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Posted: 7 years ago
intriguing
both r bonded in a relationship by force
but Geet is at least trying
Maan is too conscious abt his leg thats y he is not able to cure them yet
what abt geet's sis she has no contact with her
who is aft Maan
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update dear
Liked it!!
Vikram asked maan to give a chance to his wife and also revealed that he forced even geet into marriage. Maan agreed to give chance to his marriage vowing to his father's gloomy state. What does his father meant by his words!? Maan was reminiscing his dark past with Yash.
Thanks for the update dear !
Will be waiting for the next update
:))
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update
Dadi in KM now... Maan has taken care of the culprits
Vikram asked Maan to give a chance to his married life he also said that hr forced geet
Maan n yash where attacked by goons... Want to know about maan's past
Eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
Two new charachers

Yash khurana - Adopted son of vikram khurana . Vikram abopt yash for maan . Same age as maan . Yash love maan a way too much he can give or take anyones life for maan . He was an orpan when he meet him but get a family bcoz of him . Same case for maan . Maan treat him as his brother. After his dad if anyone make him do anything then it is yash .


Meera - yash soon to be better half . Yash engaged with her after maan agreed ( u will come to know how in future . )
She was scared of maan's anger but call him veerji . She know maan nature well by now . So understand his anger . She live in london with her family .


Next chapter- below 😊
Edited by Rpian - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Chapter 12

At night

Maan & geet both decided that they will atleast give it a try . Both have different reasons but still they need to.

Maan was in his room for once looking outside , thinking turning events of his life. All the happening around him taking a toll on him making him forced to dwell in his past but as he promised his dad he will atleast give her a chance.

Lost in his thought he failed to notice when geet enter in room .


Geet after checking dadi at last enter in their room . She know she need to talk for once need to tell him all about himself . But will he listen?
lost in her thought when she enter in room she look at him sitting beside window looking as lost as she was . She gulped her saliva and scared too . Actually looking at him in action whole day she came to know about him that how much power he hold on other . Not once in her wildest dream she though that he hold that much power .

But now deed is done ! Shaadi ho gyi to ab sambalna toh padega hi na!

Nervously she faked cough to gain his attantion but of no use .


Then she do it once more in loud voice causing him to jerk out of his thoughts.

Maan looked back toward her where she was nervously playing with the end of her duppata.


Maan clear his throught not knowing how to initiate .

After 5 minute of silance when both of them said nothing . Maan say

M- it's late i think we need to go to sleep .

G- haan !
Mera mathlab nhi

She then closed her eyes gaining composure . Taking deep breath continue
G- i i want to say something.

Maan look toward her then nodded in yes
G- vo voh
M- will u continue?
G- bol rhi hu na rukhiye
She answer back immidatly then closed her mouth
Feeling offended maan say
M- gud night
G- rukiya ! I i'm sorry
She say finally causing him to stop.

G- v vo us din k lie ! I haven't delibrately done that .
Mujhe nhi pta tha apki important meeting hain .
M- hmmm

Geet look toward him frowing sirf hmmm? Sirf hmmn babaji?
She think looking upward

Maan follow her gaze thinking is she mad?

M- tumhe aur kuch kaihna h?

G- nhi
Mera mathlab haan !
G- dekhiye ! I want to tell u something matlab about myself .
I know u was forced in this relation . So was i !
Main y shadi nhi karma chajti thi?

Maan look at her frowned feeling offended. Then ask
M- bcoz i am unable to move ? and u don't want to babysit a man like me throughtout your life !
If that so then i want to know ur reason of marrige !
WAIT

IS IT MONEY? U MARRY BE BECAUSE OF MONEY ISN'T IT?
He shouted scaring the hell out of the poor soul.

Geet jump at his tone getting scared
G- aap meri baat suniye plz

M- KYA SUNU MAIN?
As he was about to leave in anger before he do something disatrous to her . When he hear her continuing in a single breath causing him to stop in his tracks

G- meri behan maar jati agar main aisa nhi kartu toh

She say with tears in her eyes .
Seeing him stop she continue

G- i am an orpan and i have none except my sister kavya.

She look at him but he show no emotions still she continue

G- hamesha se aisa nhi tha . We were not very rich but happy in our small world . When kavya was born i get a partner . But one evening we both lost everything .

Main kavya k sath thi aur maa kitchen main thi jb papaji k kisi friend ki call aai ki unka accident ho gya .

Maa immidatly run to hospital leaving both of us at home . Phir mujhe nhi pta main bahut darr gyi thi . Phir chachiji aai aur kaha ki maa - papaji dono nhi h !

Vo vha s hume l gye . Kuch din tk sb thik tha main jb 14 saal ki thi aur kavya 5 tb ek din chachaji na hume ghar s bahar nikal dia y kehkr ki ab unhe hamari zarurat nhi.
I pleaded them but no use they just changed within second . I cried begged but none of them helped us .


Maan's whole concentration was on her reminding him of his past who know better then him when u have none to support. He live in that hell for more than 5 months.

When he hear her further

G- 2 days passed like that . We were hungry . Kavya she was crying continiously . Hamare pass paise bhi nhi the aur kavya ko bahut tej bukhar ho gya tha .
I was scared mere pass uske alava kuch nhi tha !
Main use nhi kho skti thi . One more day passed and her fever was increasing and then she fainted . Main bahut dar gyi thi . I begged almost everyone but none helped us some gave us pleading look but none helped but a anuty come foreward . She helped me and kavya she was a social worker. She took us in an orpanage and admitted kavya .

Once more we start our life their but it won't last long .
As we come to know she was suffering from cancer .

Main kc main papaji ki secratary ki job kr rhi thi . I joined just 3 month before .

Mere pass itne paise nhi the . But i can't even leave her to die . Then papaji come with this offer. I can't refuse it .

I agree i'm at fault. But main sirf kavya ko bachana chahti thi .

Dekhiye i agree maine y shaadi majburi main ki but i'll give it a fair chance i promise .
She say while sobbing .
Maan take a deep breath and leave from their without saying anything. He need sometime to consume this information . He will give her a fair chance but it's not easy at all.

Geet lay on bed while sobbing .

Some time later maan came back and lay on another side .
With a change him facing her . He can see traces of tears .

Sometime later he too fell asleep.
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Edited by Rpian - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Emotional update very well written she told him everything she is an orphan and did it for her sister 's treatment hope he understand him and now both are ready to give a fair chance to their relation one for his father's sake and other as for her relation is treasure
Superb
Please update soon
And thank you for Pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update dear
Loved it!!
Maaneet wanted to give chance to each other. Geet took intiative to mend things between their relationship. Geet cleared her side of story which offended Maan without knowing full truth abt her he accused her but glad that she said her part of story and abt her devastated past.
Looking forward to maan's prespective regarding Geet's life and truth .
Thanks for the pm dear !
:))
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice character sketch dear
Looking forward to Yash and meera's entry in maaneet's life
:))
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update..
Geet narrated her past to Maan..
Waiting for next update..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Poor geet


Nice update


Thank you

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