Manchala ,madness of heart part 12 and last on page 19 - 10 feb - Page 12

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thanks for the note!! please update soon
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part 10 i think šŸ˜†






Geet pointed finger to maan and ask in hard tone dont u have guts to say Her NO ...how could u allow her to touch u like this waise to bahot stunt karne ki adat hai than ajj kya hua ...guts khatam ho gaye kya .. Ya fhir girls ka aise attention milna acha lagta hai ...

Geet last sentence spoil all things meera called out di ...stop it .

Maan face show emoitons of hurt he somehow make him clam and say excused him and went away from table ...

Meera glare to geet ...geet colsed her eyes yes in anger she say more than nesecaary ...vikcy caresed his forhead.

Vicky - wo girls se bahot dur rahata hai Miss geet handa ...he respect decent woment and hate such cheep women like sameera ...he never been this girl n all because he alwyes get treatmet LIKe MSK ...a milleniour business tykoon ...thoda isko saduce karo bas kaaam ho jaayega ye Msk ke pitche jo maan hai , no one want to see him ,know him wo kiasa hai ...uska anger roudness sobko dikhta hai But this roudness come because people like this so called sameera . that anger and arrogance is like protection to him.

Our society alwyes talk about women dignity abused and all but how many pepole think about male dignity aise koi hum par huari body per force karta hai to how will be we think ...we are man so humko sab tuch acha lagata hai kya...no miss geet its not like that ...sorry to say first I imress with u ...but your last some word ...hurt us . Yes its hurt maan as well as me also. U disoppinted me I am not expecting such word a mature girl like u ...with that vicky also went behind maan .

Geet now get what she done in anger she hurt him...

Meera come to geet and took plam in her plam and ask silentily what happen di u never reacted like this

Geet took deep breath and say don't know kya hua muje ..meera I don't know anger control hi nahi hua ...

Meera clam dowm geetu I think u should say sorry to him ...

Geet - yes I have to chalo ...both come out from restro and try to localate both brother there they found them last lonaliy corner of restro ..both girls approch to them . vicky saying something to maan but stop when he found both of girls .

Vikcy try to stop tham but geet say please ...vicky nodded and give way to maan

Vciky and meera stop little away from them and geet approched to maan ...

Geet - I am sorry mr khurana don't know in anger how could I say such things trsut me muje apko hurt nahi karna tha ...I am sorry ..maan who have back to geet feel like someone put mediicn on his injured heart .

Her word really hurt him...

Geet when don't get any repaly form him stand in front of him and hold her won both ear and say I am sorry please maff kijiye ...maan get amazed with her action she really looking like kid with holding her own ear .

Maan look around if people looking to them ..yes all looking to them only

Maan look to geet and say please miss handa all looking to us only

Geet reply firmily I don't care I want only your mafi ...forgivness ...

Maan careesed his own forhead he think till now he think he is most stunbound person but he is wrong ...

He raply ok ok I forgive u now please remove your hand ...

Geet - no u are takling luch with us than shoping no changes in plan to main haat hata leti hu...

Maan took deep breath and say yes miss handa I am ready now please remove your hand ...

A bright smile apper in geet smile and in exietment she hug maan and mummer thnaks thnaks . now I feel so light heart se burdden hat gaya .

Other side poor maan almost froze when geet hug him ...its his first proper hug to any girl he is never be closed so much to any girl ...his hand aching to take her more closed to his heart to hug her more tightly ... and his brain lost and heart win when he himself don't get he took geet in hug ...both standing there like two part of puzzel get attached each other ...its heavenly feel for maan. both hearts betting in same rytyem like they know each other from ages But geet is away from all this feeling she is happy that he forgive her .

Other side vciky and meera in world big shock what is happing front of them its like ...they saw any miricale ...

A t last vicky make sound and that brought maaneet back ...geet feel embressed now that how she hug maan and maan feel gulity that he hug Vicky would be wife .

Geet come and stand near meera ...

Maan casred his own hair ...

A awkaredness spread there ...

Meera erased that silence ...chalo abhi ye mafi amfi and alll ho gaya I feel so hungry yaar please eles muej hospital main bhari karna hoga shoping to hum kar lege but wo mediicn ki shoipng hogi please hurry up ...with that she took geet hand and start to walk to restro...

Geet who walking behind meera once look back and found maan only looking to her only his eyes saying something different but what she cannot get ...but kuch ho gaya us ek pal main lakin kya ...

Note

Yaar muje laga tha it will be finish in two three part

But its ...grwoing like Hunumaan Tale ...

Kya karu ,mahi u are dead ...


