ghere

Dev joined pram and sang ...

Jaisi maine maangi thi, vaisi bhabhi paayi

That third girl ...

Jiji aur jija ko badhaai ho badhaai

Sab rasmon se badi hai jag mein dil se dil ki sagaai

Wah wah Ramji

Maan feel like his eyes start to get fill with tears and Vicky sense imm his state he looked to maan and ask silently are he ok on that maan show his thump up ... Than he went to...outside he don't want to s how his sadness he stand there for while clean his tear . He got now fully what he almost snatch from family in his anger ..but he happy for Vicky ...he control his emotions but his eyes betaring him he caressed his forehead he feel thirsty also...just than someone push a water bottle in front of him and say softly drink this u feel better ...maan mummer thanks and took that water bottle . He drink some water and turn around to thanks again that girl ...but there is no one he get confused ...is it real or his illualation but water bottle in his hand than how could be not real ...he again look around he took step to inside but his leg stand fro while when he saw some shine things on floor he bend down and pick that in his hand its Earrings ...may be its should be same girl who give him water .

He entered in hall with mask his sorrow with his smile now all are gather for lunch . Its turn full of fun ..which make help maan to forget his sorrow pain for while .

Maan dadaji keenly looking to maan...each and every move ...he decide to talk with him ...after bid bye to all Handa family ...maan eyes searching geet in lunch but she is like vanish after dance and he don't want t o make its hard so cannot ask anyone but his heart want to one glisump of her ..

After dispatcher of handa family dadaji called maan in study .. maan went inside with little bit tense ...

Dadji - like your behavior in roka maan

Maan look to dadaji and nodded ..

Dadaji - ok now I am giving u another chance I like handa other girl for u it's her image ...dadiji show him one image a girl standing with geet ...maan eyes stuck on geet only ...maan feel like a Bomb fall on him ...

Dadaji - no hurry in ans Vicky ke eng after one month hai ...till than give me ans to hum apka roka Vicky ki eng main kar denge this time took decision ...viceily no hurry no any stunt .

Poor maan who almost turn blank ...nodded and come out from study room.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wonderful update dear, feeling bad for maan
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update di
Liked it!!
Maan's family members were happy seeing Maan participating in their happiness. The whole ambiance was filled with happiness, laugh and fun. Maan realised how wrong he was seeing his family's happiness and delightful self. He felt guilty for his act at the same time he was sad too. He wanted to catch one glimpse of Geet as his heart was beating for her. Maan's grandfather kept forth his wish to get Maan married to other Handa girl. Maan was flabbergasted with turn of events. Guess the other girl is Meera.
Thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice pics and song di.
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