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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Dil to hai dil, dil ka aitbaar kya keeje
Aa gaya jo kisi pe pyaar kya keeje


That was my bhopu which starts automatically😆

A woman falling in love with two people at the same time..

Come to think of it even the show had the similar core concept

Ab sab log mujhe jhadende k that was a fake wedding

Anyway coming to the point... Since I'm not a fan of happily ever afters... I want her take her time... Think coz getting back to maan would also mean getting back to dev in someway or other it's going to prick her throughout her life!!

Iss update se hume ye siksha mili hai k
If we for once assume woman are weak, that doesn't always imply Men are stonger!!

Wah yaar I've become quite smart with analysis... My guruji will be so proud of me😆

So waiting for the climax wala Bomb!!

Kafi exited!


Yes!!! Honestly I always believed that the original story was supposed to be about the initial love triangle seeing as the Hoshiarpur track was supposed to go on for a lot longer, but I guess they decided to capitalise on the MG chemistry. Not that I'm complaining. They'd argue and I'd be swooning over their intensity 😆

I believe that men are a lot weaker when it comes to their emotions, would you not agree? Especially alpha type males like Maan. He has the world at his feet, apart from the woman he loves. Which makes him a lot more vulnerable and emotional than Geet, who is definitely the composed one of the two. Her rationale vs his feelings.

I love your analysis! This is what I enjoy about writing, the interaction with the readers. I live for it. Keep it coming!

Originally posted by: dalur

Thanks for the long update... what an intense part this was!!! So many questions and no answers...life is so uncertain, we don't plan things but they happen in such a way leaving is in turmoil...guilt is unbearable and never leaves us but takes away the peace from our life's...not sure if Geet is doing the right thing... though falling in love with Maan and getting attracted to him was not in her control, and if she no longer feels the connection with Dev then she should move on with Maan but what ever she does she has to keep matters transparent with Dev and shouldn't keep him in dark...


I couldn't have said it better myself, but in some ways I'd argue that it was easier for her to leave him as it was just the two of them... what would you do if there were children involved, for example? And you fall for the wrong person? Or is that even the correct term to use, is it simply the right person at the wrong time?

Dev has been overlooked in the story, as everyone is focusing on MG's battle. Maybe he's the one who came out on top, as he can move on without the complexities that MG face, albeit his brother falling for his wife... arguably, the ultimate betrayal

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

beautiful emotional update! well written! Geet loves Maan bt feels guilty 4 being so weak! she explains 2 Maan! he has no regrets! hmm hope Geet gives Maan a chance! Geet is being harsh on herself! update soon


Maybe her morals won't let her accept Maan... or maybe she'll learn to forgive herself. Either way, all shall be revealed in the final part

Originally posted by: dqno1

You know it is amazing how much I remember this story for the discussions surrounding it.

With you Zarin Mari and others and also in case of some readers who don't give anything but the obvious comments.

It is a very touchy topic and hence the praise is apt

You have presented it so beautifully.

Ek adhuri kahani jo maine apni tarah se finish karne ki koshish ki thi.

Maybe it would be better left untouched.

You took me back down memory lane.

🤗


I clearly remember the discussions this created too, hence the reason why this was the first story I re-posted. And I've enjoyed them even more this time around. Thank you, Avi, for your unwavering support and encouragement. It means more to me than I can ever express

Some things are better left untouched, and some words better left unsaid...

P.S. the name choice was purely because I was listening to the song! I have to credit Aish and SRK for that 😆

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

Part 2

About Geet, her name had given the doubt..but then his reference had me confused in the last part..
so for me the twist was not for Geet's identity but definitely for the brother's wife part..
and also, now I understand that even the memory at the sea shore was actually related to Maan and not her husband..😲
and the ocean's refusal..used in an apt way to show their past feelings of growing attractions and falling for it.





I love nature, and I think sometimes it plays a really important part in expressing certain emotions, e.g. the moonlight is always associated with romance, the rain with being free... in their case, the ocean represents the turbulence of their relationship, but also the intensity. For Geet, Dev was the calm. Maan is the storm.

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

Part 3

the conflict of the emotions and thoughts she is struggling through, I think she is confused for what pains her most that is not letting her in peace.
is it because she has hurt her husband or a person badly.
is it because her marriage is broken, meaning a relation that she built but could not keep.
or is it because she had fallen weak by following her heart's desire but by sacrificing the morals she believes in.

then she agrees that Dev will remain with her in the form of guilt but not because she loved him once or for his love for her..

As far as Maan is concerned, he cares for her, but the same cannot be said about his feelings for his brother. but he is not as confused as her..may be because earlier he did not care for other things and now he cares for her much that she is above everything else.

and their feelings for each other do not seem to be short-lived (now)..following heart's desire may not be wrong but then they should have made it clear to Dev in the beginning itself..

not sure, what they should do or not do now..may be they will be together after some time or may be never...because although the divorce has already happened, but their journey have shifted on different paths, albeit started from the same point..
his from desire to love, where he wants to see her in peace than to get her in his life.
and hers towards self discovery seeking answers for the questions..