Edited by Mahimaan - 7 years ago
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bakiyo ka toh pata nho
maine jarur marna hai tujhe😔

waise update is cute and lovely šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Nice update di
Liked it!!
Geet in her haste and temperament hurt Maan with her words. Khurana brothers were stunned with Geet's choice of words. Maan left the place as he was hurt by Geet's accusions. Even Vicky was highly disappointed with Geet and deportment. Even Geet couldnt understand why she behaved so. Geet apologized to Maan for her deportment in cute way. Maan forgave her whilst leading to them to hug each other blissfully filled with warmth.Maan was feeling guilty for hugging Geet as she is Vicky's would be. Geet couldnt comprehend Maan's emotions for her.
Looking forward to the next update
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Waiting for next update !!
If possible update today next part di...
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part 11




Geet who walking behind meera once look back and found maan only looking to her only his eyes saying something different but what she cannot get ...but kuch ho gaya us ek pal main lakin kya ... she feel like his gaze reaching to her soul ...she feel like fear of something she imm look to other side .

Next half hour all four finish their eating but two souls are not in their self like something transparent in them . Maan totally avoided to look to geet and geet eyes start to stole glimpse of maan ...now geet start to think about hug ...her mind thoughts process stop on that hug itself what was that ...everything happening against her nature her anger on sam her taunting on maan ...her sorry and cherry on top that hug her brain again and again chided on her for her abnormal behavior .

After lunch all reach to bridle section they going to see first dress for bride for engagement ...so sherwani could be choose ... For mg its like punishment both souls not like shopping and all ...meera choose some desiner dress and showing to geet ...maan is little away seated on sofa ..

On one dress meera start to force geet for triel thou geet making fuss on it but meera almost push her in changing room ...

After few min ...geet come out from changing room meera gap her with open mouth vicky whistle on her entry and maan poor soul don't know when come to them and stand there with looking geet without blinking his eyes ..

Geet feel higly uncomfertable with all their reaction she get confused to how to react ...

Maan thought stuck in one thougt who adding who beauty without any makeup and all she looking breath taking ...how should be she look when she will ready for engagment .

When no one saying anything ...at last geet mummer I think I will change ...

That's brought back all from staring ...meera almost Jump di final ek ritual le liye to ye dress banta hai u are looking like like ...meera feel like lack of word just than all heard word "pari "

All gaze went to that person its maan a Pari word escape from his mouth ...

He feel so fustrted with imself what he doing ...how could he say such word he open his mouth for aposlogy but ...

Geet say ...thanks

Meera and vicky like they become mad definitly because their sibiling acting almost opsite to their nature .

Maan make excuse of phone and geet make excuse of change ...

Geet select same dress now all went to shewani section and maan heart brake in pices when all start to chose shrwani for vicky Yes its fuction of geet and vicky in his thought he forget this though ...he feel like someone stab him in his heart ... at last when its start to unberable he make excuse of sudden work of office and went from there he apolised for sudden deparcher ..

Meera - oh so sad u have sudden work koi na we will meet in between abhi to bhot sari shoping hai what say ...maan nodded on meera talk and went from there he reach to exit of shop and once he turn around ...his brain stoping him but alas ...

And there he watch geet watching to him only don't know why but he feel like he saw some sadness or disoppintment on her face ,but why so ...just tham meera pull geet and maan turn to leave from there ...

He directily went to adi house he need adi now eles he don't know how could he handle this hurt and pain ...

Other side adi is like waiitng for maan because maan fev coffee is already waiitng for maan ...which amuzed maan but he toook that and enjoy it with slow step

Maan called in house that he stying today with adi ...so no one wait for him he informed dadu that he went with handa girl ...

Other side vicky also called adi that around 9 o clock he also coming to adi house for over night with prem and dev.

Adi slowly say it to maan is it he ok with this maan nodded ... next hour maan say all to adi each and every thing from roka to till now .

Adi - so great MSK in love with right girl but in wrong time.

A land escape from maan feet LOVE what he is in love ...

Adi smile on maan so shocked face and come near him ...

And say maan yes Love but u have to control your emotions beuase now time escape from his hand ...and he have to think about vicky and other family ...

Few tear escape from maan eyes adi took maan in hug to make him calm...

Maan mummer mera pehal pyaar adhoor reh gaya adi ...


Edited by Mahimaan - 7 years ago
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Thank you for updating next part di
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Fantastic update dear, maaneet hugs each other , so sweet
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Awesome emotional update, feeling bad for maan
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Lovely update di
Liked it!!
Geet could feel myriad of emotions in Maan's eye and gesture. Maan and Geet were trying to avoid each other and were stealing glances after what transpired between them. The trio were awestruck seeing Geet in bridal attire whilst Maan was lost in Geet's beauty and in flow called her Pari too. Maan was broken when he realised the fact that it was Vicky with whom Geet was getting engaged too. He left the place as he was hurt and dejected. Seems like Geet was missing Maan's presence as well and was disappointed. Maan feels that he lost his first love before he could confess his love for her.
Thanks for the pm
Looking forward to the next update
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