A Perfect Mismatch/PT 20/21/22/23-pg85/86/88/90- 24 nov

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@_CrystalFlames_

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Nice start...
Loving the prologue...
Dev Maan k liye positive h ya nahi?
And who is this Alia?
KB ka negative character yaha bhi aa gaya kya?

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: _CrystalFlames_
Nice start...
Loving the prologue...
Dev Maan k liye positive h ya nahi?
And who is this Alia?
KB ka negative character yaha bhi aa gaya kya?

CS not explaining kaun negative hai

kaun positive

just wait 😉

geet ki entry hone do

kahani toh tb shuru hongi madam

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swapna.p

@swapna.p

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Congrats for new story..

Nice concept and cs..

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: swapna.p
Congrats for new story..
Nice concept and cs..

thnks dear 😃

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maansee

@maansee

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Hi p

Lovely concept ...

Maan is only 10 pass n dev studies in london ... Ye step ma ka sacha pyaar nai hai shyad maan ke liye

Dadi bed ridden ...

Geet family ka intro do

Waiting

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: maansee
Hi p
Lovely concept ...

Maan is only 10 pass n dev studies in london ... Ye step ma ka sacha pyaar nai hai shyad maan ke liye

Dadi bed ridden ...

Geet family ka intro do

Waiting

GEET KI FAMILY AAPSE KAL MILENGI DI 😉

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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

nice concept and CS

maan is not highly educated

' think his step mom don't want him to take over his empire

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Congratulations on new story

It seems like in this story Geet will be rejecting Maan

Character Sketch

very interesting , Dev is only 23 years old but he will be the one handling business

while it seems Maan takes a back step

waiting for first chapter

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Nefret19

@Nefret19

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Congratulations on the new story:):):) Am intrigued by the concept yaar. Can't wait to read. Somehow after reading the concept & character sketch na I start feeling very sad for Maan...A lot of things I am imagining but will hold myself back...And excitedly wait to read your update:):):)