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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 5

Maan is the person that showered Geet with love , care and affection he is that very person that fulfilled her wishes and yet he is the same person that neglected her made her believe she was not good enough she was torn and had to become strong still holding her love for Maan well hidden though and I think its just about the belonging the want the crave and Maan is the only person that can wash all Geet's insecurities , confusion and pain away
its not easy fighting between one's mind and heart its always a complex battle and Geet herself is going through this yet she knows Maan loves her but she wants that warmth back she wants him to speak to her tell her he is there never going to abandon her
Sameera seems like a new entry with new problems for Maaneet
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapters 6 & 7

Sameera seems like a friendly and nice person , however Geet too enjoyed her time with everyone but the moment she saw Sameera close to Maan I suppose its natural to feel that way to burn with jealousy as her Maan does not talk to her but he is close to Sameera
Geet had no idea that Maan enjoyed her talks she was once again smiling he enjoyed having her around him
Maan takes the chance once again to pull Geet into the room to find out why she is upset but instead he received the words where Geet tells him she forgives and they should forget about everything she indicated to their young marriage too and maybe that was wrong on her part
Maan truly loves her he has been telling her this and now breaking him like this I just feel she is wrong
yes she too have her insecurities but that does not mean each time a hurdle comes forth she will want them to forget their marriage
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapters 8 - 10

Daadima has known that something was wrong between Maan and Geet she guessed that perhaps they had a fight and that's the reason for Maan's disturb state but she got another shock seeing his room though Maan lied and said its about business stress Daadima felt she will speak to him about Geet later

Sameera on the other hand remembered a year ago how Maan had hugged her told her he misses her and said he loves Misty well Maan was intoxicated which again there is no fault to him as he thought he with Geet his love his wifey but instead it was Sameera and she been his friend felt happy that Maan loves her now again when he is hurting because of Geet he decides to drink and again Sameera finds him talking so she is confident that Maan loves her but is hiding under the friendship tag

Geet on the other hand has been broken at the fact that she has hurt Maan so much and she tried but he always just ignored her but now seeing him drunk she tells Sameera they should leave and Geet again enters to spend some alone time with the man she loves yes been close to him kissing him adoring him has made her restlessness fade but now Geet too was adamant that she will not allow any misunderstandings to come between them she too knows that she cannot lose her love

Geet the next day tries again to help Maan and tries speaking to him but when she sees she is not successful she grabs at his hands and drags him into her room well she is Mrs MSK
Maan loves Geet but he is hurt so when she says she wants everything sorted she does not want more misunderstanding between them Maan thinks that she perhaps feel disappointed at his state but he was proven wrong because both love each other both want to be together yet they both are hurting and its only their love their closeness that can heal each other

precap is making me curious is Daadima speaking about Maaneet's fight or their passion
eagerly waiting for the next chapter
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Iptida



My pleasure,😊 And i will update soon. May be tonight if not then tomorrow.

ahh thought there wld be no villain in Maaneet's Love story! will b waiting! any possibility of you writing another story as well?
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Chapters 8 - 10

Daadima has known that something was wrong between Maan and Geet she guessed that perhaps they had a fight and that's the reason for Maan's disturb state but she got another shock seeing his room though Maan lied and said its about business stress Daadima felt she will speak to him about Geet later

Sameera on the other hand remembered a year ago how Maan had hugged her told her he misses her and said he loves Misty well Maan was intoxicated which again there is no fault to him as he thought he with Geet his love his wifey but instead it was Sameera and she been his friend felt happy that Maan loves her now again when he is hurting because of Geet he decides to drink and again Sameera finds him talking so she is confident that Maan loves her but is hiding under the friendship tag

Geet on the other hand has been broken at the fact that she has hurt Maan so much and she tried but he always just ignored her but now seeing him drunk she tells Sameera they should leave and Geet again enters to spend some alone time with the man she loves yes been close to him kissing him adoring him has made her restlessness fade but now Geet too was adamant that she will not allow any misunderstandings to come between them she too knows that she cannot lose her love

Geet the next day tries again to help Maan and tries speaking to him but when she sees she is not successful she grabs at his hands and drags him into her room well she is Mrs MSK
Maan loves Geet but he is hurt so when she says she wants everything sorted she does not want more misunderstanding between them Maan thinks that she perhaps feel disappointed at his state but he was proven wrong because both love each other both want to be together yet they both are hurting and its only their love their closeness that can heal each other

precap is making me curious is Daadima speaking about Maaneet's fight or their passion
eagerly waiting for the next chapter



Dear, wow thanks for all your comments and beautiful summerization. I am overwhelmed by your sweet comments. You grasped the story very nicely. Thank you for reading. Do tell me did you like it or not and I hope am able to give enough maaneet vibe. When They used to fight they fought very ugly and then when they sorted out everything that was also too much sweet.
Next chapter is going to be a bit erotic as well, lol. their passion seems to be never ending.
I will update likely at today morning that means within 12 hours! Today(don't know your time zone) i couldn't get much of time.
Stay tuned and if you want pms with updates then do add me into your buddy list.
Edited by Iptida - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

ahh thought there wld be no villain in Maaneet's Love story! will b waiting! any possibility of you writing another story as well?


Villain ke bina story pani kaam chaaaye ho jayegi na. 😆 Aur waise this story suddenly came into my mind so i started writing this and in real life too we often see love triangles. I can't promise anything different but we have not yet touched the main plot of my story properly, Right now we are only on a basic idea about maaneet's relation and the basic background. I myself don't know how i will end up unfolding the entire plot. Anyway! That being said I can't thank you enough cause you were the first one to respond and have shown faith into a novice writer. 😊

Coming back to other stories, While writing this story I have discovered that when we write stories we tend to build different plot ideas, So , I have a few plots in my mind as well lol. But as i have stated before too i am very lazy and this is the first time I am writing something so I want this story to get a little further and then I would love to write another one which one is currently occupied into my mind as well. And I also got to know how freaking descriptive of a writer I am, i can write in brief as well but being meticulous by nature i myself quite do not enjoy such and relate to that kind of story. So if this story gets enough hype and I feel I am worth writing another one then only i will start. And that means we are talking about a well amount of time. And i don't wanna leave anything unfinished.

Again i did it! Huge reply lol!😆🤣


Edited by Iptida - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
thanks for the reply! I would not want you to leave this or any story incomplete! shall wait for you 2 start a new one! hope u do as you are a terrific writer! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

thanks for the reply! I would not want you to leave this or any story incomplete! shall wait for you 2 start a new one! hope u do as you are a terrific writer! 😊


Baas baas main hawa mein udne lagi hoon haha! Thanks and i will hopefully!😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
ok...will b waiting...pls try n update today
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Posted: 8 years ago
Still waiting for the update , hope it will be today

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