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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 13

Geet finds it difficult to forgive Vikram but he is the one that gave her a family if Geet can't forgive him then why would she want to stay in the marriage
yes its true KC as Maan said does take care of medical expediture of employees but Vikram also told Geet that he chose her because she would be the one that makes every relationship important
wow what a great chance no anger in Maan and he spoke with such understanding too
and now wanting his wife to take out his clothes thats an amazing start indeed
but I do hope Geet forgives Vikram soon the Khurana family needs care and warmth and with Daadima in a coma Geet is the one that can give care and warmth to both Vikram and Maan
waiting now for Yash's arrival
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome. at least they decided to give chance to marriage.
Edited by Nav2010 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi all sorry for delay
(if anyone waiting) . I was stuck and written only half update with no mannet scene . So needed to add it but again stuck ( lol) .so hopefully will come with update tomorrow .

Thanks for all likes & comments

Sry i can't rply all individually but always read comments and try to rply all those that have any query .
Ok
Gud night all
Edited by Rpian - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for note
Will be waiting for the update
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 14


Around 7 pm

Maan was in office since morning busy in meeting. He was just back when vikram entered in his cabin.

V- maan i want to talk beta
M- no dad i don't want to talk on this matter . Things u did was absolutely wrong .
V- maan mera irada vo nhi tha but
M- but what dad? NOBODY CAN GUESS THE COST OF A LIFE .
Aap samajte kyun nhi
V- if that so then why don't u think twice before killing
M- BECAUSE THAT SOMEONE TRY TO HARM MY FAMILY INTENTIONALY and for ur kind information that i haven't kill a single soul who was innocent.

V- i know i'm sorry maan but maine bhi y tumhare lie hi toh kiya na

M- do u even try to understand seriousness of situation dad?
Apko nhi lagta aapne bhi kuch vaisa hi sauda kia mere lie jaise meri maa ne kia tha sallo phle .JISKI VAJAH S MAIN ISS HALAT MAIN HU? NHI DAD ?

Aapko patah h hevaniyat ko bahut karib s dekha h maine . I know but u know further delay can worst her condition maan say as he come to know about kavya being admitted in her last stage all thanks to the deal.

Bending to maan level vikram say
V- i'm so sorry maan . I promise to never do such mistakes . I promise plz forgive me and kavya is better now !
Finally maan hug his dad knowing he never want to harm someone innocent it's just destiny that put all of them in fix .
Maan have an heated argument woth his dad after adi come with kavya details . Mentioning the delay of around a month all thanks to marrige deal it can lead her to death that was totally opposite to Maan's rule.
It's not that he was showing sympathy he even do that for any other person knowing the cost of life very well .
He hate relations that bound him put restrictions but at the same time know how easy it is to snatch innocence . Kyun nhi ushe khud dekha h, mahsoos kiya h, usse jiya h!

V- i am so sorry beta
When they hear his cabin door open .

Maan was about to shout to enter without permission but seeing yash he stop in middle

Y- Ooo scene of the decade . Vikram khurana apolozing to his son?
Dad seems u did something disastrous this time?

Yash who enter side say after seeing them.
Causing them to part away and then after taking vikram blessing yash hug maan and say

Y- i missed u so much and now i'm staying here . For a year no futher trips
M- missed u too

Parting away yash asked
Y- Dad what u did?
V- nothing son just trapped my son to marry
Earning a glare from maan
Yash looked at them shocked
Y- aapne mujhe kyun nhi bataya? Aur maan ki shaddi kra di?
V- sorry son it happen with in two days and meera dad was not well so it's not good for u to leave her alone .
Y- I'M SORRY BUT NOW I'M TOO Not gonna forgive u !! I know aapne maan ko bhi time nhi diya hoga . So i'm on his side
He say with finality in his voice

V- hey bhagwan 2 musibat km thi ab thisri bhi?
Do toh maan nhi rhe the ab y bhi?
Vikram murmer

Y- aapne kuch kha?
V- huh nhi meri itni himmat kha
M- now enough both of u .
Stop drama u both . Office time finished so i think we need to move . Dad aap yash ki car main aa rhe hain . I want to discuss something with yash .

Vikram nodded and left

Y- kya baat h maan?
M- nothing just i want u to handle this case forwading kavya file toward him .
Yash look at him to explain then maan explain him whole scene from start to end

Yash take a deep breath and say
Y- don't worry i'll handle it and will arrage a best team for her .
M- i don't want her to lose her life due to dad
Y- aisa kuch nhi hoga maan i promise . I'll talk with meera about her case . She can help in this and will say her to move kavya to her house . Her dad being a big surgon surely help us better.

M- do whatever u want yash i trust u .
Y- i know , but will u give her a chance now?
M- hmm, i promised yash so will not back out but just one chance .
Y- chal ab ghar chale ? Tu mujhe bhabhi s bhi toh milvayega?
He nodded and both left to house .
...

Km


Just few minutes later after vikram maan and yash enter .
Nakul inform geet about maan calling her
As geet come vikram say
V- geet meet my other son yash .

Yash greet her and she replied back feeling uncomfortable being in other male presence . As vikram was always a father figure for her and maan her husband but other then them she always feel scared in presence of a male .
Yash & maan both notice it . When maan say
M- i'll be back in few minutes yash & dad u both also fresh up .

Both nodded and left

M- geet
G- j ji
M- come with me
She nodded and follow him.


In mannet room

Maan forward a packet & say
M- keep it u are going to need it
G- but what is this?
M- u don't have phone i thought u want to talk with ur sister

She look at him unbelievingly unable to formulate words

G- k kavya?
He nodded
M- u wanna talk?
she immidatly nodded in yes wiping her tears unable to handle sudden hapiness
Maan dial a number and forward phone to her
She take phone with shivring hands unable to beleive her luck . She never ever though that she get that muchh lucky to talk to her sister that early even vikram never think about it .

...
Ok tried my best . I don't expect it to complete today itself so even left a note sometime before but finally i able to complete it:)

Nxt update after 38 likes & 15 comments .
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Posted: 7 years ago
Maan is angry with his father as Kavya's life could be in danger and Vikram apologizes for his mistake
now that Yash have arrived Maan gives the file to Yash so can handle Kavya's treatment and Yash suggest that they can move her to Meera's house which Maan agrees as he trust Yash
Maan also tells Yash the truth about his marriage to Geet and Yash ask him will he give a chance which Maan says just one chance
Maan gifts Geet a phone and tells her she can talk to her sister and I'm sure the emotions that she goes through as talking to Kavya after a long time
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb update, maan understand how geet is feeling, now yash and meera going to handle kavya is case
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Posted: 7 years ago
Curious abt his past
how is yash related to him

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Posted: 7 years ago
That was wonderful! Maan is trying to understand his dads ways were wrong but he didnt mean harm. Yash will be great for Kavyas treatment :) Hopefully Geet will open up more to other members of the family!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update... Maan got to know about kavya.. what he was talking about deal.. did his mother made his deal or something... Maan n his father conversation was nice.. it shows how sensitive he is for innocent ones...

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