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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Chap 5 - thanks 4 another update! marvelous update, superbly written! wen will they talk properly n sort out all issues! Maan refrains frm calling her Mishty! she is sad! she feels he has moved on! Geet's feelings well portrayed! Geet is a very emotional person! dadi tells Geet abt Sameera's arrival! Oh no hope Sam is gng 2 come between Maaneet! Geet nw has to shift to the room near Maan's! Geet sad as she is trying 2 avoid Maan! update soon! will they ever sort of this mu???

Edited by khwaishfan - 8 years ago

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@jssood

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

oh dear yeh mis understanding kab khatam hogee

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hira2010

@hira2010

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Opps dono pagal gusey waley
Yeh geet sharath ulti par gye
Maan ka ego hurt Howa
They ignored each other
Uff attitude had Hai
Ek sath atey jatey Hai par bath nahi Karti

Yar jis speed say update mil rahi Dil greedy hora Hai
Waiting for more
Thanks for update fastly

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hira2010

@hira2010

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Part 5

Opss one more thanks dear
Really super update
Geet had fear in her heart
That she was is not perfect
Her monologue is hurtful 14 year old girl she was quiet brave for me
Made her mind strong diverted her attention to study
Here maan unaware about her fear
Sam came llo love story starts hoi villan agye

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deep002

@deep002

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Beautiful update dear, loved it. ...

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Keepdreaming > Thank you so much dear for all your comments, made my day. Keep giving me the feedback . i need them.
khwaishfan > Thanks for all your support from the beginning, you boosted the courage of a lazy new /rookie writer like me. And it makes me happy to know that so many Maaneetians are still active.
REEKHA > Thank you so much. I updated 2 more, stay tuned and let me know if i can improve anything.
nakh5683 > You girl is a complete sweetie pie, thanks for your wonderful comments.❤️
priyankadwivedi > Thanks for your comment. No they got married sectretly. Maan married geet kyun ki usne zid kiya tha, and woh dono ek dusre se pyaar karte theyy, this part will be revealed later. Stay tuned.
jssood > hehe, thoda theher jao, avi toh bas MU shuru huwi hain, aage isse bhi vayankar update hain 😆 thanks for your comments.
Roopaamrutha > geet ne kyun aisa kiya ye update 5 mein uski monologue mein hain, in short mein kahu toh bechari kamli ho gayi hain maan se inte dino baad milke aur phir maan ne jo kiya 😉😉😉 iss wajah se bechari ki dimag thik se kaam nahi kar raha. Sameera hehe! Next updates mein haddio wali kabab banne wali hain 😆 Thanks a lot for your wonderful comments.

hira2010 > hahaha, dono hi pagal hain. Msk ka attitude se sadme mein bechari geet v waisi hi ban gai. Waise uski andar hi andar halat bohot kharab hain. Thank you for your comment. And I am very lazy so just updating fast while i stil have the enthusiasm 😊

deep002 > Thanks a lot dear. Stay tuned.

So, do tell me guys Maaneet vibe aa rahi hain ki nahi? Lovey dovey scenes will come a little later as story progresses. And I am having more stories in my head! I am not a very patient person so I kinda don't read a lot, unless it's necessary( study 😭) And I keep myself from Writing as far as i can. But after I started writing this FF i am feeling good bacause I am having so many story ideas lol.
God knows I have typed so much after like ages and never typed so much at once in my life cause I typed almost 7000 words in one go and that took 7 hours. lol! If you have any suggestions do give i will try to improve.
Good night all. ❤️

Edited by Iptida - 8 years ago

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Roopaamrutha
Just one word Wooowewww... Read all updates in one go... omg i dont think that you are new writer... Your writing depicts that you are well experienced...
Congrats dear and welcome back...
Maan and geet married long ago... But he kept distance just not to disturb her... lekin yeh baath geet ko samajh nahin aaya... loved maan to the core... wah he is soo romantic... geet ne sab kuch bigaad diya yaar... uska side bhi correct hain... maan ko us time par geet ko samjhana chahiye tho geet jaroor samajh jayegi lekin ab kya hoga maan ka... two were equally suffered yaar.. jaldi milado... lol maan bahuth besharam hogaya... geet is soo funny... slip of tongue lollzz.. yeh ff hain ya ss... ??? next part jaldi likho... waiting... 😃😃

hey thanks a lot, And am absolutely new. I am really glad that you liked my writing :) That just encouraged me more. Stay tuned. 😊
I can't promise anything unique par thoda bohot jitna bhi hoga I hope you will like it. 😊

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sanum23

@sanum23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

nice story

maan marry hr secretly at age of 19 and shewas just 14

and he made distances between them bz he can't control him self after marriage

geey came after 5 year's and complain to him y he didn't contact to hr

aftet rodana manana both said sorry but again start their argument and mu each othrr double meanings word's

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Varthyadi000

@varthyadi000

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Very nice update read it all in one go .maan and geet are married secrectly and geet is angry on maan maan has taken geet words in opposite way and he is angry on geet

Waiting for next part