MG SS - Sunrays! Updated Chapter Two Page 5! - Page 3

Created

Last reply

Replies

57

Views

4.5k

Users

14

Likes

110

Frequent Posters

turbulence thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago
#21
Updating, please have patience! Update is almost ready!
turbulence thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago
#22
Chapter Two

Friday morning 8:00 am!

Dressed in a mohair sweater and electric yellow pant, get was moving out of the drawing room. She had the first lecture at 8:30 and wanted to reach on time.


Quickly reaching the big drawing room she stood in front of a huge garlanded photo of her father, Squadron leader Mohinder Handa. Joining both hands, she bowed low in reverence. It was 15 years since her father left during the indo-pakistan war of 1994. Back then, she was barely three years old. She missed her dad terribly, having very few people to make up for the big loss.


Having prayed to her father, she went to the dining table and picked up her two tiffins. One for breakfast and other for the lunch break. She was stuffing them in her bag when she heard a soft, male voice behind her. She turned and came face to face with Randeep Kapoor, her late father's best friend and now her mom's second husband. Rano had married her husband's friend at Daarji's insistence.



"Wish you a very happy birthday, Geet beta!" Randeep wished her with a big smile on his face. Today, 29th december, Geet had begun the 18th year of her life.



"Thank you uncle." Geet reciprocated very formally and politely excusing herself, exited to enter her car. Randeep stood there as the car pulled out of the driveway, looking at his daughter. Alas! She had not accepted him as her father.
Mohinder's death had come as a big setback for Geet, for whom her Dad was everything.



Sighing in defeat, Mr. Kapoor stood there when he felt a soft hand on his shoulder. Turning around, he saw his wife Rano, assuring him with a soft blink of her eyes.



"Maine bahot koshish ki Rano. Par shayad geet mujhe kabhi Papa kehkar nahi pukaregi. Lagta ab mujhe iski umeed bhi chhod deni hogi." Randeep unburdened his heart in front of Geet's mom.



"Nahi Randeep! Geet abhi bachhi hai. Usey kuch theek se pata bhi nahi thaa. Jo kuch bhi hua, usme aap ka koi kasoor nahi hai. Ye sab to babaji ki marzi thi. Ab mohinder aur humara saath itna hi likha thaa. Usme koi kya kar sakta hai?
Aur phir main aur Daarji dodo jaante hain, ye parivaar kitna khali ho gaya thaa. Par jab aap is ghar me aaye, tab Daarji ko unka beta mil gaya. Aur mujhe meri beti ke liye ek achha pita. Nahi to humare saare relatives, isi baat ka faayda lekar, mujhe aur Daarji ko sadak par le aate. Phir itni saari property aur meri bachhi ke future ka kya hota?




"Rano theek keh rahi puttar." Daarji joined them. "Raha sawaal geet ka, aaj nahi to kal, wo ye baat zaroor samajh legi. Mujhe bahot khushi hai ki aap logo ne geet par kabhi koi sakhti nahi ki. Aise maamlo mein hum logo ko hi usey samajhna hoga. Usey hum sab ki bahot zaroorat hai." Poor old man finished with a weary sigh.




Meanwhile, in the college:

After the driver left, geet climbed up the porch steps and started walking towards their classroom. Reaching there, she found the teacher hadn't arrived yet. So she sat down on her place, waiting for the bell to ring. There was a strange emptiness in her hazel orbs. Her face was downcast, unshed tears were swimming in her eyes. Like every year, today she was missing her dad very much. Biting her lips to control her pain, she opened her bag to take the books. Just then, she felt a weight beside herself.



Lifting her head, she smiled happily looking at the intruder. It was her dear friend Maan, who came with a gift as usual.



"Happy Birthday Mishti. Ye lo tumhara gift, hum sab ki taraf se!" Maan placed a large box in front of her. Sorrows long forgotten, geet hugged him happily as one by one adi, pinky, pari, meera and yash too descended to give their smaller presents. Meera had even got a cute cake for geet.


Overwhelmed with her friends' love geet was really happy. Just then the teacher came and class began. For full 50 minutes, nobody uttered a word. Then the bell rang for lunch break. Geet and gang quickly left for the canteen, where they would eat the cake and celebrate the special day.



Maan noticed geet's somewhat pale face and guessed she was upset. He cleared his throat and holding her in his big arms, asked softly, "Kya hua mishti, aaj bhi tum thodi si udaas ho. Kapoor uncle ne phir tumhe wish kiya hoga, hai na?" Maan lay his question carefully. The whole group knew geet had never accepted Randeep taking her father's place.



