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Posted: 7 years ago
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Next update after 25 likes & 10 comments.

Thanks to all who liked & commented on previous one ..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter 6


One more failed attempt maan take a deep breath trying to calm his nervous . He hate being dependent . He hate it and hate everything that make him remind that he can't walk!!
It's around 11 in night and he was highly dissapointed with the turn of events.

Geet was standing outside . She was hesitant to go inside knowing that her mere presence going to irritate him.
and nakul already bcom his prey sometime before so she know he is already in bad mood.

Looking upward she murmer

G- babaji kha psa diya aapne apni bachi ko ?
Thoda toh kadus ko shanti di hoti !! Par nahi, aapko toh meri vo halat krdi aasman s tpke khajur m aatke .

Patting her back she wisper

G- koi nhi geet puttar chal but ready hoja sher k shikar hone k lie !!
Pointing a fingure toward her babaji she said .

G- main bta rhi hu aapko babaji iss bar main nhi sunne vali inki khari khoti ..

Vikram who was passing from there look toward her and ask

V- geet beta
Causing geet to come out from her murmuring season
G- j ji
V- aap thik hain n??
She look down embarased by the fact that she caught like that

Looking toward her condition vikram say
V- beta i know it's difficult to cope up with my son . But u don't take tension , just give him sometime.

Saying so not wanting to make her more embarace he left to his room.

Geet murmer tu bhi ek number ki jhalli h . Kisi na kisi din koi tujhe pagal declare kr dega geet .

Saying so she enter inside room where maan was as usual in bad mood .
She immidatly take her dress and went to washroom to change and after that she whisper bacha lena babaji . Saying so she closed her eyes and lay on another side of bed.

Maan who till now getting irritated was now angry at her to lie beside him on bed .

M- get up from here and leave
He shout
G- le ho gya syapa
M- what u say?
G- m main
Vo
M- get up and leave from heree he say while greeting his teeth
G- nhi jaungi
He caught her and pull toward himself
M- kya kha tumne?
G- nhi . I'm not going anywhere
She say gathering all her courage to answer back .
Gulping her saliva she further added
G- if u have any problem then call papaji and say him
He look toward her with wide eyes
M- u are trying to blackmail me?
G- nhi .
But u marry me willing or not now u need to share this room with me , and if u have any problem then talk to papaji and if u want to go in any other room u are free to go...

She repied back but only she know how much she was shivering from inside ..

His mouth open wide causing his grip to lose that give her a chance to free herself and she lay on bed ...
G- plz switch off lights mujhe bahut neend aa rhi h .

Saying so she immidatly cover herself with sheet and he was just looking at her with open mouth
M- y samajhti kya h khudko?
She say me MSK TO LEAVE HIS ROOM . Bahut shauk h na pati patni khelne k kaal batata hu ise main...
Saying so he lie down on other side with his back facing her ...

and after some time both drift in deep slumber...
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Nxt update only if i get 25 likes and 10 comments and it only depend on responce:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43
It good
Lol I long back declare Geet paagal 😆she is surely paagaloon ki sardar🤣

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Posted: 7 years ago
#44
very nice update
geet is fearing maan but decide to face him bravely
maan get shock by her answer when he order her leave his room
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Plz leave 1/2 words
If it's not intresting then do inform
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Posted: 7 years ago
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thanks 4 da superb update, well written! Geet scared bt takes on Maan! loved hw she answred him! Maan miffed! she ignores him
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Posted: 7 years ago
#47
Nice part.. Geet give him peace of mind!! Let see what he going to do with her.. she blackmailing for his dad..
Geet not see dadi.,
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Posted: 7 years ago
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YASSS you go girl tell him whose boss! Oh dont worry Maan your wife isnt playing she for real your patni lol I cant wait for the morning :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Condition still not fulfilled
Needed 2 more cmnts for nxt update:)

Sry for blackmailing
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ha ha ha
Nice concept
Maan on wheel chair

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