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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#261

intriguing update! well written! thanks 4 da the pm! sorry 4 late likes n comments! Who is after Geet? Thank God Maan came on time! Geet was so scared! Sam sees Maan's care n concern! bt she feels its just friendship! Sam is js lying 2 herself! Loved hw Maan assures n consoles Geet! Maan awed seeing Geet asks Sam if she is fine! Y did Geet nt tell Maan tht the man had a gun?? update asap

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: Iptida
How are you all? So far how much are you enjoying this story lemme know!
Note : unable to comment, My presentation over finally!
Will try to update today, if not today then tomorrow.
updated my 2nd story click here to check it out >> PREDESTINED <<

Need to increase readers, any tips ?

thanks for the note! I am well thanks! really enjoying the story! shall wait 4 next!

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
intriguing update! well written! thanks 4 da the pm! sorry 4 late likes n comments! Who is after Geet? Thank God Maan came on time! Geet was so scared! Sam sees Maan's care n concern! bt she feels its just friendship! Sam is js lying 2 herself! Loved hw Maan assures n consoles Geet! Maan awed seeing Geet asks Sam if she is fine! Y did Geet nt tell Maan tht the man had a gun?? update asap

Hey thanks for your response. How are you?
Basically he is just an idiot stalker, He used to see Geet from last few days and so he is just attracted to her. .
Geet didn't tell Maan because she didn't wanna make maan more worried. Think from Geet's perspective, she will tell everything once the time is right. And she was scared as well by all the trauma.
But after reaching home she will tell whole khurana khandan everything. Good news is some more romantic updates are due. 😆😉

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Taahir

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Posted: 8 years ago

#264

Awesome just Fantastic Part

This stranger claims to be a Don in the area where Geet's college is but why is he after her is it just because she is a girl and alone or does he have some other reason

I'm glad that Maan insisted on Geet learning self defense in times when a girl needs to defend herself at least she has some skill and good that Geet is fast using her defense and running away

wow Sameera was shocked at seeing Maan's caring side for Geet she had always just known them to be friends but the actions of Maan told Sameera a different tale and I'm sure she is jealous now just hope she does not cause any problems

Daadima and Madhu both shocked at Geet , Maan and Sameera

waiting eagerly now to see what Maan tells them

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Khushibloom

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Posted: 8 years ago

#265

Beautiful update.
Few geet had a narrow escape all thanks to maan for teaching her self defence.
This proves anything learned would never go waste .
Aww maan was hell scared and worried just seeing geet in that state i wonder how would he react once he knows the whole scene.
And sameera she is so self centered even seeing geet's state she was not much concerned all that mattered her was maaneet's closeness.

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Khushibloom

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Posted: 8 years ago

#266

Thanks for the pm dear
Precap is quite interesting
Would be waiting for next part 😊

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: Iptida

Hey thanks for your response. How are you?
Basically he is just an idiot stalker, He used to see Geet from last few days and so he is just attracted to her. .
Geet didn't tell Maan because she didn't wanna make maan more worried. Think from Geet's perspective, she will tell everything once the time is right. And she was scared as well by all the trauma.
But after reaching home she will tell whole khurana khandan everything. Good news is some more romantic updates are due. 😆😉

hi thanks 4 the reply 2 comments! I am well n u? thanks 4 the clarifications! looking forward 2 the updates! hope u r well 😊