Mortal Promises!#T2!UPDATED CH35@pg141*Now[Note at page 148]28 oct

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Roopa_1

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Posted: 7 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: Iptida

tum bhi? nahi pleathhh
aitha maat kalo mele sathhh main bohot innocent nah=nhi si bacchi hoon. Don't listen to roopa. huh. she is the devil
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waise tumhare comments se mujhe heart attack aani thi... Don't stop reading na...How will the story progress yaar? 😭

Haa agar tumne kuch galat kiya tho i will stop reading aur tumne mujhe devil bhi kaha devils aisa hi karthe hain 😈

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#272

intriguing teaser! hope Maan speaks 2 Geet instead of assuming things! wonder what u have planned!!

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dazzlingnikki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#273

Thanq for the pm🤗..

Hope kuch galat na ho .. bahut bada jatka diya hain aapne !!.

Well jaldi teek karo sab kuch 🤔

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: Khushibloom
Nice precap
Waise maan gussa kyun nahi kar raha 😲 ?
Fir toh uske andar hi pileup hota jayega
Aur bada dhamaka hoga

Nahi bataungi,,, meko devil bulaya hain tum sabna 😡

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: solaceMG
Confusing precap
Why Do I have a feeling there is something more plotting inside your devilish mind?

Nahiii... aab tum bhi?🥺

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
intriguing teaser! hope Maan speaks 2 Geet instead of assuming things! wonder what u have planned!!

I have already replied you this, I am trying to keep things as natural as per their characters go! Now how justified that is, we shall know once the update is out. Thanks for the comment sweetheart. 😃

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#277

Originally posted by: priyankadwivedi
Sad part... That witch sameera.. she doesnt love maan she is just obsessed otherwise she would have been happy in his happiness... Without knowing truth she is pointing on geet character n this idiot dev... I think he will turn black too... He too doesnt love nt... Poor maaneet.. hope their love is more strong then this witch obsession...

Sameera- It's not easy to be at her place dear. Let's see what she does.

Maaneet- Let's see how strong their bond is.😉😃

Thanks a lot for your awesome comment.

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#278

Originally posted by: parini
Nice update
Want to see maan reaction
Egarly waiting

Thanks a lot sweety.
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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#279

Originally posted by: anu5
Interesting update dear !
Loved it!! Well penned
Sameera's wretchedness and despair is well protrayed. Sameera was broken to witness Maan and geet's closeness. Sameera tried make thyself strong but was shattered and broken with the truth but all her vexation and wrath is directed towards Geet as she feels that Geet is playing with the feelings of both the Khurana brothers. Not her fault she judged Geet on what she saw and the time & situation played it's role by fueling up Sameera's illusion. She know feels hatred for Geet. Maan was burning in rage witnessing Geet and dev's closeness and was in dilemma to trust Geet. On top of it geet lied to Maan about her being at home. Hope Dev doesn't fall for Geet and complicate Maaneet's lovestory.
Hope Maaneet with stand destiny's game and trust each other to overcome all the hurdles of their life to emerge as winner. And with time their love emerges more stronger.
Thanks for the pm !
Looking forward to the next update
:))

Hello dear,

Excellent synopsis yet again by you. 😃
Maan- more than burning in rage he was feeling jealous and confused. Burning is rage comes when you are already confirmed about something, he knows his Geet from the childhood hence he is super confused and that's not a very good combination for Maan. Let's see what he does.

Glad that you liked the way it's been written.

Thanks a lot for your superb comment dear. 🤗