It most certainly is confusion... after all, she was married to Dev. She gave a part of herself away to him, so it tortures her how one person can seemingly turn everything upside down... but she's more tortured because she knows she's to blame as well, and I think that's what she struggles with the most. The fact that she let herself go and succumbed to her desires. I think the three points you listed there sum up her feelings perfectly

I don't think she was in love with Dev. I think she loved the comfort and security he gave her. When Maan came along, he ignited the intensity and passion and recklessness that comes with falling in love, and she's fully aware of that. I think she may somewhat even resent Dev for not being the one to trigger those emotions in her - but then again, if Maan hadn't entered the picture then she wouldn't have left him.

I couldn't have summarised the story better myself, as you did in your last two sentences. Thank you for your input, I thoroughly enjoyed replying - as you can tell!






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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
4 - The Tide Finally Turns

Dawn had barely broken over and he was at her townhouse, knocking her door down.

"Geet! Open the door, please!

Neighbours and early morning market vendors all glanced curiously at the shabby looking man, dressed in nothing but work trousers and a loose shirt half opened.

"Young man, where are your shoes? an elderly lady asked as she placed a caring hand on Maan's shoulders, forcing him to turn around and face her.

"Have you seen the resident of this house? he asked, ignoring her question. "She's about 5'5, slender, long brown hair...?

The lady shook her head, instead offering him to join her for a cup of tea and a chance to freshen himself up at her place. He refused, and walked away leaving him alone, turning back every few seconds or so to make sure he was okay.

But Maan was far from okay, and he never would be, not until he saw Geet again.

Counting silently until three, he kicked the door down with all of his might and stormed the small living area.

"Geet! he called out, dashing to her bedroom and thrusting the door open. Her bed was unmade, no sign of a previous night's sleep.

Her window was left ajar, the view being that of the very sea that they had stood beside last night. The faint sound of the morning waves teasing the shore lapped softly in the room as the empty wardrobe door creaked with the light breeze, her empty hangers the only sign of a previous inhabitant.

"No... no... he felt all of his life being sucked out of him as he tried to grasp the reality.

Walking out of her room, willing himself not to cry, a small piece of paper tucked beneath an empty teacup caught his eye.

He walked over and pulled the paper, letting the teacup rattle slightly before staying still against the rusted table.

Maan,
I knew you would return to find me, to hold me close, kiss me once more and tell me that I am none other than yours.
But perhaps you will never understand what the past two years have done to me. You were on the other side of the mirror that I faced, and only I could see the tempest that was raging inside of me.
The only way that I could calm the tempest was to leave Dev. To do right by him, and to set him free from the shackles that I bound him to.
That was one step. The second step was to leave you.
I will always love you, in ways that you will never be able to comprehend. You let yourself believe that Dev was my first love, and it kills you inside. But it was you, Maan, and it will always be you. You made my heart race, my palms sweat, my nerves tingle with anticipation for the next time your lips would meet mine, our skins would rest against the others and our foreheads would touch, letting ourselves flow like a tidal wave in the ocean.
But my feelings for you will co exist beside my guilt. The guilt that I had to destroy one man to selfishly attain another.
If I was betrothed to Dev, it was for life. It was not until you came along and stole my heart. I broke that promise I made to him, to God, but most importantly to myself. And that is something I will never be able to break free from.
I am doing what is right by everyone, for once, and I am creating pastures new.
Perhaps, this way, the three of us will be able to live in peace.
Forever yours,
Geet.
...
Her head rested against the window of the train, letting the hot sunshine of the Italian summer kiss her skin. For once, in what felt like a lifetime, she could breathe without the tears choking her throat. She could think without her mind wandering back to the two men that she had done wrong by.

She could live, without feeling like she owed something to someone. Whether that be loyalty to Dev or her love to Maan.

A young couple came and slid in the seats opposite her, whispering in each other's ears and stealing kisses every so often.

Geet kept her face turned away from them, but she closed her eyes and let her mind drift back to the first kiss she had shared with Maan.

Grabbing her wrist, Maan spun her around so her back hit the wall. He placed both his hands on either side of her head and leaned forwards, caging her in his hold.
"Maan, what are you doing, let go, she winced at his close proximity, at the incoherence it was providing to her senses and the loud beating of her heart.
"I'm not holding you, he breathed. She could hardly think straight, not when his scent was so sinfully close to her senses, not when she could hear his own heart thrumming violently against his chest.
"You're caging me,
"Maybe you want to be caged.
Geet dared herself to look up at him then, and she watched as he began to tilt his head and come closer. The hustle and bustle of Anvesha's mehindi ritual faded into the distance all she could register was that it was him, and her, and he was about to kiss her.
She could have tilted her face away, or placed a hand against his chest and pushed him back, or even slapped him for coming so close to his brother's wife. But she didn't want to do any of those things, all she wanted was him.
He could have stopped himself. He could have moved away, or tucked a lone strand behind her ear as a pretence to mask his intentions and walked away. But he didn't want to do any of those things, all he wanted was her.
And then the inevitable happened their lips met, their hearts melted away and all right and wrong, morals and loyalty, sense and values slipped away as his hands slowly began to hold her waist and hold her to him.
It was only when the cold touch of his hands met her soft skin that she realised what was going on. She pushed him away and clucthed her chest, as if to keep her heart in place to prevent losing it to the man opposite her.
Maan glanced at her swollen lips, her flushed state and her glazed eyes and willed his feet to carry him away before he did anything else that he would regret. Not that a moment spent with her would be a regret to his heart, but his mind was all too aware of the man named Dev who had a presence in her life.
She closed her eyes, letting her head fall back against the wall as a name escaped her lips in a prohibited whisper.
Maan...'

