Mortal Promises - Maaneet FF MG Maan Geet!#T1*|[T6 opened]

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Khushibloom

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Posted: 8 years ago

#161

Thanks for the pm dear
Would be waiting for next part.

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#162

thanks 4 the character pics! already waiting 4 next

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: mayapari
Wow
Finally
Hopefully she doesn't do anything in embrassment
Maan n geet
Finally together
They ll share some lovey dovey moments hopefully
N no more misunderstandings pls
I feel some kind of devil plot is going in ur mind
The precap is a bit scary n confusing
Waiting for next

You are right about the evil plot going on! But unintentional evil! 😆

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Congrats on ur promotion as a groupie! thanks 4 da pm! extremely sorry 4 late likes n comments! phenomenal sizzling update! superbly written! Maan teases her! Geet takes the initiative! Loved this bold Geet! Maan surprised! she confesses! hot passionate Maaneet! they cannot get enough of each other! at least he knows she loves him! Hope Sameera doesn't create any problems! interesting precap! update asap😊👏⭐️

Hey thank you so much, and please do not apologize I know you might be busy a bit and whenever you will have time you will definitely share your views I know that much. 😊❤️
And Sameera will create problems very soon!
ha ha and real update is not as scary as precap rather quite the opposite.
Thanks for your time and comments and yes I updated the CS immediately IF gave me permission for posting hyperlinks. 😊

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Taahir

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Posted: 8 years ago

#165

Congratulations on new story

Character Sketch is fabulous

Part 1

Wow such a Brilliant start

Maan and Geet have been childhood friends however through their years of growing Maan decided to distance himself from Geet as he believed it was for her own good now after 5 years Geet returns and will start college too

she is nervous about meeting Maan while he has been clued to the cameras to see her the next morning he makes an attempt to talk to her grabbing at her and bring her close to him

Maan feels Geet has forgotten the past while Geet too feels Maan would have forgotten the past promises and that he may have a girlfriend too

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: taahir004
Congratulations on new story

Character Sketch is fabulous

Part 1

Wow such a Brilliant start

Maan and Geet have been childhood friends however through their years of growing Maan decided to distance himself from Geet as he believed it was for her own good now after 5 years Geet returns and will start college too
she is nervous about meeting Maan while he has been clued to the cameras to see her the next morning he makes an attempt to talk to her grabbing at her and bring her close to him
Maan feels Geet has forgotten the past while Geet too feels Maan would have forgotten the past promises and that he may have a girlfriend too

Thank you sooo much, And welcome to this story. Please let me know your feedback if you tend to read all the parts and let me know the progress or share any tips to improve further!
I am glad that you liked it so far! 😊

Edited by Iptida - 8 years ago

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Taahir

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Chapter 1 & 2

Daddima wants Maan and Geet to be comfortable with each other so she send Geet to Maan's room so they can discuss her schedules but to Geet's surprise Maan was not in his room bringing her tired eyes to rest she decides to rest on his bed and awakens when Maan is in the room unaware that Geet is there , no knowing how to handle his embrassed situation he leaps at Geet pinning her to the bed

Geet however is angry and hurt with Maan and she blurts out the distance that he created between but later he comes to her room and discuss the matter explains her that his mother he would be troubling Geet and pressurizing her while she would be distracted from studies so he had no idea but to distance himself from her

though it seems Geet understands him yet she is still hurt and angry

I loved how Maan tells her that she is his wifey that's so cool , he is so comfortable with her explaining his inner feelings and the way he always brings Geet close to him tells that he truly loves and adores her

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: Iptida

Hey thank you so much, and please do not apologize I know you might be busy a bit and whenever you will have time you will definitely share your views I know that much. 😊❤️
And Sameera will create problems very soon!
ha ha and real update is not as scary as precap rather quite the opposite.
Thanks for your time and comments and yes I updated the CS immediately IF gave me permission for posting hyperlinks. 😊

you are welcome! thanks 4 sharing ur story with us! 😊 oh no...this Sam😡 update asap

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

you are welcome! thanks 4 sharing ur story with us! 😊 oh no...this Sam😡 update asap

My pleasure,😊 And i will update soon. May be tonight if not then tomorrow.

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Taahir

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Posted: 8 years ago

#170

Part 4

Indeed it was an Emotional Turmoil , both loves each other no doubt but its also overwhelming for Geet as this is after 5 years she been this close to Maan , indeed she enjoys his closeness but she too wants him to understand her his neglect on her has caused her innocent heart pain and turmoil and all she wanted was Maan to tell her that he is now standing by her side he will never falter again but then he took her words differently and again there is no fault to him

making matters more mashed up Geet says Dev has told her how the girls are in abundance now surely a man would take this as an accusation and distance himself from her though he loves her

Maan now is also angry and hurt by her words and its not someone new that happens between couples misunderstandings always arises its now how both Maan and Geet will resolve their issues and start to understand each other

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