Mortal Promises - Maaneet FF MG Maan Geet!#T1*|[T6 opened]

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@Endgame

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Aww nice twist they are married.. She was too young and maan was too attracted to her so he pushed her away but that way he hurted her very much now he regretting it

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@jssood

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

very good

their misunderstanding long ni gayee

maan told his fear and love to geet

she hurt deeply by his behaviour

both accept their childhood relation

waiting for next

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

I love the name of this story

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Dadima doing best for maaneet
so that they can talk alone
ooo what just happened...
maan naked ...who cares he happy to see geet
even said he missed her
lovely update

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deep002

@deep002

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Congrats for new story, awesome updates

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Double update dadi told geet that maan will be dropping her to college everyday geet was feeling sleepy but she had to wait for maan and she missed him she went to his room while waiting slept on his bed maan unaware came out half naked geet saw his state maan shock to see her he fell on her fully naked geet started her rant of apology maan lost in her lips kissed her expressing his feelings geet poured her anger maan realize how much he hurt her but when geet saw tears in his eyes he pushed her put as he didn't want to see his vulnerability maan came to geets room both ate silently discussed Abt her schedule maan pulled geet in his arms apologized to her shockingly both are married as geet demand him but geet was angry as maan forgot his promise never to leave her maan made her understand that his feelings for her was so strong that it was harm her and she was too small to understand it maans mom wanted maan to distance him from geet so that she can concentrate on her studies even maan felt that was right but he didn't realize how much he had hurt his jaan in the process geet could see his agony in his eyes now let's see what punishment does maans mishty gives him

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

chap 3 - beautiful update! excellently written! Maan goes 2 see Geet have dinner with her! finally they talk abt her schedule. Maaneet talk! wow they r married! she confronts Maan! her anger is justified! Maan explains y he distanced himself from her! bt he shld have told her! she realises he is pain! he is willing to bear any punishment! can we get an update today?

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Thanks a Lot to you all, very much 🤗.
IF is not letting me reply comments 😭
I will post next update once I am free 😊
But should i really continue? Since it's my first attempt to write something so let me know. Also do add me on your buddy list if you feel so ❤️

Note: Do check my new Vm on Maaneet on the song "Mann Mayal" & others at youtube, I have made a separate post on that with links. :)

Edited by Iptida - 8 years ago