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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: preyasekar

WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW

VERY LOVELY UPDATE


LOVELY REACTION BETWEEN HIS WIFE AND SISTER

WAITING FOR HIS DAD AND FRIEND RECATION NOW

AND HIS NEXT MOVE AGAINST SHIV😆

u'll see their reaction in nxt update
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Rpian

glad u like it

But changing MSK is not as easy as u think😛


Thanks for clarification.
I really thought he is changing owing to his concern and caring demeanor towards kavya and also towards Geet. Guess he still thinks his care and gestures towards them has his responsibility.
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Thanks for clarification.
I really thought he is changing owing to his concern and caring demeanor towards kavya and also towards Geet. Guess he still thinks his care and gestures towards them has his responsibility.

u see he always complete his responsibilities . But he is a tough nut to crack . He take time 😛
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Chapter 40




Few more hours passed and no one ready to sleep all were present in hall kavya , geet & meera yash & vikram .

Maan was silant observer of all this . It's like they are celebrating some function . Unable to understand how does it matter so much ? Why they are so haapy ? Just because they know now he able to walk ?
He saw tears in eyes of his dad . What was the need of rushing here? They were going to retur in few days .

But seeing their happiness he keep mum. But inside a strom taking place . He suddenly feel so confuse .

How could they be so happy ? Just because he able to walk?
He rember clearly he too was not much haapy . Happy he was not even reacted . Why it matter to them so much .

Others are too happy to look at his lost form.
Maan take a deep breath calming his nervous down and with in seconds he regained his composure .

Does he need to feel something? But no even if he want he can't feel happines . So he just paste a fake smile only for them who was there for him.


...

Finally all call it a night as maan told kavya to sleep as it is not good for her health . Yash & vikram too went to their respective rooms as they were tired due to long journey.

Now geet was checking everything before going to sleep .

M- geet come . U know you are weak , u too take rest .

Geet look at him before hugging his frame once again .
G- thank you maaan
For coming in my life . I LOVE U .

He signed taking a deep breath . Howw does it feel to be loved or happy ? He was confused . But knowing she not gonna listen him in this matter he stopped himself.

What if he can't feel happiness he let her be happy if it make her .


...


Maan & geet both rest themself on bed on their respective sides and before even she lay . Maan forwaded her medicines toward him.

She took them silantly . His love casting a spell on her.

Strange isn't it?

That person who didn't even know how to feel happy himself never let any sadness take over his family . How he take care of them still so far to even realize that how it actually feel to be cared . The maan died on the day itself when his mother try to kill him just for a stranger calling him with bad names . CALLING HIM UNWANTED .

How could he forgot the months he spend on roads just to get food for one time for his survival . The fight he did for months to save himself & yash . The day when he lost his legs . The moment he felt helpless .
But struggle never end after that day . He never let come near him after that . Maan died and born MSK .


Kaise samjovge use jise samaj hi na ho khushi kya h?
Kaise samjovge use ki pyaar kya h?
Uske toh dil hi dhadakna band ho gya tha
Logo ko ummed phir bhi uske pyaar ki thi..


Geet rest her head on his chest coming close to him and slept . But maan sleep was far away from his eyes .. his hands embarace her in his arms . But he was blank
Maan his thoughts drifted to it's past whe she enter in his life

He was angry as he feel she was there due to sympathy . But then she open pages of her life in front of him..
Making him drift back to his past. He gave her a chance that day but the major reason was not vikram .
He want to know how could she love her sister so much to spoil her whole life? She passed through a same phase as him not as brtual as his . But somewhere her condition remind him of his past .


He tried to understand tried very hard but failed misrebly each time . He try to laugh from his heart . But strangely he don't know how to replace his fake laugh .

The only emotion he feel ever was just pain & strangely it was the only thread bounding him with her. .
Then came kavya in his life as a sister . His heart goes out looking at her condition . He know how it feel to be close to death . Usne usee itne karreb se dekha h ki ab toh isse daar lagna bhi band ho gya..

But looking at them today he want to be happy even if was for just once . JUST FOR A SECOND IF IT IS POSSIBLE . But again he was blank .


He comes out of his thoughts as he feel her coming close to him in her sleep if it was possible.

When a strange thought pass through his mind . Will she able to help him? Just for once?
He want to feel emotions other than sadness , pain & anger ..

...

In morning


Whole night pass like that and he didn't even blink his eyes.

When geet open her eyes in morning she found him looking lost .
G- gud morning maan

He come out of his thoughts
He just nodded in return
Geet frowned
G- aap thik h na?

He just nodded and was about to get up when she held his hand stopping him

G- kya baat h maan?

Maan look at her and thought a ques won't harm ? Is it?

M-ek baat bataogi?
Geet nodded in yes

M- HOW DOES IT FEEL TO BE HAPPY?

Causing geet to look at him with wide eyes

...

Hush

The chapter was from maan point of view as many of u want to know him .

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