"Hmmm!!!!! Aaj unhone wish kiya thaa mujhe. But you guys know it, main unko apne dad nahi maan sakti. Main Mr. Mohinder Handa ki beti hoon. Mera naam Geet Handa hai, Geet kapoor nahi. Wo sirf meri mom ke pati hain, aur mere liye mere papa ke dost. That's it." Geet finished heavily. Meera then tried to say something, but Adi silenced her showing his hand. All of them knew Geet would bite their heads off if they said anything to support Mr. Kapoor.




This was the main gist of little Geet Handa's life. A soft natured bubbly girl, she lost her father at a very tender age. His friend tried his level best to fill the void, but she could never accept the poor replacement. Despite having everything, Geet badly craved one thing. Her father's love, his warmth. Losing him was a huge shock for her, something she knew she might never be able to rid herself off.



So friends, here is chapter two. Please read carefully, press likes and comment. I have spent almost three hours on this. Don't make me feel my hard work was wasted. Can i expect comments, please?



Edited by turbulence - 7 years ago
taahir004 thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
#23
Thank you will be waiting
nakh5683 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago
#24
Awesome and interesting prologue lived it poor geet went through so much maan came back to see his mishty his love broken and shattered he came to know how geet blindly trusted Vikram whom she treated as her friend only he took her dignity and made her pregnant maan didn't want to abort baby but doctor advised in order to bring geet out of trauma aborting the baby is the only option and maan had no choice he only wanted his mishty happiness nothing else
nakh5683 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago
#25
Awesome update geet dad left them during Indo pak war though rano married her husband friend on darji insistence but geet could never accept him as her father he was sad as no matter how hard he tried geet never called him dad geet was gloomy and sad on her special day missing her father but the moment she saw maan her sadness vanished as he wished her giving her gifts he again tried to make her accept Rajeev as her father but for geet mohindar handa is her father and always will be
MariumChoudhary thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
#26
Prologue is written really Beautifully and Concept is well enough to catch attention of reader's 👏

It's Beautifully written...

I'm waiting to read and know more about them 😊

Where is that culprit who wronged Geet aren't they punishing him or anything???

Well let's see what further updates held for us to know
khwaishfan thumbnail
Visit Streak 1000 Thumbnail Visit Streak 750 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 7 years ago
#27
thanks 4 updating! nice update, well written! feeling 4 Geet! she misses her dad and its her bday! Geet refuses 2 accept Rajeev as her dad! glad Maan manages to cheer her up! update soon
Vaidhumom thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 7 years ago
#28
Bookmarking here. Its a busy month for me and Will read and comment one by one.
Prologue and CS are really interesting. 👏Will read the chapters and comment soon.
anu5 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago
#29
Nice update dear
Liked it !!
It's was Geet's birthday. Geet was missing her late father's presence in her life and was yearning for her father's love and warmth. I believe Mr. Kapoor loves Geet like his daughter and wants to fill her father's void in her life but alas Geet considers him to her mother's second husband and her father's friend. Glad that her friends uplifted her mood by cheering her and by celebrating her birthday. Geet seems to be stubborn with her demeanor and couldnt acknowledge Mr. Kapoor's love for her.
Thanks for updating !
:))
taahir004 thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
#30
Eagerly waiting for next part please

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: SillySoni

8 months ago

Winter wedding / Maaneet FF • Chapter 3 page 4 • 2/1/25 Winter wedding / Maaneet FF • Chapter 3 page 4 • 2/1/25

This story is about teenage Maan and Geet who met at a marriage. Whoever is interested in reading pls responds to this post. Ignore if not...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme

2 years ago

MG FF-Enchanted #2 - Updated Chapter 55 - link pg 140 may 31 MG FF-Enchanted #2 - Updated Chapter 55 - link pg 140 may 31

ENCHANTED - THREAD 2 SUMMARY - Thanks all for completing thread1

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme

2 years ago

MG FF- Silent Whisper- Updated Part 27, Pg 105, July 31

Overview Two people completely poles apart in career, status and style. One is the epitome of elegant, the other epitome of simplistic. One is...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: SillySoni

1 years ago

Dolent - Maaneet FF - Chapter 17 page 25 - 31/12/24 Dolent - Maaneet FF - Chapter 17 page 25 - 31/12/24

Hi, as the title suggests this story is going to be full of sorrow, but because it's my FF there will be unconditional love as well Whoever...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme

1 years ago

Maaneet FF- Love Echoes Beyond Dimensions -Chapter 2 Pg 10 Jun 25

Dear All, No, no no... No idea of starting it in near future. Just wanted to book this title as I have an overall idea of the story. These days...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".