Maan...' that same prohibited whisper escaped her lips once more, but this time she set it free. She watched his name, carried by her love, flow out of the small window and past the crowds of heads, over the grassy plains and stone cobbled streets of Sicily and finally to the water, where it carried itself away with the tides as they turned.
...
Two days later, Mumbai, India...

He opened the handwritten envelope, sent from Italy. He didn't need to open it to see whose letter it was, her handwriting was the same elegant cursive as it had always been.
Carefully opening the letter, he pulled out the yellowing piece of paper where she had bared her heart to him for the final time:

Dev,
I have finally set you free from the poison I am, from the shackles that I was binding you to because of my own sins, guilt and insecurities.
I seek your forgiveness. Not because I deserve to be forgiven, but for your own peace of mind. Forgive and forget me, it is the only way forward for all of us.
Dev, I never really told you how much I loved you. But today, as I sit beside the window, watching the last remains of the night succumb itself to the eventual crack of dawn, I realise what love really is. The love that we share, it is not with the passion and intensity that I feel for another.
Our love will allow us to breathe after being suffocated in the small box that was our marriage for so long.
I regret hurting you. I regret betraying you, and I regret breaking the very heart which gave me so much love that I will always remember and cherish it in my soul.
You are a wonderful man and you deserve so much more. I wish you all the happiness in the world and you will always be in my prayers, no matter where life takes me.
You are an eternal tide. Let the tides turn and take you where you truly belong, in a world of nothing but joy and content.
Estranged but never a stranger,
Geet.
The End.

***
A fitting ending? Did they deserve to be together, or was Geet's attempts at redemption the correct way to try and move on?

What do you think the future might hold for them, especially Dev, our unsung hero?

Whilst I have your attention, I just want to say a big thank you for the warm welcome back I've received, but most importantly, your interest and discussions to this story. Interacting with you all is what I love about posting on here once more, so thank you once again - it really does mean a lot.

Keep your eyes peeled for more blasts from the past from me 😆 I have a really cutesy one shot to share, and a slightly mysterious/supernatural short story. It has a happy ending though, I promise (ish)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
Perfect ending!!!! Geet has done the right thing... the way you relate nature and emotions of characters is ultimate👏..I guess you are a nature lover..😃
No body should be in Geet's place...these emotions and situations are so complicated, it's difficult to differentiate the right and wrong...you write with such depth it keeps us thinking... Geet's letters are heart touching! Hope she will be able to live in peace now...

Though this a story story it feels as though I've been reading it since long time and the complex emotions in it make the journey seem long...
Thank you for this thoughtful Story! U r a talented writer...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
What about Dev the guy was backstabbed by both the people whom he trusted and loved with all his heart!!
Sorry bol k wo tho chaligayi... And that was right too but wonder how long would it take for him to get over the betrayal!!

For some odd reason i feel no empathy for maan or geet for that matter!

The end was perfect

But how perfect was it is hat still bugs me..


Loved the story❤️
Do keep writing😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
the lyrics of this song coming to my mind..

Aarzoo-o-ne har kisi dil ko dard baante hai
Kitne ghayal hai, kitne bismil hai
Aye dil-e-naadan..
Aye dil-e-naadan...


will comment soon...:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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terrific update! lovely end! Maan looks 4 Geet bt she has already left! I understand her perspective! her guilt will never let her live in peace! she sends Dev a letter and apologises!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Hi l
First time reason ur story ...must say it's different and wonderful ..though I don't digest sad ending for maneet but to this story this ending seems perfect at least abhi ke liye..later on may be dev gets his share of happiness and then reunite maneet(see my heart only goes for maneet )..
Thanks for nice story ..liked it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Loved the story
Different take on relations.
Sometimes right and wrong gets blurred
But Geet's guilt is bigger.
Dev is betrayed by his wife and brother.
Keep writing.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
.. and my hopeful heart is still not accepting it 😆

it seems a shame not to give an alt ending..

may i make a thread for it?

jaldi response dena. I am going on vaca-tion-shun-shun 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: -jaanleva-


I clearly remember the discussions this created too, hence the reason why this was the first story I re-posted. And I've enjoyed them even more this time around. Thank you, Avi, for your unwavering support and encouragement. It means more to me than I can ever express

Some things are better left untouched, and some words better left unsaid...

P.S. the name choice was purely because I was listening to the song! I have to credit Aish and SRK for that😆

[DIV]


Oops I did not realise that you had already responded 😃
What support 😲
I love good writing so I enjoy your work!
no support needed when you can stand on your own 👍🏼

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